| "Purity 5: Phantasm" Reviews/Comments [ 753 ] |
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Reviewed By: angelevie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 13:03 CST
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I just finished your story Chronicles (I'm trying to make my way through all of your stories, I'm almost there I think), and loved it. But because I didn't want to disrupt my reading of that story, I wasn't able to read these last two chapters until now. I must say that I'm quite surprised that both Ryo and Inu were sent to gaurd Bas' back. I had a feeling that Inu would be sent, but I really wasn't expecting both of them. I loved Ryo's reaction to Sydnie trying to scratch him. When I read that out to my husband, he couldn't help but laugh too. He said that Ryo reminds him of Inu FAR too much.... but I think that was what you were going for, so be proud. I do have one question though, is Bas going to tell Sydnie that he's the next tai-youkai before she meets his parents? Or does he think that she already knows that since she said that she knew the truth?? Anyway, great story, keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 12:55 CST
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Lol....there should be a picture of Sydnie holding Bas' sword lol. That chapter what sad, but the ending was sweet! I love InuYasha's comment on how it's wrong that a cat and dog youkai are going to be together lol. Great chapter, as always, Sue!!!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 12:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: Damning Evidence
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 12:30 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the way Sydnie had taken care of her mate & the way she showed Bas how she held Triumvirate. Another great update from the great Sue! Thank you
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 12:17 CST
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Poor Sydnie, must've been hell sitting there like that, unable to do anything... And Bas is just too funny... "Did you smack one out of the ballpark?" ^^ Can't wait to see what's up next.
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Reviewed By: the amber dragonfly [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 22:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG This was so freaking wonderful!!!!! I nearly fell off my chair when Kongousouha was yelled out... I'm still laughing in delight! You are the absolute master of writing- it's because of your fanfictions that I've been writing my own! You are an inspiration to us all! {Bows low} All hail the mighty Sueric! May she continue to addict readers everywhere!!
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Reviewed By: MikoTen [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 20:36 CST
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Hawt Hanyou Sword Action...wait, that doesn't sound right. LOL. I loved this chapter and can't wait for more. Quick question, approximatley (sp?) what year is P5 set in? I seem to have lost track somewhere along the lines. LOL
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Title: Ha Ha!
Reviewed By: Angelswrath [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 16:47 CST
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I knew it! I knew it! Ok so I knew half of it lol! I knew the one Gin would turn to when she needs help would be her daddy! I was completely surprised with Ryo though! It was Ryo right lol? Nice twist! Can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2006 00:52 CST
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WOOT!!!! yay you finally put them in there. ^^ can't wait until the next chapter. ^^ Ja ne
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Title: YES!!!!
Reviewed By: xbitternessx [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 18:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was so hoping it would be Inuyasha. I hope it's Ryo with him, but I'm not going to be picky, since I love them all. You know that. This is my favorite chapter yet. ~oxrosesthornxo
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 14:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was Inu, right? Yeah!!! but who was with him? was it Ryo or Mikio ( i think that's the yougest one) Thanks for the fast updates, please keep it up!!
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Title: Mysterious!
Reviewed By: thefaeryofpurejoy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 13:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oooo, who are they? Hmmm Hawt Hanyou with ears, hmmmm, I wonder? When can we have more???? Soon plz
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Title: good chapter
Reviewed By: Inu_sesshomaru_luver [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 13:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was an awesome chapter my only qeustion is was it ryomaru or kichiro that showed up with inuyasha.
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 09:38 CST
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BWHAHAHH! That was so awesome! Inuyasha ans Ryomaru to the rescue! Wonderful Chapter! Cant wait for the next update!
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Reviewed By: Spygirl3034 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2006 02:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
o.O, hes not gunna be ne happy puppy when he finds out inu help, not 1 bit
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