| "Sleep Paralysis" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Reviewed By: Chrystal-Hearts [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2009 21:57 CDT
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I enjoyed this very much and can't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: sissy19 On: March 20, 2008 16:18 CDT
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your story is so fucking depressing i think kagomeyukiniwa in fanfiction has some competition
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Reviewed By: KrypticInsanity On: February 28, 2008 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally got to finish the piece and it's wonderful! Is there a sequel? Please let me know!
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Title: Finally Done...and Moping...It just had to end!!!!!
Reviewed By: Tueske [MediaMiner Member] On: February 27, 2008 14:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I read all 43 chapters faithfully without reviewing.... I really wanted read through it all. And I love every bit of it!!!! I originally started reading one of your other fics you are currently working on... 'Silence the Fairytale' I LOVE that fic... and though I have seen 'Sleep Paralysis' for quite sometime now... I have to admit that I never bothered to read it. Once I read 'Silence the Fairtytale' I realized how great of a writer you are! It was then that I saw in one of your chapters you mention 'Sleep Paralysis' and I was like... "they're by the same authour!?" and so I read SP and I am in love!!!! This fic is so great! It's so serious and then at times it has me laughing so hard it feels like my sides are going to split open! And I absolutely adore the way you have portrayed Sesshoumaru in this fic! Not very many people in the fanfic world can portray the Sengoku Judai Sesshoumaru into a AU Sesshoumaru without him losing his original character or subtle grace that he is. Yeah this fic is just wonderful... and I really hope that you will be able to put up at least one more long chapter to satisfy all of your readers before you have your baby...that is if haven't already had said baby. Congratulations by the way on your bundle of joy... I think it would be real nice to see Kagome have Inuyasha's kid in this fic... I dunno. You do what you do and I will continue to faithfully read on. Until Next chapter, Ja Ne!!!!
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Reviewed By: Alliecoolgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 20:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well, Naraku's human form dying must mean something weird/bad is about to happen. Can't wait to read the next chappie.
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 13:25 CST
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omfg please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Naiya Toshi [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 21:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whoa...I'm officially in awe! Sesshy owning a pink frilly apron is almost too funny to imagine! I literally laughed out loud at that part. Your story is uber-addictive. And btw, thanks for the tips. I mostly do just write what comes to mind. You did a great job with the suspense-the body left behind and everything! and....I have some fanfics to recommend. they aren't on here (at least I don't think so) and sadly no lemons (I guess they might not be for you) One Month for Romance and sequel Two Months to Live both by Corisu Li, and Tears of the Fallen by Shadowsweaver1 on FanFiction.net
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2008 20:10 CST
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Oh boy that was an interesting turn...never considered a body left behind...cant wait to read more...it is soooooooooo good...keep it up ganbare!!!!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: February 02, 2008 23:50 CST
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i read this 4 the 3rd time XD lol
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Reviewed By: kariangel100 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 22:38 CST
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My apologies, it was chapter 40. I'm So happy that I didn't upset you, I worried of a moment after I pressed 'submit' that you might be offended. My only wish is to see you write to your fullest. Lovely new chapter.
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Reviewed By: TriNeyce [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 20:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fab chapter, as always. Poor Sesshy, unmarried with four teenage kids, one of whom is Inuyasha, that man deserves a medal at the very least! Let's hope that Kagome has learned her lesson and won't go off to battle evil on her own ever again...Thanks for all the recommendations, I've actually been to Charlotte, NC quite a few times. Your mom is right, it is beautiful down there but a bit too slow paced for me right now.
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2008 09:59 CST
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Ah, fabulous! once again, thanks for the good spelling and grammar. I am a Spanish teacher, and grammar is kind of an obsession for language teachers. Fabulous story! I'm excited to see where this one will end up! Thanks for updating!
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Reviewed By: Naiya Toshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2008 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...still awesome! hehe it's funny, imagining Inuyasha in the hospital! remember the episode after Yuka of the hair injured Inuyasha and he made a huge fuss about not letting Kagome treat him? I'm surprised you don't get writer's block more often though. I just started my story (chp. 2 is up) and now I'm clean out of ideas for #3. mind you, I do have many many ideas for later chapters...just not the one I'm supposed to be writing now!!! lol but anyways, this has to be the most interesting fanfic I've read :D keep up the good work! btw, I wish you the best of luck with the move and your baby on the way
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Reviewed By: *Zetsuii On: January 25, 2008 15:01 CST
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awww...so sweet...I look forward to the next chapter. Hope everything goes well for you and have anice weekend
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Title: I think I've found a new obsession
Reviewed By: TriNeyce [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2008 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay so "Elfen Lied" definitely looks like a manga I can sink my teeth into. Do you know if it has been translated by any English Language publishers, ie VIZ? Perhaps where I can find good scanlations? And 7 times?!? Wow, you really are a nomad, do you recommend anywhere in particular? I'm looking to relocate in the next year but I don't have anywhere set in mind yet... On to real business now, this chapter made me wonder what time frame is this story set in? I've been assuming it's a sort of parallel universe as it would have been if Kagome's destiny wasn't tied up with a "time-transversing-well" and as a result of Inuyasha's wish. But you know what they say about people who assume >
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