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| "Purity 5: Phantasm" Reviews/Comments [ 753 ] | | Pages (51): [ « ‹ 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 › » ] | Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 08:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh God please don't let him relinquish his title!! Please, I mean hasn't he done enough for the selfish cat! And what has she done for him, except keep secrets!! I'm pissed at her, yes I am. Please update soon this chapter was freaking awesome!! I know Cain is shitting bricks right now...I hope she'll come around and if she doesn't oh, well...I'm with Inu, "cats and dogs are just wrong!" But please don't let him give up the title, let someone talk some sense into him. She needs to tell him what her deal is, before she makes him ruin his life for nothing. Man this fic gets better and better with every chapter!!
| Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 08:32 CST
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Well said.
| Reviewed By: Corcione [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 08:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This chapter was absolutely beautifull, and I know at first it might not be seen that way, but when you look deep into Bas' actions you can see how sweet and caring he really is. I want you to know that I've always loved your stories and I really hope that you continue writing them, even reach Purity 100!, please never give up, because you will unwillingly make many people very sad. Also, I am greatly inspired by your writing, not only by what you write, but because you do it fron the heart, see, I began writing a story, I posted the first 2 chapters and then I stopped. I thought about leaving it there for a long time, but... seing how great authors like you make many people like me very happy I chose to continue it, and in a way, you gave me the will to do it, and even if the story I wrote isn't something you would write since it's AU, I dedicate that story to you, sue, for giving me the will to continue. (The story is called "Crashing into his life" if you're interested) By the way, there is this question that's been nagging me for a while now... well, two questions actually... 1) Is Bas' ceremonial color green? what arethe other Characters(morio, gunnar, mikio and bitty)? 2) Is Bas a 'Big boy' because Cain is one too?? LOL Best of luck always Ginny.
| Reviewed By: Merrick Zann [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 06:17 CST
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very well said. people need to learn to stop bothering authors with negative things like that. if they don't like it. stop reading. i believe (despite what some people say) that you haven't lost anything in your writing. if anything you've gained. there is a subtle difference in the way the characters are portrayed. while the origional inu gang were written beautifully. they weren't yours. that i believe is the most unnerving thing about writing fanfics. they aren't really our characters. while we portray them as WE see them they are based of someone else's dream. The change comes when you leave off writing about the creations of others and begin to develope the lives of your own characters. these works of art no longer stem from some one else but are physical embodiments of your own soul. this exprssion of originality shows that you are in many ways a better writer than those who depend entirely upon the original work. regardless ofhow good the story that the writer places the originals through. this is not to say that fan fictions are bad (i myself have written quite a few). It is your gift in creating such beautiful characters and the emotions and trials that they live through that has endeared you to so many. If a person cannot apreciate that because they expect to have a bunch of inuyasha wannabes running through a story. like i said before. they should stop reading. no matter whats said do not stop writing if it is something you love. then again i could just be a long-winded fool but i hope not. -Merrick Zann
| Title: great story
Reviewed By: ryutaiyouki [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 03:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
first let me say i love...no, not strong enough LOVE all fo you fan fictions to date (yes i prommissed i'll get to your orignals and i will, just need time to get to them)i have been following you work sience metamophosis and still don't get why some were upset i thought it was beautiful. As a responce to you negitive reviewers, put yourself in the place of the writer fi the story seems to drag then it's just trying to get some where more exiting or give information you'll need later, if the story seems too short then your being caugh up and don't want it to end, and if your waiting for and update(eyes bitten nails) then hopefully you can trust the author to finish the story and make you happy along the way, and Sue always finishes her story (100% to date on fan fics) and if this isn't enough try writing instead of critisizing (SP?)it isn't as easy as it looks and if your better so be it but i will still read sue and maybe yours too
| Reviewed By: angelevie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 02:31 CST
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I loved this chapter... and it answered my question from the last one so perfictly. But I had to say, I don't agree with what that reviewer said. If I didn't enjoy your writting so much, I wouldn't be reading it. Also, if this person has really lost so myuch faith in you, then it's their loss, not yours. this person needs to realize that when someone writes, it's for themselves, not for the people who read them. (though they are a bonus.) I wrote a story and posted it, and am now regretting my ending, not from what others have said about it, but because when I went back and read it through, I wasn't happy. I'm not thinking of changing it for my readers, but for my own peace of mind. I don't like haveing a piece out there that I'm not happy with. But after reading so many of your works, and reading the whole purity line from the begining to now in one shot, I have to say that nothing in your work has changed all that much. It may have matured, but this is to be expected since your writing grows as you do. I still think of you as a insperation to anyone who writes, and am glad that I found your stories. I have been asked by some of my reviewers who I like as a fanfic author, and you were one of the first I thought of. I guess I just wanted to say that you will always have at least one person out there that loves your work, and will read anything you put out. Love Ya!!
| Title: heartbroken
Reviewed By: GalacticFire [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 01:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heartbroken for two reasons: 1.) This chapter really tore at me. Oh the angst and drama. I love it! Written fabulously as always. I always feel like I'm right there feeling and seeing everything that Sueric writes. After every chapter I read, I always double-check to see if a new chapter has been posted. Sueric, I love your fan-fics (all of them!) 2.) I doubt Sueric really wanted to hear what she put in the author's note. I'm glad she addressed it. I understand free speech and everything, but somethings are probably better left unsaid (or unwritten). Sometimes, your opinions are better left unsaid. Especially when they can be taken in the wrong way. And Sueric is right, you don't have to read it. But I know I still want to. Keep up the wonderful work Sueric. I can't wait for the next chapter!
| Title: See? I'm keeping up....sorta...
Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 00:15 CST
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Whoohooo! Dog-boy action. KongouSOUUHAA!! I nevah get enough of that. That Gin called in daddy is no surprise, but that Ryo is there too is just all the sweeter. I wonder how many 'hunts' they've been on together. Wait...8 bounty hunters? I could've sworn that bastid called in 9... --- Well, things are progressing nicely between Bas and Sydnie. She sure is a fierce little thing, aa most females are when protecting what's theirs. I just had an amusing thought; will their children be pups or kits? LMAO
| Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 22:55 CST
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I'm all smiles, love the yash ryo moments, and syd and bas are just soooo cute together. Thanks for a good end to a not so great day! ~fute~
| Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 20:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome! I love Inuyasha and Ryomaru! Coming to the rescuue! Cant wait for more. =D
| Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 20:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nicely done as always!! Update soon!! I always say that I know
| Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 19:56 CST
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Bas is the puker now! lol! great chapter! i was wondering about those guys chasing syd...
| Title: Ja ne!
Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 19:21 CST
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Oh My Gosh! I about died over the weekend without your wonderful story to keep me alive! I missed it soooo much, so I'm glad its Monday again! Very Cute chapter...glad Bas is gonna be okay! Thanks for the update Sue, Your a God in my book! ~Kim~
| Title: sheets
Reviewed By: Inu_sesshomaru_luver [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 15:39 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think sydnie forgot about the sheets lol anywayz awesome chapter keep 'em comin lub from jesse
| Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 14:44 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another great chapter! Bas is ok! I love the image I got pictureing sydnie swinging Bas' sword around. hehe And Inu and Ryo like her too, yay! But I love Inu-Yasha comment, A dog and a cat. hehe so all in all a great chapter Sue. Can't wait to read more.
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