| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 16:14 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh I loved that chapter. Soo great! Once again poor Gravin, thinking he's not good enough. I'd think a sexy cowboy be good enough, hell I'd hog tie him and never let him go,;) but anyway. Gravin's memory was so sad, poor him coming soo close to telling her. Mean Cain had to ruin it by threating the poor boy. Oh and I love that line of who's really tai youkai. hehehe Well I hope to read more soon and hopefully get the whole picture of Gravie and Jillian's past!
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Reviewed By: nish04 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 13:32 PDT
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awww...they have such a troubled relationship, it kind of reminds me of the saying, "walking on egg shells", it just kind of seems to me, that their both compromising their feelings just to let the other one being happy. Still, I kind of see where Gavin is comming from, but I REALLY want to know what happened in the 6 years where they stopped talking, and WHY SHE cut him off... this is definitely getting interesting... BTW...what does Jilian look like?
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 13:19 PDT
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Aww, poor Gavvie! I feel so bad for him. Jillian should go over there and give him a hug lol.
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Reviewed By: cjflutterbye [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2006 12:05 PDT
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That poor boy has no self esteem at all. Not wanting to touch the shining star because he feels that it would quit shining because of him. Poor Gavin.
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Reviewed By: naiobi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 19:43 PDT
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Great story so far!! I love Jilli and Gavin's characters. Can't wait to read more and find out whats going on with this creepy stalker guy ^^
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Title: entire purity series
Reviewed By: inuluver313 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2006 17:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sueric, i have to hand it to ya...you did a GREAT job writing the Purity series. I dont remember having ever cried so much or having laughed so much or having felt any other emotion equal to the feeling i get when i read purity. Purity 4 made me cry so much but i LOVE the ending. come home everyday anticipating the email that i get saying that you've added yet another amazing chapter to Purity 6. i am so sorry for all of the crap that you have had to deal with from readers that just dont understand that you dont take requests or any else for that matter. all i am is glad that even after that you can still find peace in writing and that your readers, me included, get to enjoy your beautiful knack for writing. Thank you
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Reviewed By: Hitomeshy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2006 16:13 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
She took a topless shoot. And her mother thought that it was...That says alot. She is alot like her mother in wierd ways.
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Reviewed By: hanyouwings [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 22:13 PDT
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I love this story!! Gavin and Jillian are sooo cute together! It's really ironic that Jillian is trying to have Gavin become her mate, but her youki is trying to get her to give up because of all the blatant denials from Gavin; yet Gavin's youki is trying to convince Gavin to become Jillian's mate even though Gavin doesn't want to because he thinks he can't give Jillian the life she wants...this just screams drama...I'm going to cry aren't I...sigh. Oh well, it will be worth it! :)
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Title: Autographs
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 09:24 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I laughed when I read about the faded black Geekfest Sci-Fi Con tee-shirt. That is totally my husband right there. Very cute chapter, Sue!
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Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: May 22, 2006 00:46 PDT
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Another great chapter, sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, and I hope reviews don't efect your continued writing. Anyway, I can't wait for the next one. ^^ Ja ne, Kurisu
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2006 20:19 PDT
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Aww, the ending to this chapter was cute. Hmm...a thunder-based youkai in this chapter, and yet in Chapter 3: The Million Dollar Girl there was a youkai who had the power of electricity; very suspicious. At least to me anyways lol. I wonder if I should keep the name Henson Collings in mind.
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Reviewed By: inuyasha-lover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2006 14:25 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i am seriusly loving this storry please update it soon
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Title: Montana Skies
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 10:11 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
There are so many little details, especially the info on Gavin's and Jillian's back story, that I like. I think it's really cool how they came to know one another and have a very unique relationship/friendship. Great update, Sue!
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Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2006 05:53 PDT
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Sorry for my lack of reviews, but if I read your story and I am not already signed in I cannot post a review even if I try and sign in and come back to it. Its gay like that. Excellent chapter, looks like Gavin's got some secrets...
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2006 13:37 PDT
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I knew something like that was going to happen with that car. I just hope nothing happens while Gavin is at the store.
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