| "Lord of War" Reviews/Comments [ 229 ] |
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Title: AHHH!!!!
Reviewed By: tasukis_gecko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 19:37 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was an awesome chapter, but man ending it there ;_;. Update SOON!
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Reviewed By: Codan On: March 08, 2006 14:44 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You cannot possibly leave it there! You're not just mean you are PURE EVIL!!!!!!!!! Great Chapter, Heero is so sweet to sally ^^
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Reviewed By: shevaleon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 14:06 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love it but if you make Duo sleep with that……….trash, I'm sooooo going to haunt you in your dreams!!! ^o^ Beware!!! I'm really scary. XD Hugs, Anya
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Title: Wonderful like always
Reviewed By: Yaoilovertash [MediaMiner Member] On: March 08, 2006 12:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the twist at the end but I truly hope that Duo finds a way to escape this man. I just love the attraction growing between Duo and Heero. I'm counting the chapters until they snap and make love or something. I truly adore this story, can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: YAOIFANGUY06 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 14:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great piece you are writing, I can't wait to see what happens between Hee-chan and Duo-kun, anyways keep writing and update soon...oh stupid question, but what is a beta reader anyways?
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Reviewed By: lady dea On: January 28, 2006 23:02 EST
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like i said before i love it ^.^ please get the next chappy out soon ;.; pwettey pwease?? i'll even be your beta if it'll speed up the process. and i found like 3 typos in this chappy so yeah i was gonna sk what happened to the beta check up. anyways if you want me to do the beta email me lady_dea_108@yahoo.com ^.^ thanx much and AWSOME story!!! *huggle* ja! Dea
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Title: great
Reviewed By: Yaoilovertash [MediaMiner Member] On: January 28, 2006 13:54 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, just wanted to say that I love your story so far and I can't wait until you continue it. Also, I wish to be your beta reader, my email address is Angeltashlv@aol.com, so you can email me anytime and I'll be honored to be your beta reader. I can't wait to read more, I just like how Duo and Heero's relationship is blossoming, a little slowly for my tastes but I'm hoping there will be come fluff\lime later. Keep up the good work, I'll be checking now and then to see more interesting chapters.
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Reviewed By: duoqueen02 On: January 27, 2006 12:32 EST
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wow....lots of things happened in heero's life. update again soon, so we can learn more about duo's growing feelings for heero and heero's past! (what did heero do to get primitivus off his back?)
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Title: Good stuff!
Reviewed By: Pyrzm not signed in On: January 27, 2006 10:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this story. You've got really good characterization skills! I'm intrigued and anxious to see Heero and Duo get closer. One thing that jars sometimes though, is the dialogue. You've got adult men living in something like ancient Rome (which you've set up really well, btw) but they talk like high school girls at times. Doesn't really fit with the setting. Other than that, though, it's a nicely described and detailed story so far!
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Reviewed By: Nita-sama nsi On: January 27, 2006 09:06 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
S'OKAY, i'm sure your work will still be interesting. just like it is now. update soon!!!
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Reviewed By: Precognition74 On: January 27, 2006 07:46 EST
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i really wish to see Duo's fighting skills at play. T and Q aqre just SO CUTE together!!! * squeals like a fan girl* and grammer mistakes here and there, not very obvious, and few in number. but yeah, i think a beta would be good. well, good luck in finding one.
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Reviewed By: tasukis_gecko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2006 19:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved this chapter! It almost made me late for work....it's a good thing my speedometer doesn't work ^_^. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Lady Dea On: January 18, 2006 17:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! awsome story and i do love all the latin names ^.^ hehe keep up the good work hopefully the next chapter will be out soon =D Dea
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Reviewed By: sassi On: January 18, 2006 14:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! You described everything so plastic, that i can imagine walking with duo through loria. Please go on writing.
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Reviewed By: YAOIFANGUY06 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2006 12:35 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I almost thought you had quit updating, but I am glad that you haven't. The first three chapters were great and I hope that the fourth is just as great. Keep updating Adam
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