| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: xenus [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 14:43 PDT
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I've enjoyed reading this immensely. I hope for future review success in all of your fics. Everyone loves and adores your characterizations, and you do well in that respect. I wish you and anyone and everyone you know well. Good luck! *I Hope it helps in some way*
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 13:32 PDT
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okay i had a question about the previous chapter...i thought that at the end of purity5 bas and sydnie had 2 children...bailey and olivia but in the chapter cain spoke as if bas didnt have any children yet. can u clear that up for me? anyways this was a good chapter, it was really sweet how the whole family was together. i enjoyed the interaction and reading ur stories inspired me out of my writers block. so thanks for that. update again soon this purity has a great plot.
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Reviewed By: leeksandmisosoup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2006 11:05 PDT
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Woah! This is slightly getting creepy with all it's mysteries and freaky youkai research... Poor Jillian... She must be so upset. The bright side is she'll be getting married! You have done an immensely wonderful job bringing so many characters to life. I hope you continue to. ?leeksandmisosoup?
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Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 23:19 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! a chip!? an address!? her parents!? wow....lots of information in the last two chapters! I couldn't believe my eyes when I checked my mail and discovered the late night update....it made me soooo happy! lol....loved the update sue....thanks a lot!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 22:01 PDT
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Hmm....well, referring to the last thing in Cain's point of view, always go with your gut instinct right? It's usually the best way to go lol. Hmm....I'm really interested to find out what this research is.
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 13:49 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter. I couldn't believe Cain and Bas were arguing. Silly guys. lol. I really wish that Bas and Evan would get along though. It would be nice to see them actually seem to like each other. lol.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 13:23 PDT
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I felt so bad for Jilli when she started screaming at Bas and Cain. Gin just yelling at Cain was funny though! Reminded me of Kagome and InuYasha lol. Hmm....I wonder if Dr. Avis will talk now.
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Title: bio what?
Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 10:31 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
a bio-chip...wow...nice twist...but now im like jumping up and down for the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 09:59 PDT
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Heheh... are those things a reality today. I mean the Xytroph scanner and all. Or am i just thinking to much of it. Anyway excellent update
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Reviewed By: leeksandmisosoup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 09:39 PDT
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Wow, so much in one chappie! Cain can sure manipulate any situation, ne? Hmm, maybe there's some top secret info, or something about Jillian's parents, on the bio-chip... Hope we'll find out soon, 'cause suspense is killing me. ~leeksandmisosoup~ P.S. Another family reunion chappie coming up? Like in P5 when Morio, Mikio, Bas, and Gunsie were goofing off with Isabelle? I'll cross my fingers.
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2006 08:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: haha
Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 19:13 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha go gavin..by the way, the whole door thing...yea its hott!! great chapter!! cant wait til thursday!!
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 19:07 PDT
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That Jillian just full of suprises Haha. Anyway looking foward to next post and finfing out what they were looking for.
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Reviewed By: leeksandmisosoup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 18:18 PDT
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Yay! Gavvie saved the day! And I think Eli is a girly name... Great fight scene, though. Can't wait for next chappie!
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 17:06 PDT
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WOOOOO!! Kicked some serious ass! Wonderful. I love to see them fight. Jilli is so cute. Wonderful chapter. :D
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