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Reviewed By: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com On: April 25, 2006 18:56 CDT
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ive been waiting on this forever! so great, so beautiful! and OMG onigumo?? oh no! now im worried!
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Title: that was great!!1
Reviewed By: mel f On: April 25, 2006 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awsome cant wait for the next chapter. i'm soooo hooked on your fic, so please update again soon.
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Title: Ahh
Reviewed By: angelsfalltearfully [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 01:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to stop reading fan fics that suck me into a black oblivion where I can't stop reading! And this is what your doing. AAHH! I must have more! I cannot wait to see where you are going with this, Ive never seen a fic like this before and its a fabulous piece. GREAT job!! I can't wait for more!
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Title: Interesting FanFics
Reviewed By: Ms. Mug On: April 22, 2006 12:03 CDT
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Heh, you said you wanted some angsty fanfics, so here are some. People Involved - LaraWinner http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1865512/1/ (Her other stuff is really good as well. =)) Dead Silent - Aejavu (A really good fic, and dark; one shot) http://www.kokololio.com/guiltypleasures/archive/aejavu/deadsilent/ Wicked - Kayla Chavi http://www.fanfiction.net/s/1102450/1/ (A pretty dark fic, and Hentai, of course..)
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Title: Great Story~
Reviewed By: Ms. Mug On: April 22, 2006 11:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've been lurking on your story for quite awhile. And I read your last A/N and decided to post. xDDD I hope you know that I absolutely adore your story, and will continue to read your story, and your future stories as well. =) Oh, and I love how Sesshy offered to do the dishes, it's quite funny picturing him in an apron, in suds. xDDDD
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Title: Sad
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2006 11:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It hurts to feel like you can't be there for the one you love. Poor Inu & Kags can they take much more of this? I hope sess can help them. Update soon.
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Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 23:43 CDT
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Holy crap!! That was awesome!!! I absolutely LOVE your writing style! Keep going!!!
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Title: shisouikari@gmail.com
Reviewed By: Rixii On: April 19, 2006 19:22 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a quick review before reading this latest chapter, but I feel I need to comment on your story. It is up there with my most favorite and your writing is definately very developed. The content is intriguing and if you wish, I would like to talk more with you through email. Now, about a fanfic you're looking to read. I have one I'm sure you'd love, but the lemon chapters are not with it (as it is on ff.net) and she has not updated in two years because of personal reasons. However, it is long, angst-filled, and definately one of the best I've ever read. I'm not sure if you could find the lemon chapters (I haven't since the site where she was featured was discontinued) but it's long enough and set up so that they are not neccessary. Anyway, I look forward to more of your story as I spend little time reading fanfiction now with so few stories of this caliber. P.S. You don't have to rush so much, a week between updates, though most would be dying from it, probably wouldn't hurt. The chapters are slightly short and might benifit from just that bit of extra time. With a story like this, the wait would definately be worth it. Remember, yourself first when it matters.
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Title: Great Chapter
Reviewed By: Sweet_Obsession09 On: April 19, 2006 18:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good chapter. I feel sorry for Kagome though. Atleast she has Inu. Please update soon.
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Title: Bravo
Reviewed By: Miss_Marilyn69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 13:18 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'll give you all the ten's I have in a bucket. I can't believe I passed over this for so long. I really am blown away by the story. It's so unique and beautiful. I love the flow, and the mystery and well everything I just love it. I'll never pass over a fic by you again you can be sure of that, in fact I'm off to read your other stuff.
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Reviewed By: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com On: April 19, 2006 08:59 CDT
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hehe i know you wont kill me! ^.^ wow, so im guessing sesshoumaru will get involved now..this is gonna get good. cant wait to see what he says about all this.
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Title: lizzie
Reviewed By: I On: April 18, 2006 19:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
gr8 chcappie update really soon cuz i really love this story ~l8r~liz~
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Reviewed By: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com On: April 17, 2006 19:44 CDT
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i love the way you described the relationship between inu and kags. it was so...so...true. lol i dont know how else to say it. but another wonderful chapter. ^.^
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Reviewed By: loulou4729 (nsi) On: April 17, 2006 17:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Glad to see an update. Can't wait to see more *hopefully of full demon Inu :)* Anywho, keep up the great writing.
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Title: Ya did it again!
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 15, 2006 15:25 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your a deep person. Do u know that? I love this fic and you are more then what you let on.^_^ Great-ness is in your spirit so keep up the awesome work.
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