"Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 23:35 PDT Comment/Review: Aww, that was sooo sad! I feel so bad for Jillian! I wonder what the guys want with her...I take it that Kennedy was her father, or am I just jumping to conclusions?
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 22:13 PDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Wow. That was an awesome chapter. This is getting really interesting. Now we get to find out about Jilli's real mother. Can't wait for the next update.
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Title: inuyashaloverr Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 20:22 PDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 15:10 PDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Poor Jilli. I can't wait till they catch up with that Mickey B. Unlucky for him that he's a youkai.
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Title: uh oh Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 12:00 PDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: oh man...that guy/youkai is sooo gonna get it for even trying to touch her let alone kidnap Jillian. i mean first he has to deal with Gavin and Evan ans then when Cain and Inuyasha comes....ouch--but whats in Denver?--Great chapter by the way!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 11:12 PDT Comment/Review: Gavin needs MORE hero points? Wow...well go get 'em!!!!
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Reviewed By: Xoblackchildxo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 09:56 PDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: oh thriler =) this is going to be good... I absolutley love these purity stories. but this one os close to home...
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Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 08:56 PDT Comment/Review: You are unspeakably evil....just downright evil...evilness...Im speechless because of the evilness....
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Reviewed By: crolynx [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2006 05:19 PDT Comment/Review: I really hope that Mickey B. realizes(or in this case doesn't) that he just dug his own grave. Gavin, Evan, Inuyasha, and Cain...he's already dead he might as well dig his own grave and hold the funeral now. Well, have fun, and I definitely loved this last few chapters since Jillian "claimed her mate." I wonder if Cody and family will ever figure out they work for a "mythological creature" as apposed to human beings. I also agree with your reviewer, a human male with female youkai would be interesting. Ja ne, Crolynx ;p
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Title: Great! Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 23:35 PDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: An intriguing turn of events.
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Title: nice Reviewed By: Pianogoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 23:00 PDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: You are my hero...... I've read all of the purity stories up to date...hmmm, how about pairing one of our inu boys with a female that's always saving him?
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Title: YAY!!! Reviewed By: Kitty BoBo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 17:34 PDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I LOOOOVE the new chapter "Flower Girls"!!! I KNEW IT, I KNEW IT, I JUST KNEW it wasn't over!! It couldnt possibly be that easy!! I just love the way you write; eventhough i knew something was gonna happen i was not expecting it to happen so soon! And in front of Sherry's kids?! OMG i was having a fit! And the part where the guys were talking to the lawyer... it was awesome, i was cheering them as they stormed out the office! The story is so very good, you MUST continue! OOO im just itching to know what happens! Keep it up, youre on a roll!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: AppallinglyCopacetic [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 17:31 PDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: Such an intense story. I think I see what's going on now. The human was just a tool, a distraction. What will the real stalker think of her being mated to Gavin!? Can't wait to read more of your excellent fanfic.
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Title: last two chapters Reviewed By: monkeyseemonkeynodo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 15:44 PDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Hiya there!!!! =) yay! Charity was in the the previous chapter!!! yay me!!! i like that character(its mostly because she has my name) hee hee ... all i can say right now is WOW!!!! i was so glad that they had caught Mickey B. but i seemed a little too easy to me.... and then i read the next chapter and i am all like "HUH?????" " I DON'T GET IT I THOUGHT THEY CAUGHT THE BAD GUY!!!" hee hee i woke my baby brother who was sleeping... mom wasn't happy... any way.... i love the suspense... well.. i guess we'll all have to wait until tomorrow to know whats going to happen.... good job writing and please keep it up!!!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 14:16 PDT Comment/Review: I had a feeling something like that was going to happen in this chapter. Oooh, Gavin is not going to be happy. And he's youkai! Cain, send your future son-in-law after him; it's time to see Gavin in action! Hahaha.
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