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Reviewed By: ebit 333 On: April 27, 2006 14:13 EDT
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I really like this story! Please write more it is very good! Can't wait to see what happens!!!
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Reviewed By: xtor49 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 22:13 EDT
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I figured Ranma's actions were because of something along those lines. If the NWC isn't careful, one or more of them is going to end up dead. I love Happi's comment at the end.
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Reviewed By: eternalsailorsolarwind [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 19:33 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woot!! A new chapter! And I *really* loved this one (like I dislike any of your other chapters, right? ;p )! Starting off the chapter by underlining how Kagome and Ranma's relationship has gone was PERFECT! I also liked seeing the remorse on Ranma's part for hurting Akane (though I'm still worried about her for other reasons). It just shows how honorable he really is, which is amazing considering how he was raised. I am just a little surprised that neither none of the people in Nabiki's pictures (Shippou, Sesshoumaru, Kagome and Ranma himself) noticed that she was hanging around. Of course, they might have, and just let her take (most) of the pictures. Do I sense an upcoming argument (battle) in the next chapter, perhaps? Shoule be interesting. **grins** Anyway, really wonderful chapter, and I can't wait until your next update.
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Reviewed By: TheDudeAbides On: April 26, 2006 17:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh, just one thing. University uniform? I've never heard of any university or college requiring a uniform, outside of some the very strict religious schools here in the states.
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Reviewed By: Kallipso Eclipse On: April 26, 2006 15:17 EDT
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Oh God, I can't wait for the shit to hit the fan as the saying goes. I hope that you update soon after this one because you have me on the edge of my seat. Waiting for more. What is the Wrecking crew going to do when they realize that they are second best when faced with Inu's family?
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Reviewed By: bunny3km [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 13:39 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update, I would like to what happens next. Very good story telling.
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Reviewed By: TheDudeAbides On: April 26, 2006 13:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Uh, just one thing. University uniform? I've never heard of any university or college requiring a uniform, outside of some the very strict religious schools here in the states.
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Reviewed By: crazy-chick14 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 08:55 EDT
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WOW!! LOVE DA STORY HERE!! KEEP IT UP^-^ UPDATE SOON PLEASE
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Reviewed By: badgerwolf On: April 26, 2006 07:20 EDT
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Oh dear, those immature morons think they're going to make Ranma pay? I can't wait to see what happens next...a serious beat down is completely in order.
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Title: UPDATE
Reviewed By: lilcar12(LOGGED OFF) On: April 26, 2006 02:44 EDT
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omg!!! U gotta update quicker. I'm itchin' to find out what's gonna happen!!! I can't believe that you left it there o.0 Well, update soon, i mean really really soon cuz' i wanna read it ^-^
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Reviewed By: golden_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 02:14 EDT
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What! No! Big confrontation! Ah! Please update soon!
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Reviewed By: Dream girl On: April 26, 2006 02:07 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
update!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 00:11 EDT
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sORRY i MEANT nABIKI*
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Reviewed By: BiggestInuyashaFANever [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 00:10 EDT
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I Love your story! Akane and Mabiki are devious.How the hell did they get pictures of Inuyasha or Ranma ( whatever same to me) and Kagome having sex? Perverted much.Please answer my questions....... Does ranma look like Inuyasha or not?
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Reviewed By: ladyofthedragons1984(the stupid server won't keep me signed in) On: April 25, 2006 22:36 EDT
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oh man thursday's chapter outght to be good i so cannot wait... hehe hey my span filter spells misk today fun i like that word i'm going to have to come up with a definition for it
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