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| "Sleep Paralysis" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] | | Pages (13): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 › » ] | Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: January 21, 2008 00:00 CST
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Awww...those 2 chapters were so good. It has been a while. I was so busy i couldnt read them. i remember this episode though...that was so funny and u got the emotions across really well...*claps*...keep it up...cant wait for some more intense angst...XD...
| Reviewed By: Naiya Toshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 19:34 CST
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omg...I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I'm simply amazed that anyone could have such talent to weave the past into the future like that. It's like I'm actually there experiencing what you're writing...er...typing. it's unrealistic and realistic at the same time....you have real talent! the story is amazing, and of course, so are you! hehe I really wish I could write (or type or whatever) like you. I'm hoping for another update soon :D
| Reviewed By: kariangel100 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 00:24 CST
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You have a big problem with your dialog, it is hard for a reader, like myself, to keep up with who is speaking. Also you have so much of it (dialog I mean) that it takes away from your story. I'm not saying that dialog is bad, I'm saying it needs more descriptive words that follow the speaker, to whom he or she is speaking to, or what is going on in the world while the character is talking. I love your writing very much, don't get me wrong, I wish I could find more fanfiction writers like you. IMO, once you develop and describe just a little more, this chapter will be more then wonderful.
| Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2008 08:34 CST
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haha, for a couple of paragraphs, i thought i was reading the wrong fic!!! Yay for awesome dream sequences!!! Thanks!
| Reviewed By: TriNeyce [MediaMiner Member] On: January 11, 2008 14:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm sure the resemblance to "Nyu" would make much more sense to me if I knew just who that was :-> I sorta just mixed my ethnicity and middle name and thus "TriNeyce" was born... I can't believe you pulled out a Constantine reference! I love that movie, I know a lot of people said it was bad but but I'm a sucker for that type of genre. The chapter was a nice little breather from all the action that's been happening in the story. I love the banter between Miroku and Inuyasha, they are such "boys." Its so: No, you can't have the last word! ; Yes, I can!; No you can't!; Yes!!; No!!; YES!!!; NO!!! Then the all mighty Sesshomaru comes in and says: "Both of you shut up, you're giving me a headache. God I love Sesshy!!! Good luck on your move, Lord knows, they're certainly stressful.
| Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2008 21:28 CST
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Fabulous!!! I don't think your chapters are under-par. I think it is just as inviting and suspenseful as always!!! This is a wonderful fic, and I am still thrilled you started writing again! I read this thing when it was brand new!!! Good luck going into your last month of pregnancy! Do you know what the gender is yet, or will you be suprised? (let me guess, you already answered this question like 14 times...) hehe, thats what happens when you have adoring fans!
| Title: Badass Sesshy Rocks!!!
Reviewed By: TriNeyce [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2008 07:46 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think my title says it all. Yet another fantastic chapter. I wonder how Sesshy is going to explain just how his little brother ended up with a skewered shoulder, he,he... I would say update soon but as you have something a bit more important to focus on (namely your baby ;)) I'll say update when you can, I'll be waiting with bated breath!
| Reviewed By: *Zetsuii* On: January 03, 2008 16:40 CST
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oh boy that was long but very good...yay...thanks for updating...I can just imagine inuyasha in the hospital XD anyways I hope everything goes well for you and your baby...good luck on that...and update whenver you can...we will all be waiting for it and to hear any news...XD
| Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 03, 2008 14:58 CST
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i really like this story. please update soon!^_^
| Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: TriNeyce [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2007 08:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice chapter. The emotions running through the characters were almost palpable. The atmosphere was also very well suited for that scene. Too bad about Sesh though, he usually gets pushed to the side for the sake of the "main characters," I still love your portrayal of him though. Keep up the excellent work.
| Reviewed By: kariangel100 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 21:49 CST
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Dum dum DUM! What Will happen next I wonder?
| Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2007 00:22 CST
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OMG OMG OMG...u gotta update...its was so intense...i need more...dont leave me ahngin XD...update soon please...*begs*
| Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2007 23:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nicely done on the yucka factor there I must say, lol. Now time for Inu to do some ass kickin! Update when ya can! ;)
| Title: Thank You!
Reviewed By: TriNeyce [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2007 09:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nicely done. I have to say that I thoroughly enjoyed those last two chapters. I have to wonder now if Sesh may have a larger role in the story than caregiver and "mystical guru" (thats what I dubbed him in my head at least ;-) If he's starting to have these dreams too, supposedly before Miroku does, he may have a role in this Naraku's destruction that even he may have been unaware of...But then again that's just my musings...
| Title: Dang it
Reviewed By: Guardian Angel of ALL Anime [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2007 21:08 CST
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Crap, I knew I should of added commas to that list. >.<
Strength of Bond, Gone Swimmin', Par Tout Autre Nom, The Quicker-Picker Upper, Violation of Honor, Blush, Possession, Temple of the Dog, Darkness, Quadrangle, To Shed a Little Light, Lemon Twist, The Phoenix Blade: Time Lapse, Two-Timer, Coming Home, Waiting on a Wish, Red Riding Haori, Dog Skin, Tease, Fugue, Tales from the House of the Moon, Courtship, Movie House Hanyou, Student Teacher Relations, Swimsuit Shopping, I'll Have Lemonade, Please. Lemonade, Too. Paradox, Phone Sex. I hope the spaces helped.
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