| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: NyteAngelOfDarkness7 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 20:29 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Question, this is kinda off topic about the chapter but this reminded me of something...if Cain's real name is Zelig...then why doesn't Gin call him that, I know he changed his name..but its his real name. Wouldn't you think that his close family would call him by his real name? I know its a stupid question but i really want to know. And Nezumi miscarried!!! Omg! Well, have fun writing
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Reviewed By: Hitomeshy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 12:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice. So, Jillian has a stalker and now she is going to see Gavin's ranch. Um...I was wondering, what do Gavin and Jillian look like? I mean, I'm not an artist or anything, but I think I could draw them.
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2006 08:23 PDT
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Wonderful chapter Sue! I cant wait to find out who this stalker is. :( and poor Nezumi...
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 16:47 PDT
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I can tell already that this Purity Chapter will be one of my all time favs. I was so happy to see you had updated, I needed a break from studying for finals and this did me some good. Great Chap
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Reviewed By: mannd1068 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 08:33 PDT
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Love your stories as always. But I do have a quesiton? What ever happened to Kagome's family? I would assume that Souta got married and had children, so are you going to include them anywhere? Just curious Thanks for being willing to share Deb
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Reviewed By: sprsnc20 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2006 01:54 PDT
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You might not remember me because I haven't been able to review in about 5 months. I just finished Phantasm and I loved it. Now I look forward to reading your new story, which has already captured my full attention. I can't wait to see who this stalker is and what he "really" wants. I think he may have an agenda other than just manic fandom, but that's me. Anyway, I had a couple questions I was hoping you could answer. First, since you've said that Shameless is set in the year 2066(?), then that would make InuYasha and Kagome about 80 years old, minus the years on the tree which don't really count. Do they still look the same as they did in Purity, or have they aged any? I know that youkai and hanyous live much longer than humans normally do, so I figured they would age slower as well, but I was wondering if they have aged any or if they still look as young as their now-adult children (lol). Also, I have been planning to write my own fanfiction in the near future. I'm not sure if the idea that hanyous can only reproduce on certain nights (full moon/new moon) was yours or not, but I wanted to ask permission to use this in my story just in case. If it is, please let me know if this is a problem because I don't want to plagarize(sp?) your work without your permission. Anyway, I know this is long-winded, but keep up the awesome work and I look forward to the rest of this story.
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Reviewed By: nish04 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 19:48 PDT
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jilli and gavie at his ranch....alll to themselves...hehehehe...this is going to be interesting! I was going to ask you about jillian's parents and what happened to them, but i guess thats part of her "secrets"...u know, i think i'm already very fond of this couple from the purity series! I just love them all! your the BEST!!!! hehehe....sorry....just had to do that...anyways...eagerly awaiting the next chapter! ~Nish
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Reviewed By: Valdimarian [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 19:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You know that the author of a piece is doing a good job when you hear something like "Aunt Nezumi miscarried" and imedietly think "Kich must be devistated!" Thanks to all the prior Purity stories I know all the families in each progressive story and I genuinely feel for each of them. I love your work and I hope to follow it all the way up at least Purity 12 (or was it 13 you expected to finish up at?)
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Title: YAY!!
Reviewed By: Hitomeshy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 15:34 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so happy you made another Purity. This should be interesting since Gavin claims that he is not Jillian's mate. I'm looking forward to the surprises you have for us readers.
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Reviewed By: RisikaFox [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 14:03 PDT
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Well, this ought to be interesting. ^^ This is probably the first stalker fic I've ever read... lol. Gavin and Jillian make a cute couple.
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 14:00 PDT
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another great chapter. i read revolution and it was ...really deep. the story was so sweet and the look it gave into cain's past was clerifying. i enjoyed reading it i even teared a little. i hope update again soon. you are a truly an inspirational writer. you make the reader feel like they know you in your writing and as both an authoress and one who reads i do feel it is important to incorporate a little bit of yourself in your writing and because i am also an artist, showing my emotions in my work it also something i strive to do. you hit the mark everytime with your stories sue. STAY TRUE! ~~~OB~~~
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Title: Centrifugal Force
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 13:38 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I get too excited reading another update from you! I don't know how you do it, Sue? I am in love with Gavin and Jillian and it was sad to read about Nezumi having a miscarriage. Can't wait to see what happens at the ranch. I liked the birthday gift to Gavin, that was a nice touch. Take care of you!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2006 13:17 PDT
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Awww....I'd love to go to the ranch. I'd want to ride all the horses lol.Hmm...this Mickey B. guy is an interesting character.
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Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2006 17:23 PDT
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nice chapter sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, have only been on a comp long enough to click print lol, anyway can't wait for the next one. Ja ne Kurisu
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Title: AWE
Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2006 05:01 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I Love your stories sue. i'm sorry i havent been reviewing, but i have been reading trust me! but everytime i want to review mm.org wont let me for some reason. bu ti finally got it today. I wanted to tell you since chapter one that this story sparks something inside me...i love romance and i can tell this one is gonna be great. i hope you update soon. and once again i'm sorry! ~~~NEver stop writing~~~ O.B.
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