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"Sleep Paralysis" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ]
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 Title: inukaggrrl06 (nsi)
Reviewed By: inukaggrrl06 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 06, 2006 23:45 CDT
Comment/Review:
This is an amazing story, it has taken me three days to read this so far. I love how you have all of them as humans and that they're finally getting to see their past lives.. I guess that would be what you call it, but all in all, you are an amazing writer and I hope that this isn't the end. Because girl, you had me hooked after the first sentence of the first chapter. I'm jut wondering if Sesshomarou already knows about it and knows of his past, or what.. I want the next chapter. It's just too much not to continue, I don't know what I'm going to do if there isn't another chapter coming.. I'm going to hug my Inu plush now.. I'm sad, alright maybe not that sad. I can always read another fanfic, which is normally what I do... Happy writings and a Merry Muse.
 Title: awsome
Reviewed By: yashamaru1 [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 05, 2006 17:24 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this is fuckin awsome... i love it update soon... the last part.... was she awake and just thinking over everything from what happened up until this point?? anyway... this is awsome and im like so into it so update soo:)
 Reviewed By: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com  On: October 02, 2006 08:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow...everythings slowly coming together. i love the flashbacks at the end, it fit in well and helped me to remember some.
 Reviewed By: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com  On: October 02, 2006 08:27 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow...everythings slowly coming together. i love the flashbacks at the end, it fit in well and helped me to remember some.
 Title: me likey
Reviewed By: todavialoca [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 30, 2006 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I honestly have to say that i really enjoy this fic, the way you have told this story so far, is really good. This is truley one of the most orginal fics, out here right now. I hope you update soon!
 Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 30, 2006 05:06 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
It feels good to be back! and I'm happy you're doing okay too. The quote I give you was mind, it's from a poem I did awhile ago. I had heard an of a saying almost the same to it. But I put my own take to it. So I'm very happy you liked it!^_^ This chapter holds the key to alot of things to me. Inu and Sess are demon right? So does this mean Sesshomaru knows more then he's saying or that he has to remember it? Well you have a way of pulling one into this storie. Update soon!! "Behind my eyes there's a world that holds my soul in it's hands. I'm my own real truth and the rain I see there is more of my tears...that comes from my fears and pain. To you I have night fears of a dream, to me I do not dream...for ask yourself. Can dreams hurt you this why? My body now bears a sign..." That a bit of a poem too. This fic gives me lots of ideas and makes me remember old poems aswell. I hope this one also takes to your liking...
 Title: *woots*
Reviewed By: tempestflame [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 29, 2006 15:29 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
YAY!! Me happy!Three chappies in one week!And I know how sucky writer's block can be.I'm having it right now...damn writer's block... UPDATE SOON!!
 Reviewed By: Lihz  On: September 29, 2006 13:13 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I loved the chappie and u sure r on a role i soo hooe u update soon cuz i love it!!!!!
 Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 29, 2006 05:49 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow i've missed this story!! and so now miroku will know. "It's said that one's dreams are the gates to the truth. Words, sounds, pictures of the worlds we wish to tell are self can't be..." well for them it can't be more real. I hope you're doing good.
 Reviewed By: loulou4729*nsi*  On: September 29, 2006 00:23 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
ACK!! You sucked me back into this story with a choke hold! *lol* I'm glad you started writing again. And don't worry about feeling guilty for the lapse. Beleive it or not we do have lives 'outside' of this whole fanfiction thing. Can't wait to see more though...
 Reviewed By: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com  On: September 28, 2006 12:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
another great update!!!! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!!! ^.^
 Reviewed By: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com  On: September 28, 2006 12:47 CDT
Comment/Review:
another great update!!!! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY!!! ^.^
 Reviewed By: Lihz  On: September 28, 2006 12:27 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG IM SOOO GLAD UR BACK AND UPDATING AGANI!!!! I LOVED THE CHPAIIE SOO UPdATE SOON!!!!
 Reviewed By: InuyahasChic [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 28, 2006 07:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
So Miroku is finnally finding out.
 Title: *claps*
Reviewed By: tempestflame [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 26, 2006 19:39 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Very nice.Worth the wait.CAn't wait for the next chappie! PLEASE UPDATE!!!
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