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"Sleep Paralysis" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ]
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 Reviewed By: IC  On: June 09, 2006 15:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
update soon k
 Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: brower47 [MediaMiner Member]  On: June 06, 2006 18:49 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I don't know how I waited so long to review this chapter. It was so well done and did a beautiful job tying his dreams to his reality and back again. Absolutely great. Too kind on the shout out but thanks anyway.
 Title: Hmmmm..
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 31, 2006 23:42 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Inu like "what the fuck" I have to say this is really some awesome work!^_^ When he see things or should i say dream these things, is kagome seeing something too? Cuz alot of times it seems like one is seeing a part of the others dream. Maybe right? well please UPDATE SOON!!!! i really feel for this fic!^_^
 Reviewed By: Rixii  On: May 31, 2006 15:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Oooo..and there's where it comes together. I see what you're doing now. Lol These last couple seem kinda short but it's still interesting. Kikyo is acting a little odd too..
 Reviewed By: IC  On: May 31, 2006 10:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
Kagome is still Kagome....RIGHT
 Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 29, 2006 17:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
wowzers that was an amazing fanfic...im guessing that because of the fact the you didnt write anything at the end and of the way the last chapter ended that that was the conclusion of the fanfic right??? of course i could very well be wrong because on the other hand u still have to finish the thing with the jewel...so if that is the case then u HAVE to update soon...once again good work :D:D:D...Cheers
 Title: Lihz
Reviewed By: inugurl27 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 26, 2006 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
hey i loved the chappie so plz update soon and keep it coming cuz it would majorly sux if u quit qritting cuz i would die and srry for any mistakes in this reveiw *im typing in the dark* @^_^@
 Title: Oooooh.
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 26, 2006 03:44 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was cute Inu all mad but was like 'go back to sleep i'll be here when you wake up' I love a guy like that! Awesome work. oh and what was i right and wrong about? I'm so sleep it's like 3:54am i just get back from the movies so i'm out of it. I have so many guy friends and 18 half-brothers and sisters so i've come to see alot of what make guy feel so hope-less,lost,lonely but i think we all hide are fears sometime....and some let them show. I just hope Inu&Kags are happy when all is said and done.^_^
 Reviewed By: brower47 [MediaMiner Member]  On: May 25, 2006 20:01 CDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I missed a couple updates but its always fun to read a few at a time. All were very well done and left me hungry for more. I feel so sorry for Kagome and I can't wait to see how you pull this off.
 Reviewed By: Rixii  On: May 25, 2006 19:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
*smiles* Inuyasha may have a short fuse, but he's definitely loyal. ^_^ Kagome's slipping back into that depression and I hope Inuyasha gets her out soon. She's trusted him this long, she needs to remember that.
 Reviewed By: ChibiRin (offline)  On: May 25, 2006 15:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
WAAAAAAAAH! That was so beautiful! That connection between them is so great. That quiet understanding...great job!!! You really conveyed the emotions of the characters well. Good luck with the rest! *ChibiRin blows kisses*
 Reviewed By: ChibiRin(offline)  On: May 25, 2006 15:13 CDT
Comment/Review:
Okay, first off...I love you! I love snuggles too. About this chapter, I like short and sweet. I think it's cool how you're bringing the feudal story and your own together. Clever. Very clever. Okay now I'm going to read the next chapter!
 Title: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Seiai(NSI)  On: May 25, 2006 13:28 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
awwww! such beautiful fluff! that was too good! you described everything so well. i love it! and now, some bad news, im losing my internet for a while =/ (got some new bills to pay now, and have to get rid of everything but the necessities =*( ) so ill be lucky if i get to read some while im at a friends house or something, but i might not get to review, just know that ill always be saying how great your chapter is! i hope to be back soon, but i dont know how it will all work out...good luck with your writing(like you need it =P) and keep it up please!
 Title: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com
Reviewed By: Seiai(NSI)  On: May 25, 2006 13:28 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
awwww! such beautiful fluff! that was too good! you described everything so well. i love it! and now, some bad news, im losing my internet for a while =/ (got some new bills to pay now, and have to get rid of everything but the necessities =*( ) so ill be lucky if i get to read some while im at a friends house or something, but i might not get to review, just know that ill always be saying how great your chapter is! i hope to be back soon, but i dont know how it will all work out...good luck with your writing(like you need it =P) and keep it up please!
 Reviewed By: Sweet_Obsession09  On: May 23, 2006 16:24 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
NOOOOOO! You can't end it there.*rips my hair out* Please update as soon as you can.
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