| "Sleep Paralysis" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 15:29 CST
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hahha...i like your note at the end but damn it was good...a very good present...i thank you *bows But now u got to update cause a cliffhanger like that needs to be answered...but thanks again cant wait to hear from you
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2007 15:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am really glad Sesshomaru is telling Inuyasha the story of his previous life. It would have been nice for Kagome to also be awake to hear it. Good chapter and thanks to the reply to my review!
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Reviewed By: Zetsuii [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2007 23:08 CST
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wow...i finally read your story...i have ben putting it off for a while but I am happy i read it...now i just need an update...oh...my birthday is on monday that would be a nice present...XD...keep up the amazing work...cant wait to hear more
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Reviewed By: lindajrjt [MediaMiner Member] On: December 10, 2007 13:53 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is really complicated. Some parts are sad and some are very enjoyable. At first I thought Inuyasha and Sesshomaru were demons in this life; but now realize they only were in their past life at least for now that is. As many twists and turns this story has taken I would not be surprised if their demon parts are reunited with their human parts. Please update soon and thanks; this is an awesome story.
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Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2007 22:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad to hear it..., and you got married? Congrats... Loved the chapter, as always. Look forward until your next update. Chanda
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Reviewed By: chanda [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2007 17:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg...*Falls off chair*. It's been a year since your last update...and let me tell you it was well worth the wait. I liked the twist at the end of this chapter. I am happy you found the man of your dreams and hopefully, I won't have to wait another year for an update...?*Raises an eyebrow* Well until next time, Chanda
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Reviewed By: Kryptic Insanity On: October 29, 2007 23:21 CDT
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*Have not hafe (Yeah I'm one to talk about typos hehe *sweat drops*
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Reviewed By: Kryptic Insanity On: October 29, 2007 23:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just stumbled across this and half to say I love it! Definitely the most original fanfic I've come across and very engrossing. There were some typos/spelling/grammatical errors but they did nothing to detract from the enjoyment factor. I hope to see more of this soon ans will defiantly be reading your other works ^.^ Ja ne!
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Reviewed By: im_inuyashas_dirty_little_secret [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 10:30 CDT
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ohhhhhh please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Feudal Teller of Tales [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2006 01:49 CST
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Wow...
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Title: :D to you 2!
Reviewed By: tempestflame [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2006 12:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey,the chapter did not suck!!....a little short,but hey. It was worth it.*bows* Update soon Luna-sama
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Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 08:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So the things they see as a past life even in them their human? Wow this just gets deep with every step it's take it's beautiful the way you pull things together. And I like she's opening up to sango. What was inuyasha looking for? Thank you so much for you kind words. I would love to see some of your poems too. "I'm weak at times yet my body pushs me to fight. I'm in a place where darkness lives yet I most find some light. I want to hide from people but my lips want to talk ask for help. I see a long road before me but my feet still wish to walk and see whats at the end. I am human I give and take...live and break...see and hear. I need to love and be love. With I may do in the end... Iam human again." Wow I their's other one! Your story is pulling lots out of me I thank you for that update soon.
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Reviewed By: OrlandoLover [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2006 16:54 CDT
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loved the new chap...update soon...SAVE THE EARTH IT'S THE ONLY PLANET WITH CHOCOLATE...Cheers
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Reviewed By: Lihz On: October 24, 2006 19:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome chappie and srry i couldnt reveiw for the last but its totally awsome and the ff rox my socks socks
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Reviewed By: Crystal2287 On: October 08, 2006 13:02 CDT
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I just wanted to say something in response to one of your author notes at the beginning of a chapter(Forgot which one). It may seem noble to put yourself through horrible heart ache to have the chance at being happy with someone, but everyone forgets that you are entitled to be happy all your life. It almost NEVER works that way but you are entitled to it. You go through hard times in your life, and your heart does stupid things despite your mind knowing better and voicing that knowledge often, but you are entitled to do what you need to to be happy. I know how much it can hurt to love someone who hurts you every day with stupid actions or words. I know what its like to wake up in the morning, crying and not understanding why because you are in love and that shouldn't hurt so much. And I lived with someone in denial for so long it was rediculous, before he broke my heart. And I can look back at it now and know he was horrible for me. He made me more depressed, made me more self conscious, and was so self centered that he couldn't take my feelings into consideration even when screaming at the top of my lungs I said I need you to take care of me. He just wouldn't, and even more so, he blamed me for feeling the way I was. He would ask me not to go spend the night at my parents house 15 minutes away once in a while to say hello, and throw a fit when i did, and then call me clingy when I said I missed him when he'd been out of state for a week. He said when he first met me he thought I wasn't pretty, and then when I was mad at him and asked him to apologize he would say i was overreacting and it wasn't his fault. I would be throwing up in the bathroom or in a bowl, and he would make me clean it up myself and then say he was taking care of me and was being a good boyfriend. Even after all of that, looking back at it and seeing how much it hurt to be near him, how many times I cried for no other reason then just because I was so sad I didn't know what to do, I can still say I love him with all my heart. Its completely idiotic, and it still hurts to see a picture that hasn't been burned yet, or go eat and remember the time I spilled my drink in his lap and the face he made made me laugh for 10 minutes. I guess all I am trying to say is that while the human heart can endure a lot of pain, a lot of it is unnecessary, and yet our hearts do it without us, even if we want to be happy, we can't. To me the thing about InuYasha that I don't get is even with how much in love she can be with InuYasha, no one could endure that much heart ache without more scars and more bitterness then kagome shows. Maybe I just haven't read enough of the manga or seen enough episodes, it just seems she is too perfect. I suppose thats the good part about having the cartoon. I guess I would just like to remind you that while you are writing this story remember how much it would effect someone. Rape is not something that anyone can come out of with being messed up somehow-afraid to be alone, or with weird habits that just make them feel better. Anyway-i like your story, but you have quite a few words that don't work in the story, but guessing by what the words are and what they are replacing I am going to blame spellcheck. Just thought you might want to use a grammar check too. Goodluck continuing your story.
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