| "Sleep Paralysis" Reviews/Comments [ 184 ] |
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Title: wow
Reviewed By: kawaichan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2006 22:41 CDT
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you really do have a talent for getting into their heads, and then telling us what you saw. does that make any sense? anyway, keep updating, i check my email every day hoping to see this one updated!
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Title: I LOVE IT!!
Reviewed By: LadyWolf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 07, 2006 03:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel like I've picked up a book that I can't put down! This fic is so deep, I feel pulled into their world. There's so much pain, love, tears, and fears...it's so real for me. I in some way know how Kags and Inu feel. I've felt like I was in a world much the same...in a way.(I don't want to get too into it.) You're an amzing author, your fic should be in bookstores everywhere! I fall into every part, I can't wait to see how it's *really* going to begin and end.^_^ I know this battle has just begin for them....
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Reviewed By: Outsider On: April 06, 2006 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just wanted to say for the past three years I have had these so called 'night terrors'. The specialists all say they're not real...but they're real to me... What do you do to overcome them? So far my only solution is long nights and plenty of coffee.
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Reviewed By: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com On: April 06, 2006 06:31 CDT
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thank you for the shout out, im glad you like my reviews. i can promise sometimes when i dont review its because of something else, not because i dont like the story. so dont get down, this is a really great story. ive never seen one like it out there(and ive read tons of fanfics for the past 3-4 years, lol shows my life huh?)i really like the dark themes of this story. ive told 2 authors that write darker themes that you dont see enough out there or its too poorly written to read.(gotta give em credit for trying though)this chapter was really good. the fight between Inu and Kags was a classic. for this being an AU youre keeping them in character pretty well. except for Kags being a loner..but thats expected because of the circumstances. good job.
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Reviewed By: xxsilentbeautyxx@hotmail.com On: April 04, 2006 08:19 CDT
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very nicely written..i wonder what he took?? i can think of a few things, but im just not sure. good chapter and happy birthday!
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Reviewed By: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com On: March 25, 2006 20:53 CST
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yay!inu's dream....i guess its not really a 'yay' thing though....but oh well, it made me happy to read your chapter.
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Title: killer story
Reviewed By: chanda (not signed in) On: March 20, 2006 22:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Omg what a wild story this has been so far. I do hope you update soon. Chanda
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Reviewed By: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com On: March 16, 2006 09:26 CST
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nice. i really liked it. are we ever gonna see some of inu's night terrors? and 2 chappies in 2 days, ^.^ great job. i know how hard it is to write about personal things(i had to do it alot in school), but then editing them, and posting them is a whole different story(i could never get up the guts to do that.) i really respect you for posting something so personal to you. its very well done.
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Reviewed By: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com On: March 15, 2006 09:37 CST
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very well done. nice and fluffy at the end! ^.^ and this wasnt rushed at all.
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Title: sleep paralyis
Reviewed By: Diren [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2006 21:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter! Very intersating, hopr you update soon.
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Reviewed By: InuyahasChic [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2006 16:35 CST
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whats going to happen next. im sorry for kagome,i couldnt live in my own personal hell
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Reviewed By: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com On: March 11, 2006 08:37 CST
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i think the ending was a little rushed, but it was good besides that.
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Reviewed By: xxSilentBeautyxx@hotmail.com On: March 09, 2006 08:30 CST
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well another interesting chapter. i love it.
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Reviewed By: TragedyAnn [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2006 03:49 CST
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As soon as I think I have something figured out your next chapter, even paragraph, blow that theory away. It's so mysterious. But I love it! Keep up the good work, you're an awesome writer.
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Reviewed By: YourSqueaker On: March 07, 2006 14:34 CST
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Wow... I am truely speechless. Wow. I wish I had more to say. I suppose I'd enjoy your story more if... Well you know. *sighs* It's wonderful and so sad. Wow. wow.... Ummm. Just let me know when you update.
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