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Reviewed By: chanda *nsi* On: May 23, 2006 15:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, you updated so fast, I didn't even know about the last chapter,and I'm upset for missing it. However, I caught up now. LOL. The last three chapters have been intense. Boy is she gonna be hurting in the morning. Look forward until your next update. I feel for ya, I have the same problem when writing. Just staring at a blank screen, hoping something just comes in mind to write, because re-writing it is such a bitch. Okay I'm done. Chanda
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Title: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Seiai(nsi) On: May 23, 2006 09:32 CDT
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wow, you brought it together now, kinda, cant wait for the rest, this story is amazing.
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Title: Wow!
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 04:26 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So much going on, and so much about to go down! The plot is deep and ya got me pull into it. A part of me still believes that Inu has alot to take in. Knowing that the women he loves is in pain, feels alone and not knowing if he can help. Also in pain himself, not wanting to let her see it. For a man that's alot to deal with...you know how men love to say their so strong, hate to feel like they can't do anything to help the ones they love. I think they need to sit down and really talk let as much out as they can. Darkness loves to feed lonely-ness and pull apart happy-ness...to face it we most not run from it....but become one to fight it and I hope they both see that soon. I'm going on and on I'll stop now. I know ya don't want me to take up too much time ya have other reviews to get to! So go do that and then...UPDATE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!^_^ ^.~
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Title: lihz
Reviewed By: inugurl27 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 19:09 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey hey waz^ super looooong chappie ^_^ well i loved it and i love it all sooooo plzzzz plzzzzz plzzzzz update soon
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 17:48 CDT
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Oh, man...I wish Miroku and Sango could help them a little. I really like the way Sesshoumaru is trying to be nice too. Thanks for the shout out! I love your stories. Good luck as you continue!
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Reviewed By: Rixii On: May 17, 2006 16:47 CDT
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:( Poor Kagome. I know that feeling all too well.Whoever said it before is right just like Miroku. Inuyasha needs other people too to help with Kagome. When you're that close to someone, no matter how good you may be at helping others, helping someone you're that close to generally doesn't work. You worry too much about easing her pain and not what she has to do to grow into her own happy, healthy life.. And it hurts to know you can't help them. I think they're pretty well in character still, and I only noticed one spelling mistake. (there, got my critique in XP) Great job! ^_^
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Title: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: seiai(nsi) On: May 17, 2006 14:57 CDT
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omgomgomg! that was SO MEAN! grr, im on the edge of my seat waiting til the next update! really good chapter!
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Title: ummm
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 05:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
don't ya just love how miroku can be funny as hell yet still say something meaningful! oh and kags need to start seeing that for once she's not the only one. Inu's hurt just as bad maybe more, he has to help her and deal with his own pain. and with naraku walkin' around she bette get her shit together cuz the pain he's about to put out now....i don't even want to think about it. my poor inuyasha needs help he don't know what to do....maybe sessy or even miroku! somebody help my poor baby!T_T UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! thank u
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Title: CryingT_T
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: May 14, 2006 03:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm LATE!!! so sorry sorry SORRY!!!!! This chapter cut deep for me, but I'm happy that she's out of that place where only pain sleeps. Her mother's a fool for not believe in her! Many things in this world have been said not to be but are. We all don't have to see it to believe. She should ask her self "do I really want to? or should I just be there for my kids" I love how Inu take great care of her...thats where she needs to be...with him
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Title: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: seiai(nsi) On: May 11, 2006 18:38 CDT
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wow, so much drama and fluff(kinda) that was beautiful! loved it!
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Reviewed By: Anonymous reviewer On: May 11, 2006 15:55 CDT
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*smiles* It's true...even if you feel alone you can have someone who is always there for you. It'd be great if everyone could understand and have love like Kagome and Inuyasha.. Often times, kids these days have such a cloudy outlook that even if they find a love like this they're too insecure to appreciate it. I hope that someday this society will be more welcoming and empathetic so that kids can grow up with understanding like Kagome. She knows Inuyasha loves her, despite the way she used to think.
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Reviewed By: chanda * nsi* On: May 11, 2006 12:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!! what a chapter. I never saw that coming. I so cannot wait until your next update. Keep up the great writing this story rocks! Chanda
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: brower47 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 11, 2006 08:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I thought I'd check out your fics since you're such a devoted reviewer. I think your fic is even darker than my first one but wow is it interesting. It took me a couple days to read the whole thing but you've got something really interesting here. Your combining of dream sequences and real life are so unique and fun to read. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: me On: May 11, 2006 07:23 CDT
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Despite the sadness of it it is a great chapter!
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Reviewed By: InuGuirlchic23 On: May 11, 2006 06:36 CDT
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tha fic is awsome
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