| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 14:48 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i cnat believe Jillian FINALLY found out...but that means Mickey B knows shes at the ranch..hopefully if he goes there then Evan and the "old man" will ge to him first...i cant wait !!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 11:58 PDT
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Wow, all the tension in the air...this human guy better run for his life because he's gonna have to deal with the whole family when they get him! Poor Jilli, I knew she'd find out some day; but that way was sad.
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Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2006 11:00 PDT
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My computer is so screwed up right now its not even funny. Some days when my internet doesnt work I have to get my own friend and Beta reader to send me the chapters via Messenger. I'm glad to have her, I dont know what I'd do if I couldnt read this story. This chapter kinda seemed like the guy was on the ranch...I suspect Cody but that seems almost TOO evil for you and completely illogical. Still you never know...you are one crazy Person Sueric afterall. Hopefully ill find out tomorrow. Peace out.
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Reviewed By: Hitomeshy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 02, 2006 06:02 PDT
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YOU GO GIRL!!! GET YOUR MAN!! AWW, THAT WAS COMPLETELY AWESOME!! WRITE MORE!WRITE MORE!!
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2006 13:52 PDT
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HA! that was funny. i noticed that despite the fact that jillian is adopted, she has traits of cain that his blood children would, blue eyes, blond hair, her penchant for being nude without shame (Bellaniece.lol) and to add to that all of cains children adopted or otherwise are perverts. lmao. except maybe bas hes a bit on the shy side of it all. i have a question. what is the relationship between evan and inuyasha as well as evan and the rest of his family i'm a bit confused about that? i adore evan, i wonder if he and madison will eventually become mates, i just dont see evan taking a mate or madison taking a mate thats not each other and then the other being okay with it, however unattactched they are. i can twait to read evans story. anyways another great chapter, and oh lord inuyasha is gonna raise hell i can see it now. oh one more thing? why hasnt mikio been taught to fight, is it because hes so clumsy? ( i noticed hes the only one of inuyasha and kagomes sons that calls inuyasha papa, its cute)
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 22:07 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 14:29 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay. An apperance from Inuyasha! :D I cant wait to see what havoc Evan and Inu come up with. lol. And Mikio... is he getting sick or something? Anyway. Great chapter. Cant wait for the next one.
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 12:25 PDT
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I love Gavin. He's so cute. And it looks like Gavin & Jillian better get ready for Inuyasha & Evan invading their peace & tranquility. With those two around I doubt that there's going to be much peace. And WHAT is going on w/Mikio? Why is he sick?
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Title: Ride her Cowboy
Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 07:51 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww....Ride her Cowboy! lol....I Loved this chapter! We even heard from the old farts (Inuyasha and Kagome)! ^_^ Oh, and something is on my mind, doesnt it seem unfair that youkai can compete in things like rodeos? I mean, of course they'll perform better than any human, they're stronger than any human. Anyway....thats not important! Thanks so very much for the update Sue....I Really Loved It! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2006 05:48 PDT
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Good Morning dear Sue! Just wanted to drop a small review to let you know that I am still enjoying reading all of your stories! hehe. Couldn't help but laugh my little head off over Jillian's last comments of cowboys, rodeos, and, ahem, riding. I'm not going to lie. I laughed even more of when I thought that an alternative final thought from her could be something along the lines of "ride em' cowboy ;)" hehehe. That's like the dirty last thoughts... seperate from the standard final thoughts. Ah, I better go get ready for work. I hate being a "grown-up." Bye now! ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: kds1222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 23:51 PDT
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This chapter was both funny, cute and crazy (Kagome 82!!! It's hard to get your head around that, Inuyasha too.) Question: What does Jilli look like? I don't think I've seen a picture, other than the one when she was little and sleeping in Bas' bed. Amazing writing once again.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 23:05 PDT
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Aww, I feel so bad for Mikio! I could just picture Gavin on a bull too; that'd make a great picture!
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Title: chapter27
Reviewed By: Raniatlw [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 23:00 PDT
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Lovely chapter!! I'm going to miss this story well I'm gone on a two month trip. I'm going to have to find myself a good internet cafe. Well anyways can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 15:00 PDT
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YES! YESSSSS!!!!!WAHOO!Way to go Gavvie. They're finally mates. I'm sooo happy for them. But I can't believe Jillian told her father that she & Gavin were in the middle of *ahem* "claiming" each other. Poor Gavin. Cain is so going to want to throttle him. But I have another question. Are you going to resolve the issue of Mickey B? B/c he's still out there & hasn't been caught yet.hmmm. . .
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Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2006 12:42 PDT
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The hEaVEN's balls say it's about dayum time! I'm reading this in the apartment office, I don't have net access at the moment, but I couldn't resist letting you know how much I love this ficcy! It's just too cute! Anywho, thanks for sharing, luv it! luff ya! ~frankie
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