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| "Purity 5: Phantasm" Reviews/Comments [ 753 ] | | Pages (51): [ « ‹ 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 › » ] | Reviewed By: Corcione [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 17:07 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Two chapters in a day!! that\'s just Great!!! My only hope is that this qon\'t keep you from posting tomorrow ^^ heehee Well, what an interesting chapter, it was really great, as all of them are,... but you know.. sometims I hate your chapters... not because they aren\'s good, but because they are too great cliffhangers and the feeling that you left us hanging ... Ahh makes me want to scream ( all this in a good way). Anyway, thanx for answering my questions... 2 big boys in a family... LOL!!! Hope you update soon!! Hugs n Kisses Ginny
| Title: Misinterpreted?
Reviewed By: nazi_ally_cat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 16:12 CST
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I thought about my review after reading your response to it. I thought about the way it was so hastily interpreted as a flame or that I was trying to convince you into changing your writing to please me...one fan. Everyone falls from grace, sometimes, and as much as you say that you don't care what I said in my review...part of me doesn't believe it. I'm sorry if it hurt you to the extent that you wish to take a break and forget your reasons for writing. I'm sorry that I feel the way I do about your recent writing. I'm sure you care about your stories as much as you wish to. I never intended the review to be looked at as something negative, I only hoped to make my point. It seems as though I failed to articulate my meaning as much as I had meant it: I feel as though you've adapted your writing to what the majority of the fans are looking for, conciously or subconciously. It was the "before the fame" that made you unique...special. Those stories are still dear to my heart, and I'm not saying that your'e incapable of reaching that pinacle of greatness that you once so deservingly were at. Please, dear author and readers, do not take this review as a flame. I mean no harm to Sueric. Once loyal fan and still optomist, I am not the only one who feels this way. I am - on the other hand - the only one who chooses to voice what they feel. The reviewer before that caused you to request no unsolicited reviews...their methods of expressing their feelings were harsh, sure...but in the end, if you really look at what they were trying to say, are we not saying similar things? Please, take more time to read into what your reviewers might be trying to say to you. Don't take things so badly. It's certainly not the end of the world and whether you feel our point is "worthy" enough or not is your own loss...or gain, depending on the actions you take. I do enjoy your stories, though. Don't loose heart, dear author.
| Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 15:51 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I can just picture Cain's face. heheh Wondeful cahpter! Poor sydnie, the angst is choking me Sue. I'm near tears, not crying not yet but I'm near it. Well another great chapter and I can't wait to read what happens next.
| Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 15:27 CST
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Well said Sue!!! Aww, I feel sorry for Sydnie lol. Evan? As tai-youkai? That's not such a good idea lol; but I completely understand why Bas would give up the title. Sydnie had basically said that family is more important, and to him she is family lol.
| Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 14:51 CST
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scrawny gavvie, huh? lol. can't wait to see him! ;) but damn! isn't sydnie overreacting? i mean... i guess she's freaking out b/c he's going to be .... wait. why does she hate cain again? does she think he turned his head ..when she was in trouble or something? damn bas! you need to get her talking! shes' accused of murder! although it was damn sweet that he called his dad, right there... ugh! the angst! lovely chapter!
| Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 13:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
| Reviewed By: thavnchick [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 13:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm i love these stories. dont worry about wat the those ppl think ur an awesome writer and ur stories are really good. it would b kewl tho if u could hav like something big happen like i dunno a war or something that would involve more of the family, its kewl to c them come back. lol neways not here to tell u how to write ur stories. but i think theyre excellent and keep it up. im definately waiting for the next chapters. its gettn angsty, wow really nice.gotta luv the drama.
| Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 12:13 CST
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ok sorry about all those messed up reviews here's the real one...lol. Another great chapter Sue, although a little depressing, can't wait to see how things turn out. BTW I am sorry to see that someone yet again is bashing your writiing, and what's worse, it's a fan -.-, I would like to let you know that you do, in fact, enspire many people (Yes I am sure you already knew that...lol) and I want to thank you for that, and for the fact that you continue to post your stories. So Thanks, for not only being a great creator/writer, but also for still posting your stories and dealing with the crap you get. ^^ Ja ne
| Title: Legendary
Reviewed By: InUyAsHaRlZ [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 11:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello Sueric, I'm not sure if you remember me but I suppose it doesn't really matter. First off, i have not read this fic, I just wanted to write this to you. I assure you i plan on reading all of your fics. So far, I have read: Chronicles, Purity, and I have just now (like 5 minutes ago) finished Metamorphosis. I have reread Chronicles and Purity a couple times. Now to the Point! Sueric, you should have your own genre; author, writer... these don't cover it. you are beyond a writer, you are utterly fantastic. You will one day be a fanfic Legend! Never let someone get you down about your writing, they know nothing about writing if they should even try. Your writing is pure Beauty. Farewell for now, InUyAsHaRlZ
| Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 11:21 CST
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oro! Bas is so amazingly cavalier! I'm sorta sensing that maybe with the revalation of Bas being the heir that maybe sydnie might give us her reason's for hating the tai-youkai so much seeing as now Bas has relinquished his title. I could vividly see bas following sydnie and the confrontation and the pain in her gaze and the resolution in Bas' eyes as he called his father. Just for the record I do not in any way shape or fashion agree with your "uninspired" reviewer. Each of your stories I have ever read, be that the fanfics or the originals all have one resounding element that makes each and every one a good read, and that is that I can tell that you have poured yourself into these works, creating not just fictions but characters that many of your readers find believable loveable or even worthy of spite (hisadaicho). The thing is that your writing comes alive for me, which is why from the first time I read any of it I have been an avid fan who will continue to read as long as you have it available. You are right you don't have to ignore the reviews that may bother you, and I am proud of the response that you gave. In short, while this may be one of my longest reviews: you rox my sox! ~frankie~
| Reviewed By: Sweetprincess 17 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 10:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Another chapter posted and it's as good as the last one. I really like your writing style, full of twists and drama. It makes my heart warms when Sebastian chose to give up his title to be with Sydnie. It shows how much he loves her. I think that every girls would want a man like Bas, but sadly we all know that's not going to happen. Anyway, keep writing because that's what great author like you are meant to be. Writing to keep fan like us looking forward to your next update.
| Reviewed By: Simply a Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 10:35 CST
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I never review much anymore, but I had to say something about that person who blasted you. They were wrong, I could tell that you wrote from the heart and put a little peace of your soul into each thing you wrote. It is one thing that has made me a faithful reader for a long time, because in a lot of cases you made me want to come back to the story as well as others time and time again. I think that is what this person forgot, that this is only a story. It isn't real, it shouldn't have to be inspired to be read. It should simply be enjoyed and make thiss person want to readf it over and over. That is the sign of a Storyteller, one who will be remembered forever.
| Reviewed By: hanyouwings [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 09:55 CST
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That chappie was so sad...I loved it though. Bas didn't even hesitate to give up his title for Sydnie; that was really sweet. Also, just for the record, I think your writing is still amazing. That reviewer sounded like a spoiled little brat who relied on everyone else to make them happy. Genuine happiness comes from self actualization and the ability to give and recieve love. Not to discredit your ability to inspire, because you do, but that review sounded awfully selfish. It's not as if your under some secret mediaminor obligation to inspire all the people who read your fanfics...that's impossible and no one would ask that of you...except for maybe selfish arses who need to get a life. I hope that it didn't bother you too much. Anyway, I love Phantasm and all the other amazing fics you have written! Ja ne!!
| Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 09:44 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa! That was really good! =( but it makes me so sad to see that Bas isn't going to be the next tai youkai. Poor Cain. Oh well it just shows how much he loves Sydnie. Keep up the wonderful work!
| Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: February 21, 2006 09:28 CST
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Oh... That scene with Bas and Sydnie nearly broke my heart... And makes me wonder, all the more, what it is that Cain didn't do that makes her hate him so much. And as for that not-so-kind reviewer: Opinions are like a-holes. Everybody's got one, but that doesn't mean we wanna see it.
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