| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: Southgirl4life [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 20:16 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You have got to be one of the best writers I have ever encountered. Better than those who are professionals and do so for a living. I've read every single one of your Purity stories and I love then all, in fact I'm actually going to attempt to draw the ENTIRE family. One generation at a time of course. This story is getting great! I love it! It sounds a lot like Gavin recognizes that he can't live without Gin but he's too thick to actually realize that they're mates. That's just a little prediction from me I have no clue what you're going to do. Anyway, hope you read some of my fanfics on here and on fanfiction.not. My user name on there is Brandtishot. Hope to get some reviews from you soon!
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: May 02, 2006 03:23 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow so early into the story and such a problem is already occuring. Stalker ha. Who whould have guessed. You always seem to suprise me one way or another in every one of your stories, and I have the didtinct feling this is not the last time. keep up the good work.
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Title: Tardiness is baaad...
Reviewed By: NekoKamiFL [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2006 18:46 PDT
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I'm a little late in reviewing for chapter three, seing as how I read it the day it was posted... But... ^^;; Anywho... Those e-mails were pretty creepy! Poor Jilli has a stalker... Oh, and just in case I haven't mentioned it already... I. Adore. Gavin.
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Reviewed By: Simonkal of Inuy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2006 15:50 PDT
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Once again you've gotten my attention, but you see that's not surprising. What would be surprising is if you wrote something that I didn't want to read. As always, you amaze me and inspire me all at once!!
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Reviewed By: Child Of The Millennium [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 16:15 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*grins* A water demon. I'm loving how you did an adoption, for Jillian, rather than another birth from the family. After all, I imagine in that family, an adopted child would be accepted in 3.2 seconds flat. Anyhow, love the continuations of the continuations of the - you get the idea. ^^
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Reviewed By: Inu_sesshomaru_luver [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 10:26 PDT
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this is going to be a very interesting story
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Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 20:57 PDT
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*gushing girly girl-ness* I love Jillian and Gavin already...especially Gavin! And Jillian's stalker guy is ubber creepy! good job Sue! *squee!!!* Okay enough of the melodramatics. The framing of this story is thus far superb and I honestly can't wait to see how you paint this masterpiece. Looking forward to much more ~fute~
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 11:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh no. Someone's stalking Jillian! :O That's so creepy. YAY for Gavin for wanting to protect her the way he is. Can't wait for the next chapter! =D
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Title: The Million Dollar Girl
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2006 00:19 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great update, Sue! A psycho stalker on the loose. That's not good. I remember having to get a restraining order against my ex-best friend who was stalking me and I did win the case too. You know, I could of sworn that you had Gavin's eyes as being green and not an aqua color. Maybe I'm just losing my mind or something. Or am I? Thank you for the updates and we will see you in mid-May. Take care of you.
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 23:17 PDT
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lol!! oh evan. what wont you do? ;)
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 15:13 PDT
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Hmm...Could it be that the Mickey B. guy was putting the hole in whosever car it was? Aww, poor Jilli, she can't go out in the rain just yet lol.
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Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 15:11 PDT
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Sweet chapter, only those emails were kinda scary. Reminded me of wheni was twelve and had a stalker :S scary shyt. WEl written sounds like an interesting plot though I wanna slap the characters for not realizing and accepting the inevitable...lol
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Reviewed By: sweetsauve [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 15:06 PDT
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I love your entire Purity collection. They're all so well written and I can actually picture what is going on in my had. You do some amazing work. I was just wondering who the rest of your Purity stories are going to be about?
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Reviewed By: BladesoftheValkyrie [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 15:04 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great so far! I love how you're updating so quickly again - it makes me so happy when I see the notification in my email. ^_^ Especially since I've finished all of your other work... I also thought that I'd point out a typo for you - it's in the part where Jillian wakes up and is wondering if humans can hear the rain. I'm pretty sure that you meant to write "mortals" instead of "morals." :) I can't wait for the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: kamackie21 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2006 13:11 PDT
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oooh....Mickey D. is probably a youkai. That makes him even more dangerous than a typical stalker. Lol...Evan seems to get a funny mention in almost every chapter.
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