| "Lord of War" Reviews/Comments [ 229 ] |
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Reviewed By: snowdragon On: August 09, 2007 06:48 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YES!!! I've waited since FEBRUARY for more of this! Yay! Yahoo! Yeehaw! Okay, enough...nice fluffy chapter. You explained a lot. It was really sweet that they're finally starting to relax and open up with each other. Can't wait to see what's next. This story is AWESOME! My favorite line was: Heero blinked at him for a bit. "Do I have to tell you how much of a teenage girl you just sounded like, or did you figure it out yourself?" Too funny! I'm so glad you're going to update quicker next time, cuz I'm quite hooked on this story, and I check for updates EVERY DAY. So, I'll be all over the next one. You just made my day!
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Title: Love This!!
Reviewed By: Duchesscarml [MediaMiner Member] On: August 06, 2007 08:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE this story!! Please update soon!! I have to know what's next. I must!! I just feel things are going to get worse... *sigh*. Is it wrong of me to hope that the Emperor dies before his Coronation?? Or maybe, he's violently ill that night and can't DO anything??? I don't mind which one; I'm not picky. I like your writing style. Will we learn more of Duo's tribe? Will we get to see Shini's larger self? When will they tell each other how they feel? When will Heero realize what he feels? But, Heero being one of the 4 Lords, he can't marry a male, can he?? I think I'm going to cry for them... Oh. You have a knack for writing 'wonder' when you mean 'wander'... just thought I'd let you know. GREAT FIC!! Please update soon!!!!! ~Duchess~
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Title: I am running out of things to say
Reviewed By: understudy of little miss priss On: August 04, 2007 15:13 EDT
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I think I see a lynching mob forming in the distance. You might want to lock the door, but then they might shimmy up the drain pipe
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Title: please update!!!
Reviewed By: wyft [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 11:40 EDT
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PLEASE UPDATE!!PLEASE UPDATE!!PLEASE UPDATE!!PLEASE UPDATE!!PLEASE UPDATE!!PLEASE UPDATE!!PLEASE UPDATE!!PLEASE UPDATE!! can't wait to know what happens!!! This is such a marvelous fic please don't abandon it!!
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Reviewed By: wyft [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2007 04:58 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...i've read and re-read this so many times and everytime its still that good! REALLY REALLY REALLY hope and update is soon coming up! can't wait for it!! keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: snowdragon On: May 03, 2007 21:41 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, so long since the last update. Here's hoping there's more soon. You've done such a lovely job of building up a relationship between Heero and Duo, only to have the Emperor messing with poor Heero. How WILL they get him out of that mess? It's been two and a half months. More soon, pretty please???
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Title: Wow.
Reviewed By: iranad [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2007 01:06 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. So i found this story recced a couple hours ago, and while I don't normally read WIP's (because Ihate waiting for the next chapter) I read this one straight through. You have managed to make me laugh, and fume, and just hurt with this. The hurt is mostly for Heero, but for Duo and the others too, who have no choice but to watch Heero go through all this. And frankly, I'm ready to smack the damn Emperor around - A LOT. So needless to say, i will be waiting with bated breath for the next chapter, and I hope it comes out soon.
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Title: XD
Reviewed By: NightmareShinigami [MediaMiner Member] On: February 24, 2007 09:19 EST
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it was like christmas when i saw the update, i dropped everything in order to read! XD i love shinigami and and i cant wait to read what happens next! I must say it makes me feel horrible to see that heero is treated that way..... good luck writing! and with life!
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Reviewed By: gilith ramaloce [MediaMiner Member] On: February 22, 2007 19:56 EST
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yay, this was a nice birthday present for me. i don't like the emperor, no i don't! but i'm not surprised by the turn of events ^^; this was a nice chapter though. and if you would like a beta let me know!
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Reviewed By: Ju On: February 21, 2007 22:57 EST
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I was loving this fic so much. so much for a fic where one of the caracters aren´t sexualy tortured... Guess I'm kind of desapointed because of that part of the fic.
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Reviewed By: camillian On: February 21, 2007 16:52 EST
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it's been such a long time, but i'm glad to finally see an update! poor heero, i don't want to see heero violated and used like this, especially since he's not in a position to do so, but at least duo's there to help ease his loneliness and pain. update again soon!
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Reviewed By: chimeara009 On: February 20, 2007 23:00 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ohhhh this is too good!! poor Heero i really hope that Duo does something really nice in the nx chapter to make Heero feel better!! thank you for updating been waiting for it forever! yes please update soon again... already can't wait for it!
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Reviewed By: priscel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 20:40 EST
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*screams agains and glomps you* haha one more thing (wondering what I mean, see response in 1x2ml).... thank you for this wonderfully interesting Fic. -pris
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Reviewed By: shevaleon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 19:31 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! It continues!!!! I'm soo happy! but poor Hee-chan! I hope they'll find the way to defy the Emperor! Poor Duo-bear to have to endure all that! Wonder when the resquing force will strike? UPDATE SOON!! PLEASE!!! Huggles
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Reviewed By: kourutusunie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2007 18:01 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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OMG!!!!! What the @�^ just happened? Heero and the emperor? So, what does this mean? Duo and Heero can't have sex? What happens if they do? (gotta go find previous chapter.....) OMG! OMG! OMG! Confused? What's gonna happen?! Next chapter soon? I know rl must hate you, but I hope you're able to write again soon!
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