| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 12:59 PDT
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I love Jillian she is so sweet! And who's Gavin kidding they are so mates. I mean they sleep together, he can't be without her. It's really so cute. I know Sue that you said that you wouldn't be updating as often but I'll still be waiting for another Chap. Great work as alway's.
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 12:52 PDT
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Gavin is so sweet. ^^ Jillian's lucky. And Evan is hilarious. ^^
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Reviewed By: katgirlofthenight [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 11:52 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very freaky, with the Mickey D. emails. Thanks for the update!!! ~Kat
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 16:44 PDT
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So Jillian's a water youkai, huh? Cool! ^^ I think I'm really going to enjoy this one, not that I don't love all your work, but I digress... Great chappie! ^^
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Reviewed By: KeyTobias5 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2006 06:03 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this chapter. I can see how much Jillian cares for Gavin and how much Gavin cares for her, even though he won't admit it to himself. I was just curious, what type of youkai are Jillian and Gavin? I know Jillian is a water based but what kind? Did you mention it in one of the other Purties and I may have missed it? I was just curious. Keep up the good work and I look foreword to more. ~Toby
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 21:19 PDT
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IIIIII So love you to death right now. I've been sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for you to update. Jillian reminds me so much of Gin. Her kind heart and bubbly nature. I love her and Gavin's relationship, and what's his deal hpw come he doesn't belive that he's Jilli's mate?
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 17:43 PDT
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i like this story already (heh, as if i wouldnt like anything you wrote - btw your belated april fools joke had me in tears i was laughing so hard BRILLIANT WORK!) its so drastically different because jillian says they are already mates, and i think thats what i find so interesting about it, now to see how she convinces gavin, that will be interesting! cant wait for more!
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 11:11 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
XD Awesome chapter! Cant wait for the next one... and I hope Gavin finds her necklace.
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Title: Aaaawwww....
Reviewed By: hanyouwings [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 10:54 PDT
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I have a feeling I'm going to adore this story!! I love all your stories, and I get so excited when you post new chapters! Did you know that I check my email countless times a day looking for your updates...not that I expect you to update that much, but that's how much I love your writing!! Ugh, I sound like a crazed fan don't I? Oh well, it's just so darn fun...anyway...I'm going to go obsess over Purity 6 now...and dream about Mikio...aawwww I love his twitchy left ear! So cute. so cute!! I hope we'll get to see him some in Purity 6... huggles Mikio...aaahhhh
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Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 08:07 PDT
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I can't believe that P5 is almost over already! Still, I can't wait to see how P6 unfolds. Would you believe that I was actually thinking about this story this morning, Sueric? I know that sounds weird, but... I was wondering about when it would next be updated and then, to my utter surprise, there's the notification in my inbox. I was so excited. ^^ Thank you so much for the chapter! Can't wait for the next one.
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Title: Welcome To Mexico
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 07:53 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am already hooked on this story so bad that it's not even funny. I kept reading the first chapter over and over again especially the part where Gavin tells Jillian that he's transferring to Maine to be closer to her. Awww, he wants to keep being Jillian's hero, but doesn't like the idea of her being with another man. This is going to be a really sweet and funny story based on being best friends. I am loving Jillian and Gavin's characters alot. Thanks for the update and take care.
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Title: Runs in the family?
Reviewed By: phalon23 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 01:42 PDT
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Wow, this was just interesting... Sounds a bit like the whole Nez/Ryo deal. :) They're very cute couple... Kinda couple. XD I love how you've started to set up things here. It's very intriguing! Can't wait to read more Sue!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 01:19 PDT
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Aww, well, I've read your stories a million times to know that if a youkai recognizes its mate then the other one has to as well; but it's sad to think that Gavin believes he won't be that guy for Jillian. I loved her eating habits lol, I'd be doing the same thing.
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Reviewed By: Lennex [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 00:58 PDT
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First off thanks for that tip on the refresh. ive been fighting that for so long now lol. Great chapter, Im glad you said here phantasm was done, i wasnt sure or not hehe. but now im exicted to see how gavin and jilli get along. you hinted to alot of things between them in phantasm and all so now its going to be great to go in depth. till next chapter :)
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Title: Thanks for the Answers
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2006 00:51 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, most interesting. I know its early in the story, but its still rather intriguing. Like Phantasm, you kept me on the edge with that one, trying to figure things out and you're gonna do it again with this one. But I love it all the same. And thanks much for answering my questions. I really didnt who was what and that. Thanks! Update when you can.
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