| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 16:42 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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ALRIGHT!!! GO GAVIN!!! GO CAIN!!! It's great to have them in action. This was a absolutely GREAT chapter. Jilli is just too much...after all that and she gets aroused too...LOL. Heck with that description of his manliness (demonliness?) I'd get aroused too.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 15:11 PDT
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Hmm...I wonder how many more hero points Gavin gets for that lol. Yes! Cain in action; always wanted to see him actually fight someone, since Cal was a coward; loved it!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kds1222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 11:45 PDT
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Another awesome chapter. Who can blame Jilli for getting hot with Gavin going all macho in front of her. I'm really excited for Desideratum!!!! Thank you for updating that Sue!!!
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Reviewed By: crolynx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2006 10:49 PDT
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YEAH!!!!! Cain kicked A$$!!! WOOT!!! lol. Anyways thanks for updating desideratum again. I've been wondering if that one would ever continue. Thanks for writing all your stories. Ja ne, Andrew
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Reviewed By: Shadow_Within [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 21:13 PDT
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I'm expressing my frustration and other rainbow of emotions in an impressive variety of illogical words varying in volume from both ends of the spectrum. Yes, this story has gotten THAT good. (Not that I'm surprised by that.) And I'm stuttering so much, I sound like Gavin! W-I-Sue!!! Yep. I really hate your cliffhangers. But then again, the line between love and hate is barely discernible. Much love. Caitlin
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Reviewed By: BladesoftheValkyrie [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 19:39 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh man, this story is great. I absolutely love it, especially since now Gavin gets to strut his stuff. Use the force, Gavvie! ^_^
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Reviewed By: leeksandmisosoup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 19:02 PDT
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Woah! Let's just hope Gavin gets outta there unharmed, er... not harmed much and that InuYasha and Cain hurry up and get there. We all know Evan will live to die another day, lol. I was wondering, in Evan's Purity story, will it explain why Evan's the way he is? You know, his bad boy, dope-smokin', name-changin', asshole (slightly) personality? 'Cause I suddenly remembered when Bas accused Evan of deserting the family and whatnot. Anywho, I'll be happy when Gavin and Jillian get out of there and have had all twenty or more pups! ///leeksandmisosoup///
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 15:05 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome chapter. Yay finally a chapter with fighting in it. Woot. I hope Gavin kicks Eli's ass. Muahahahhahaha! *ahem*
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 14:46 PDT
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Action! Yes, love it! Man, I can't wait to read this next fight coming up! Wonderful work, Sue!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 05:56 PDT
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All of this is related to Jillian's parents?? You know this raises the question of what exactly happened to them the nighjt they died. Is this another situation like w/Sydnie's parents where Cain screwed up?
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Reviewed By: eye1thesandbox [MediaMiner Member] On: July 09, 2006 16:14 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm enjoying this continuation as much as I have enjoyed the others, however, I have one question. Will Hank be getting his own story? He is such a great character and more often than not tends to steal the scene. Just curious.
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Title: GAVIN!!
Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 08, 2006 20:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow...u have perfected the (evil) art of cliffhangers--so im guessing this has to do with her real parents and not the whole "tai-fuckin-youkai" thing...wonder what they need her for...GAVIN: HURRY UP AND SAVE HER ALREADY!!--great chapter again!!
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Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 19:46 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That is so mean! Okay....not really. But it made me cry..."I . . . I love you, too, Jilli." It's soooo SAD!!!! Hurry and make it better! Please!
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Reviewed By: leeksandmisosoup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 11:07 PDT
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OMG! OMG! OMG! OMG! What is this? Some sort of sick love? A vendetta? Kyaaaaa~! Gavin better get a movin'! And Cain and Inu will come save the say, too, right? Right?! Honest to God, Sue, the suspense is killing me!
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Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2006 09:44 PDT
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your evil. and that dude is her dad...just another of my wild theories....but you must stop with the evil cliffhangers...
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