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Reviewed By: inukoro On: April 25, 2006 04:35 EDT
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lalala. nabiki actually getting riled up for someone else other than her is interesting. well anyway looking forward to the next update. oh yeah REVIEW! haha dont you worry ill keep on nagging you until you keep your end of the bargain
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Title: Yowza...
Reviewed By: Strawberry Inuyasha On: April 23, 2006 06:19 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, interesting take.... But you seem to be slightly rushed about your chapters... Please keep updateing but don't have a coronery... Hehehe. Sorry. Kidding SI.
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Title: awesome
Reviewed By: Anaki Of The Blood Wolves [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 23:53 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic, the way you portray Ranma is awesome! This is one of the best crossovers between Ranma/Inu I've ever read so update soon!
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 19:54 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**pounces on chapter** Wow....I nearly did a repeat of the fall off the couch that I did a few chapters ago. Ranma actually hurt Akane! It is true that he's never hurt her in the past, but you know what? It was probably the only way to truly get her attention. Because it is exactly true what you said: she never really listens to him. I also find it interesting that when Ranma decides to end their engagement that Akane fell back on the one argument that both she and Ranma agreed was stupid: the honor to the family thing. She may have loved him at one time, but all the craziness and multiple fiancees poisoned it, and left it nothing more than a competition for Ranma. Her jealousy has always been well-known, even when she denied it. And one thing I noticed that did worry me a little about Akane: when she slapped Ranma, she ENJOYED it. She took pleasure out of hurting him. She's always been violent, but if its escalated to this point, something is wrong with her. I have a feeling a certain Shikon no Miko is in for a fight in the near future - and I bet Akane will play dirty (not that Kagome can't take it, but you know what I mean). But it was a very good (if startling) chapter, and I certainly can't wait until Tuesday and your next update!
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Title: I'm going to be real honest with you.
Reviewed By: Master Roy On: April 21, 2006 18:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your chapters are much too short, and you sometimes over-exaggerate the Ranma 1/2 cast's behaviors(A very common occurance that I've seen in...almost every Ranma 1/2 story)...other than that, it's an okay story to read. Then again, I base chapter length on that of stories like Insertion, Gaijin, Destiny's child, Genma's Daughter...some people just can't write out long, detailed, multi-evented 20 page chapters all the time. Not that this is a bad thing. People get better. Please, go read one of the stories I mentioned above.(You should be able to find them...and every single Ranma 1/2 fic ever written on http://rakhal.com/FFIndex/lstmain.html Also, these chapter lengths are good for something like the Anime Addventure (Google that one) which are limited to 1-10k per chapter.
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Reviewed By: xtor49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 17:44 EDT
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Although it's common in fanfics, I've never seen Nabiki as the type to worry about an insult to her family. But it does make things more interesting.
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Reviewed By: ladyofthedragons1984 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2006 17:40 EDT
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woohoo confrontation between akane and ranma... that was awesome!!! that went so much better then i pictured it, it totally rocked!!! can't wait to see what you come up with on tuesday
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Reviewed By: Kallipso Eclipse On: April 21, 2006 11:53 EDT
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I love it, I love it, I love it. What will the picture show?*cocks head* When I said that it was classic I mean that it was a perfect way to go. Please write more.
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Reviewed By: les-chan On: April 21, 2006 03:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!!! This is an awesome crossover, one of the best I have ever read. I can't wait to see what happens next! And also, Akane deserved the treatment she got from Ranma!! Nabiki better listen to Ranma's threats or she and the others (excluding Kasumi) will end up dead.
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Title: Go Kagome!
Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 09:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kagome rocks! Just taking down the demons, teaching priestesses. She rules. Also I think ranma is cool too.Although I have a question. Does ranma look like inuyasha in his human form or totally different than Inuyasha? Kagome is kikyo's reincarnation and she looks like kikyo.So does ranma look like Inuyasha??????????
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 08:14 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
**shivers and relaxes** Ahhhh, my fix. You do know you've made me a junkie for this story, right? **chuckles** I did enjoy the chapter, though it was interesting that Inuyasha hadn't been told about it, and didn't even seem to know it had happened. Of course, as over-protective as he sometimes is, its not surprising that Kagome never mentioned it to him. **grins at the thought Inuyasha's expression had he known at the time that she put herself in danger - without him around to protect her** I certainly can't wait for the next chapter! Oh, and as to putting reviewer replies in the chapter, or replying to the reviewer directly - I'm good either way. I certainly don't mind getting e-mails from you, if you want to go that way. Do whatever works best for you. Hope your exams went well, and see you next chapter!
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Title: Ha!
Reviewed By: Alterfano [MediaMiner Member] On: April 19, 2006 07:57 EDT
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Conditioner! Took me a few minutes, but I got it. Very cute. So that disc wasn't the one that Cologne gave Happosai in the anime? I was half expecting Kagome to meet her (but now that I think about it, she's only supposed to be, like, 300 years old, right?)
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Reviewed By: Calamity - Queen of Cordite On: April 19, 2006 06:16 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
To be honest, as far as I know, the NWC thing, while very widely used and acccepted, is a "fanon" term. I didn't say anything before because it's your story and if I'm the only person it bugged then I didn't think it worthy of mention. -- I can understand about the cliffhanger thing. I never try to do them on purpose since I can't stand them myself. =D -- Reading through my last review, I was chagrinned to see all the spelling errors. Guess thats what I get for trying to leave a review when I had a migraine and was on some pretty good pain meds. =D Sorry 'bout that. -- Good chapter. Thanks for sharing. -- Calamity
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Title: Back again ne?
Reviewed By: inukoro On: April 19, 2006 02:40 EDT
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ah! i dont think my last review got through... oh well... kagome speaking bad chinese? hahaha. u even put in the menomaru arc. nice job. and here another reminder: REVIEW NE?!
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Reviewed By: ladyofthedragons1984 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2006 23:31 EDT
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stupid dial up it's evil isn't it? i love the names you gave the chinese amazons... gave me a pretty good laugh can't wait for tuesday... tendos going to appear in that chpater? at least kasumi? (sorry she's my favorite tendo)
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