| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: savvy_rae [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 18:30 PDT
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I would like to let you know that I love yuor work!! You KNOW how to write. I have been reading other writers fanfics and they confuse the mess out of me!! Your work is one of the only ones that I don't have to reread 50 times just to understand where they are going!! PLEASE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: leeksandmisosoup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 13:11 PDT
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I loved the wedding chappie! Are Charity and Ben gonna be a Purity story? Ben Phillips would be a great mate! I'm so happy that everyone could find the happiness with their mates again. And, like I said at the end of Phantasm, I bet Gunnar will be the whipped one with trillions of pups hanging onto him lol. I'm so glad Jilli's happy. I out-right laughed when Jillian confessed about jumping on the branch. What a sneaky three-year-old! The epilogue's gonna be great. ///leeksandmisosoup///
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Reviewed By: itsaKTASTROPHE [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 12:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
can't wait for the epilogue! after this, will you start the Purity short with Morio and Meara? or will you update it as you please like Desideratum? or will you start the new Purity story??? gawsh i need to KNOW!!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 11:00 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 10:54 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Jillies wedding that was a long one. yet so danm interesting. Glad that Nez and Ryo are back to normal. As normal as normal gan be for them lol... great updates. Looking foward to any and all stories.
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Reviewed By: Sweetprincess 17 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 10:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE POST THE EPILOGUE TOMORROW. iCAN'T WAIT TILL MONDAY. I KNOW I'M SELFISH BUT I'M HOOKED ON THIS STORY. KEPP UP THE GOOD WORK, SUE.
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Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 09:48 PDT
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Please...You SHALL post it tomorrow...please...I want the ending to this story badly...partially cause i love it so much and partially cause I want Morio and Meara's story to get started! I know Im evil...but you are too good to resist!
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Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 09:30 PDT
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Never mind that...this is not like FF.net so yeah I will just review now. Good chapter keep it up and yeah pleae dear god post the last 2 chapters this weekend!!!!!!!!PLEASE!
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Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 09:28 PDT
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Sue wants Sue gets...so just to show just HOW much I want to read these chapters this weekend I am reviewing your last 3 chapters to make up for it.
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Reviewed By: itsaKTASTROPHE [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 07:32 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this chapter sooo much! i love the way you were able to sum up all of the Purity stories together and how each of the couples were currently doing or feeling. I just couldn't help but feel that when it's time for Mikio's story (he's having his own Purity Story right?) it would be really ironic if his mate turned out to be a gymnast of some sort because of his balance issues. So i was wondering if you could give me any type of hint??? eheh??? well anyways i love how this story is taking effect. i love all of your stories and how you weave each and every one of them so creatively and imaginatively.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2006 07:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: aww Gavin is a hero
Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 20:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awwwww Gavin!!! he is a hero!!! im so happy that everyone is all together on the ranch but with all the mix of generations and relations its hard to remember who's who....great chapter!!--but this seems like the end of Purity 6 *tear*
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Reviewed By: Piett600 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 16:31 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice! I loved the narrative technique going from couple to couple, and it was a nice way to check up on all the folks we know and love (as well as getting a look-in on some of the newer folk). And you write Sesshy so well, too, it's always a pleasure to see him turn up!
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Title: Loved it
Reviewed By: smallflower [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 16:20 PDT
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Awsome chapter!! I loved the round-robin of everyone's relationship. You are right about BOTOX being all capitalized. I work for a company that designs websites for doctors. It's supposed to look like this: BOTOX® Cosmetic. (But since someone's saying it, they wouldn't say "BOTOX® Cosmetic".) Anyway, that's my education of the Sue for the day. ;) :D I can't wait for the next update.
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Title: wow!!
Reviewed By: zorioko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 14:53 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of my favorite chapters!!! It was great to see almost all of the characters. Especially Sesshomaru...... I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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