| "Sleep Paralysis" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Title: ChibiRin (offline)
Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 03:25 CDT
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Wow. I am overwhelmed your characters. You did a really good job of communicating emotions. I love your story. Good luck as you continue!
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Reviewed By: dbzgurl_34 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2006 01:41 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Intrestin Story!!!!!!1 I hope u keep up with it And Update Soon!!! Cant wait So ya Keep Up the Great Work!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Rixii On: May 03, 2006 16:28 CDT
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Chapter 18 was very sweet...I like Kagome's epiphany at the end. *smiles* It's hard, when you think like she does to really understand what it means to love but hopefully she can keep thinking positive! And kill Onigumo..
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 (nsi) On: May 03, 2006 11:59 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE YOU!!! There, thought I'm suprised I got that throught my lips. Anywho; great chapter! I loved it. Can't wait to see more now that you have your 'groove' back. *lol*
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Reviewed By: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com On: May 03, 2006 08:07 CDT
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im loving the dreams, so totally amazing. great chapter. just when i think ive got something figured out, you throw me for another loop, or maybe im just looking to deep or at a weird angle or something, lol. i love it.
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Reviewed By: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com On: May 03, 2006 06:58 CDT
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omg that last paragraph was so totally gorgeous. totally poetic, sadly beautiful. ^.^ is kagome gonna explain exactly who onigumo is in her dreams? or is he not even gonna ask? hmm...and when are miroku and sango and sesshy gonna find out about it all? im loving it. and i love you too! your such a wonderful, creative, talented person. youve inspired me to try to write a story. (i dont update as fast as you though =/ but hey, im trying)
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Title: And did it again!
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2006 02:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sooo sorry I'm late on the other chapter! Oh man, ya get me everytime. And yeah life's a BITCH at times, but I hope Inu & Kags will make it through. Thats a part of life too...not giving up. This fic has me in deep so...UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!! or I'll cry.:( AWESOME WORK!^_^
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Reviewed By: chanda *nsi* On: May 03, 2006 01:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I hope this review will make it up to you...lol. Yes I agree lemon does add nicely to a chapter and she is so close to finding out. Great job with the spoilers. Look forward until your next update. Yes I'm feeling the love. Chanda
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Reviewed By: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com On: May 02, 2006 21:48 CDT
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omg that last paragraph was so totally gorgeous. totally poetic, sadly beautiful. ^.^ is kagome gonna explain exactly who onigumo is in her dreams? or is he not even gonna ask? hmm...and when are miroku and sango and sesshy gonna find out about it all? im loving it. and i love you too! your such a wonderful, creative, talented person. youve inspired me to try to write a story. (i dont update as fast as you though =/ but hey, im trying)
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Reviewed By: chanda *nsi* On: May 01, 2006 22:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Cool couple of updates, I've been slacking sorry busy busy... I loved your last paragraph, it was so poetic loved it... That is so true, you cant control love but it sure the hell consumes you. Chanda
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Title: inugrl27
Reviewed By: lihz On: May 01, 2006 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i really likes it love ur fan fic and update asap
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: Sweet_Obsession09 On: May 01, 2006 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. I hope Inuyasha just kills Naraku and then him and Kagome will be happy. I know thats a little harsh. Please update soon.
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Title: O_O Wow
Reviewed By: Hai Ikurei On: April 30, 2006 20:47 CDT
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Mmm I'm new, in selected words your fic is, great, fantastic, and...well...a lot more! (sorry for english lol I'm latina! and because of that I'm not that expresive in english lol) But this fic is great update plis?...Onigumo? Mmm I think that something bad is gonna happend...no good u--u nop...>>
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Title: lihz
Reviewed By: inugurl27 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 00:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMFG I LOVED IT!!!!!! UPDATE SOOOONN PLZZ FOR THE SAKE OF UR FANS AND I JUST LOVED HOW THE SONG MY DECMBER WENT WITH THE LEMON I THOUGHT IT WAS PERFECT CUZ I ALREADY LOVE THAT SONG AND THE WAY YOU WROTE IT MADE IT ABSOLUTLY PERFCT!!!!! WELL PLZZZ UPDATE SOON SO I DONT DIE AND NNE OF UR FAN DONT EITHER
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Title: All man.
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 02:02 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Shit shit shit! Just when things get nice(and lemony) Naraku's ass get to come along! Well, it's all good cuz the real Inu in InuYasha is on his way now that him and Kags are 'mates'. I'm upset cuz I know that their gonna go through HELL before hand.:(
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