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Title: sleep paralyis
Reviewed By: Diren [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2006 21:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This may sound weird, but I have to say this or I'll blow up. I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!! Please contuined, I almost died waiting for your last chapter. Your the best writer I know!!
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Reviewed By: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com On: February 28, 2006 12:41 CST
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omg amazing. this is wonderful...it kinda makes me think of 2 movies though, "the excorism of emily rose" (cause of the 3am correalation.) and then that one, about 3 or 4 years ago about the night terrors..cant remember the name at the time =/ but i love it, its comming together very nicely imo. cant wait for more
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Reviewed By: Kinoko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 11:38 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The way you chose to write this story is nearly entirely different from your other story, "Without a Lulliby" and I give you mucho kudos for that. I like phycological stories only because I relate to the cluttered flurry of thoughts that the protagonist experiences, in a way, many authors exprerience a bit of insanity when it comes to their life-- instanity which opens the door to creative thoughts that aren't allowed inside the box of the saine mind. That's what marks a great story-- an author that has thrown inhibitions to the wind, allowing their thoughts to wander the vast universe of unexplored territory of the mind. Pushing the limits of the 10% usage of the human brain to new levels that can only come by trading in some sanity for insanity. I hope I make some sort of sense, for it takes the saine to understand the insaine, and the insaine to break the mold of the saine in order to convert them into one of their likeness. In the end, I believe we're all a little coo-coo, that's what makes us unique. ^_^ I like this story, and I like the way you present Kagome's struggles with her mind and the dissappearence of the line between reality and 'make believe'. Keep it up! -Kinoko
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Reviewed By: its all good On: February 28, 2006 01:05 CST
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u had me hooked on the first chapter and thats very unusual for me
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Reviewed By: freakhorrorchick [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2006 23:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story!! I look forward to your next chapter. Please update soon!
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Title: sleep paralyis chap(4)
Reviewed By: trinity757575@yahoo.com On: February 22, 2006 09:00 CST
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God damn but your good!! Now you have me rethinking some things and curious as hell about others. Did Kagome's dad leave because he was abusing her? And I'm leaning still towards Naraku being the one who hurts her. I'm also wondering if your going to put her mother and brothers perspective in this story? Is Kagome right? Does her mother blame her for her father leaving? And what's Souta's take on this? God woman you have me on pins and needles! I love it!! 'til next chap, I'll be reading y'ah, trinity
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Title: sleep paralyis
Reviewed By: trinity757575@yahoo.com On: February 22, 2006 08:41 CST
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I'm loving this story! I liked the way you brought Sango into the story, I can't wait to see how you bring the other's in. Now hopefully Sango can get Kagome to open up alittle so we can find out what's going on inside her head. So 'tel next chpater, I'll be reading y'ah, trinity
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Reviewed By: mirokusgirl (not on-line) On: February 22, 2006 00:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I will admit this story is sweet. I'm still curious about what is real and what isn't when Kagome's 'dreams'. i'm loving all the diiferent cliffs in this fic too. Will our fave hanyou and monk show up? what about sesshoamru? I hope to read lots more!
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Reviewed By: koniko chan On: February 21, 2006 19:08 CST
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hummm interesting I'd like to see where you are going with this. please write more soon
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Title: sleep paralyis
Reviewed By: Diren [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 22:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is soooo good. Its was a long time that I read a good fanfic. And I'am wondering when Inuyasha is going to show up? Any way please update soon!
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Title: Sleep Paralyis
Reviewed By: Jozu Oruha [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2006 18:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so good!! You have to write more chapters! And when is inuyasha going to show up. He has to show up soon!! Also again sooo good!!
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Reviewed By: mirokusgirl (not on-line) On: February 19, 2006 10:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh wow, this story is getting could, who is it that hurts her, it sounds like NAraku from the last chap, but then again it could be anyone! Sango finally got Kagome to open up even if it was a little...Doesn Kagome's mom know what's going on or doesn't she? I really like this story and hope to read more!
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Title: Sleep Paralyis
Reviewed By: trinity757575 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 23:35 CST
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You have me doing the pee-pee dance (hee-hee) with me thinking that it's Naraku one minute or Inuyasha the next (I'm loving it!) who are the one's that are brusing her, watching her, or talking and/or visiting her in her sleep, or it could someone you made up....hmmmm...But PLEASE don't tell me if I'm wrong or right! I want to read it to find out. (hee-hee) Your doing a great job! I put you on my favorite authore, for I defently don't want to miss any part of the story! Kudo's my friend! 'Til next chapter I'll be reading yeah, Trintiy
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Title: Sleep Paralyis
Reviewed By: trinity757575 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 08:18 CST
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U defently created a good sense of suspense and forboding in this first chapter! I can't wait to see (read) how the rest of this story comes to light, or should I say comes to lie in the shadows. 'Til then I'll be reading u. Trinity
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Title: One 1/2 Brownie Points
Reviewed By: TheFabledCat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2006 02:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good idea for a story, very interesting. I am a little confused, but I guess that is to be exspected. I always thought cliffies were a good thing. Can she see things from her dreams when she is awake? The part about the children confused me more than anything. I guess I will just have to wait and see where you are going with the storyline. The chapter was a little short, but nicely done.
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