| "Lord of War" Reviews/Comments [ 229 ] |
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Title: ::jaw drop::
Reviewed By: Pyro Amedaus [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 16:43 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a patient man, really I am, I've waiting months on end for updates, but this... ... This needs to be updated. Soon. it's worth waiting for but...hot damn. This is good, well researched, your plotline fairy is alive and kicking, and I want to kiss your muse. Love it, adore it, please write more soon. Please, I'm begging.
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Title: LOVED IT
Reviewed By: michikoneko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2006 02:56 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed it PLEASE write more?
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Title: aweome
Reviewed By: NightmareShinigami On: January 16, 2006 10:40 EST
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You story is really good, i like the plot and i cant wait till the next chapter is posted! *hint hint* ^_~`
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Reviewed By: chantygal [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2006 00:09 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great chapter.........very curious about heero's past now...........can't wait to see how duo and heero's relationship unfolds.the part with low aiko.........very sad :( Loving the pace of the story and storyline.Keep writing Keep updating.
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Reviewed By: chantygal [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2005 20:12 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Amazingly good stuff. I'm so caught up in the story a didn't even realize that the was no chapter 4...............such cruelty. Please keep writing. Like that attention to detail given. Keep updating
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Reviewed By: tasukis_gecko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2005 22:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crap! you are evil! that was one sneaky chapter title! It was good though! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: precognition74 On: December 11, 2005 12:15 EST
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mm~ i love this! T and Q look too sweet together!
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Reviewed By: camillian On: December 10, 2005 04:46 EST
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i like the fic well enough so far, but i can't help but wonder if anyone from duo's tribe plan to show up at all throughout the story....hmmmm....in any case, update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Masterofyoursoul [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2005 18:41 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic, hope to see more of it soon.
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Reviewed By: kourutusunie (not logged in) On: December 05, 2005 00:22 EST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like this fic. I was in the mood for a good fantasy
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Title: interesting
Reviewed By: Darkanger [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2005 21:11 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
So far, so good. This is quite an enjoyable read. I don't really like AU (which I feel I have mentioned in every review lately because it seems there are not very many continuations being written in the last few weeks) but I am beginning to like these fantasy style stories more and more. Or maybe I just like the idea of putting Duo in a master/slave situation and seeing how his spunky personality deals with control issues. I do think your style of writing is very good. The pace is good. It doesn't feel too rushed or abrieviated which is always a sign of an immature writer. But you do need a beta. There are a few simple mistakes (for example 'beck and call' not 'beckon call'), simple things a lot of poeple can make. Overall, though, very good. I can't wait for the next chapter. ^_^ kudos
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Reviewed By: Ranmaru1 On: December 03, 2005 13:36 EST
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Very interesting story. There are a few typos and errors in it, but not much. Maybe you should think of showing the story to a beta before you post it. And I have to agree with the slave101 comment of "bend and snap". It is too modern to be used in this kind of story. Good work and I hope to see an update soon. Ranmaru
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Reviewed By: Bend and Snap On: December 03, 2005 02:28 EST
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Well, there's only a few things that I found were ...off about this story. Really, if Duo was run through with a sword, he's sure moving around as if it never happened. Sally didn't even mention it or bandage it. Then there was the Slave 101 comment; that's modern day lingo, something you have to be careful about not popping up, especially in an AU story. Not a bad story at all, just needs a little polishing.
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Reviewed By: Jbx On: December 03, 2005 00:19 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The first two chapters have been entertaining and I hope to see more. I love reading stories where Duo is a slave, especially to Heero. Kinda wonder though, if Heero is so kind and thinks the Aiko is too much trouble, why Duo just doesn't ask Heero to let him go? Of course, then Heero would have to say no *grin*. And Duo doesn't really seem to be fighting all that hard considering he's a warrior. Me thinks he protests to much LOL.
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Reviewed By: Gyrfalconne [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2005 01:02 EST
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Hn. Veeery interesting. I was a bit peeved that this was the only chapter though. If you know what's good for you, you'll update soon ne? Otherwise you risk death and destruction! Or....angry letters? maybe? Well you get the idea!
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