| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 14:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW!! That was so awesome! I figured that the Mickey B. that Inuyasha and the others had captured wasn't the real Mickey B. Because I remember in one of the earlier chapters Mickey B. was a bob cat youkai? Or something like that. Or... maybe Im just on crack. lol. Anyway. That was an awesome chapter, as were the previous ones before it. Can't wait for the next update.
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Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 11:48 PDT
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Evil cliffhanger Sueric....very evil...I had something else to say but I forgot it because of all your evilness...evil...*shudders* just plain evil... truly remarkably undoubtably evil...
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Reviewed By: leeksandmisosoup [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 11:11 PDT
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I haven't reviewed in a while... Hmm. The suspense is killing me! Who is that youkai? I wonder if he's the one at the beginning who screwed up her car in Cancun... Kyaaa! Gavin, get your ass in gear and go save her!
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 08:35 PDT
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Darn it!!! Jillian's been kidnapped?! How the heck did they mix up Mickey B. w/ that human if the guy that just took Jillian is Mickey B.? Gavin is NOT going to be happy when he finds out. I say that when Gavin hunts him down he should be allowed to do whatever he wants to the jerk. After all, Mickey B. is youkai, so they don't have to follow the human authorities legal system, do they?(yes, I am grinning evilly here b/c this guy is an *ss)
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Title: I knew it!
Reviewed By: PurpleNeko-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 07:55 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter! When I read the last one there's a lot of questions in my head and a lot of thoughts too, like the stalker is supposed to be youkai and catching the "stalker" in the previous chapter was so easy, the characters can't go that easily. Is that youkai the real Mikey B. then? Wonder what would happen to Jillian? Hope she'll be ok! Great chapter and you really got me doubting that last chapter, keep it up!
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 00:42 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just as ya thinkl everythings fine this stuff happens. Yo but thats what aslo makes youre stories intrestin... the suprise factor.
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Reviewed By: sprsnc20 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2006 00:28 PDT
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Hello again Sue. I haven't been able to review for about a month because our computer caught a virus and had to be replaced. Anyway, I just read the last twenty or so chapters nonstop, and I've gone through every emotion possible in about an hour's time. Your writing has a quality that almost forces your readers to feel everything the characters are going through. Wonderful work as always. I did feel that the whole stalker capture scene was a bit anti-climactic. I figured he'd end up causing a lot more trouble than he did, but then this new chapter comes. Suddenly it seems the trouble is just getting started. I can't wait for your next chapters, now that I can read them again. Keep up the excellent work, and happy writing!
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 23:45 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: kds1222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 21:28 PDT
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Oh s*** Poor Jilli. I knew you had something else up your sleeve. um if you want I can make a 'weapons' family tree. if you just send me the info on them. I'd be more than happy to.
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Reviewed By: serendith [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 18:17 PDT
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You know I almost feel sorry for him - pulling this when Cain, Inuyasha, Ben and Gavin are all together and already pissed ... almost. I also was wondering - do any of your future fanfics ever include a human male pairing with a youkai female? I was thinking about this the other day and how intimidating the pack is to Gavin and how much worse that would be fore a human - also if a human male would even be accepted. Then I started thinking about what a great character that would be. However, I must admit that I love the "knight in shining armour" that the inu's tend to be. Anywho ... thought I would thow that out there. Thanks for updating so quickly!
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Title: hmmm
Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 16:06 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sue..u are soooo sneaky...that seemed too easy, something isnt right......hmmmm haha anyways great chapter!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 15:54 PDT
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I kinda feel sorry for Mickey B. He has to deal with a lot of tempermental people lol. I kinda wished that Gavin would have caught him and gave him a punch here and there lol. HAPPY 4TH OF JULY!
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Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 04, 2006 08:31 PDT
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Aww That didnt answer nearly enough of my questions...guess Ill wait for tomorrow. Just how early do you upload these things? Maybe I sleep in too late or something. So right now I'm thinking weapons...you've got the family tree thing on your site I think you should make a chart with everyones weapons cause thats what intices me the most. Like each characters weapon of choice, its attributes, its name that'd be flippin sweet. Well I always end my reviews the same way so.........Peace out.
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Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 22:09 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well....she knows. i wonder when or how they'll figure out the stalker isnt human. hmmmm....something to think about. anyway....HAPPY 4th OF JULY!!!!
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Reviewed By: kds1222 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 15:54 PDT
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Thanks Sueric! I must have mised the description, somehow. Another great chapter. I thought Jilli would get pissed about not knowing, but I like the 'my hero' bit alot better. I sure hope the men of the family, can control themselves when they find this Mikey.
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