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 Title: Noooo! D:
Reviewed By: Guardian Angel of ALL Anime [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 24, 2007 20:57 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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*sighs* Kagome can be such an idiot sometimes. =/ But at least she is finally willing to face the demon that has been plaguing her life. Wonderful chapter despite the shortness, I enjoyed it very much. There's nothing like a dose of angst to give you a nice satisfied feeling for the holidays. Thank you for the update, and I have a plethora of stories/one shots you may enjoy which are all found on this site. Don't worry all of them have damn good lemons in it. Strength of Bond Gone Swimmin' Par Tout Autre Nom The Quicker-Picker Upper Violation of Honor Blush Possession Temple of the Dog Darkness Quadrangle To Shed a Little Light Lemon Twist The Phoenix Blade: Time Lapse Two-Timer Coming Home Waiting on a Wish Red Riding Haori Dog Skin Tease Fugue Tales from the House of the Moon Courtship Movie House Hanyou Student Teacher Relations Swimsuit Shopping I'll Have Lemonade, Please Lemonade, Too Paradox Phone Sex This list should last you awhile, and may you have a Merry Christmas! ^-^
 Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 24, 2007 20:38 CST
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woooo...that was messed up at the end...but damn good...i cant wait for the next chapter...u leave such good suspense...have a good christmas though...XD
 Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 21, 2007 13:21 CST
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NNNNooooooooooooo....stupid Kagome...dont do that....HEHEHE..anyway that was damn good...so intense so please update soon...I have some ideas running through my head and i gotta find out if i am right or not....anywho...some good stories that i have red are: Lucky Ones, Winter hearts (I think), Metamorposis (probably spelled wrong)...hmmm thats all i can think of now...
 Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi*  On: December 20, 2007 18:44 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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AWWWWW! You are so wrong for that cliffy...you know that right? *Sigh* You would think after 6 years of reading fanfiction I would be use to it huh? But nope, it still stings. Anywho great chapter, though I was kinda expecting her to dip out sometime soon so others wouldn't get hurt. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
 Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 20, 2007 11:37 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Uh oh poor Kagome disappeared. I hope nothing bad is going to happen to her and if it does I hope Sesshomaru and Inuyasha can rescue her. Please update soon.
 Reviewed By: ThisIsMeSmiling [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 19, 2007 21:12 CST
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Nice, i like this so far...the beginning makes me think of that move 'an american haunting' though....but i see the differences. VERY original! I'm loving this story! -amber
 Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 16, 2007 20:34 CST
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oh...poor Kagome...what we put her through in fanfics...but yay....they're getting married after this drama ends...woot *happy dance*...good writing though...it was intense or a minute when he said "we need to talk"...i was holding my breath...oh boy I cant wait for an update...thanks
 Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 16, 2007 14:45 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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Poor Kagome, at least she was happy for a short while. I wonder how they are going to go find the Shikon No Tama in the modern age. Please update soon.
 Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi*  On: December 15, 2007 20:08 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Nope...I really wasn't expecting a chapter so soon. You'd better be careful girlie your gonna make us all spoiled. :) I'm glad she said yes him. And Sesshy getting all parental was kinda hot. *lol*
 Reviewed By: TriNeyce [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 15, 2007 15:28 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I found this story a few days ago and I have to say that I'm hooked. It is an hauntingly beautiful story. Your characters are well developed and convey the essence of the original characters. Their emotions are intense without being unrealistic. I especially love your portrayal of Sesshomaru, he still maintains his aloofness without being a complete boar. You have a real talent for creating imagery that makes me feel as though I'm immersed in a movie as opposed to just sitting here reading. I only have one concern though, when Inuyasha finally told Miroku about what was really going on, Miroku pretty much high tailed it out of there. I understand that it was overwhelming to hear everything Inuyasha told him, but they were supposed to be "blood brothers." It seemed like the only reason Miroku even went back was because of Sango. While you needed some sort of plot device to show just how strong their relationship was, you left me feeling a little disappointed with the apparent frailty of Inuyasha and Miroku's friendship. Other than that, this is an exquisite piece of work and please update soon!
 Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 15, 2007 15:13 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh, that was speedy and spiffy, ne? :D How time flies when you're drawing, am out one day, then the next... whammo... update! Sweet! :P Loved where ya picked it back again, very beautiful. Lemon garden was great too, hehe. Sess is vicious when hes pissed, then again I think he even when he isn't. And am he pissed cause they be foolin round or cause he haint gettin any, lol. I need to go back and reread some, I think. Now on to The Tama. could just feel the dread in the room. Like your worst nightmares coming true. Great chap. Till next install... update when ya can! ;)
 Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 13, 2007 19:59 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Cliffee? You did that on purpose, you evil, evil author you! Lol. Nice lemon, BTW. ;) Very good visuals as well. I love it when I read something and can actually see it. Very well done. Now you evil author you... update when ya can! ;) Hehehe
 Title: Human heart
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 13, 2007 17:46 CST
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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"M~E~M~O~R~I~E~S Moments that should be held in my heart & mind,yet in time..Everything will become dust in a corner. Madness comes, Over looking scars..Forever apart of my future. I will fight off an Eternity of past Sorrow..." i am srry for taking so long. cumputer is a mess! but im still here!!!! hope u like the poem..
 Reviewed By: *Zetsuii*  On: December 13, 2007 16:36 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG that was hot...and yay...he popped the question...but they way they have been going at it I am sur[prised she isnt pregnant yet...but damn taht was good...makes me wish i had a boyfriend right now XD
 Reviewed By: loulou4729 *nsi*  On: December 12, 2007 17:25 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Nice to see you writing again. I won't lie...I forgot all about this story. o.O BUT...I did go back to freshin up on the plot. I can't wait to see more!
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