| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 13:22 PDT
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Poor, poor Gavvie. He really is shy around women, isn't he? Dating Jillian may not cure that b/c if he dates her Jillian will probably kill any girl who looks at him. Gavin may as well get a tatoo right now that says "property of Jillian Zelleg".But she was very creative on finding a way to get him to date her. I can't wait to see what their first date is like.
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Reviewed By: 1Inuyashafan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 17:19 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww poor gavvie. i thnk that was a great chap i kinda feel bed for gavvie though i loved it Sue's # 1 and remember Vote For Pedro!!!
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 14:21 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:D Wonderful couple of chapters! Cant wait for more! ^-^
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Reviewed By: JasonC [MediaMiner Member] On: May 30, 2006 05:17 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa. gavin seems to be ina hell of alot of trouble now. haha. Anyway you yet again amaze me with what you can do. Qusetion non related to your story. Do you know of any other website besides Ear-Tweak that translates the Inuyasha Shonen Sundy?
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Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2006 06:11 PDT
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I gotta admit that I'd probably die if that ever happened to me or happened to someone I was in a bar with. Although it just now occured to me that maybe...perhaps Jillian knew what she was doing and did all that solely so that she could get Gavin to date HER. Seems the kind of devious thing that runs through Cain's household. I had a question but seemed to have forgotten it...oh well...keep it up Sueric oh yes iIm thinking of entering the latest contest...but thats beside all points.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 20:21 PDT
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Aww poor Gavvie, he's all tongue-tied around that girl; I felt so bad. Oooo, Gavvie and Jilli dating...sounds beautiful lol.
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Reviewed By: BladesoftheValkyrie [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 17:16 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The suspense is killing me! I love how this story is progressing, but I find myself unable to stop from constantly checking my email for an update. I am really falling in love with this story. Extremely well done, as always! ^_^
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Reviewed By: camintmier [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 15:05 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
If you ever need an alternate title for chapter 8, I'd use "And that's when Gavin's brain broke..." Great chapter to an already excelent story. Thanks for writing such good stories. Can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Lisa C [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 12:55 PDT
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Oh, poor Gavin.
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 10:37 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ok I might be alone here but I think Gavin was completely cute. Yes I'd have to say I'm completely in love with Gavin. And I have to ask the way this whole chapter ended, with Jillian say Gavin would date her, was that what she was trying to do the whole time. That seems a little sneaky so maybe I'm giving Jilli to much credit, but that whole thing seemed a little planned. Well anyway great chapter Sue.
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 10:28 PDT
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lol!! poor gavvie! he *spat* his beer on a girl!!! ::dies::
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2006 09:30 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: whoa!
Reviewed By: vayne [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 15:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Men like Gavin make me want to cry out in frustration... I swear, when I read this chapter it made me feel like somebody read the mind of my bestfriend and put the words into Gavin's mouth. That's really a fantastic introspection Sueric! I just hope Gavin realizes that its really not good to put girls on a pedestal when it's really the last thing they needed from the ones they love.
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Reviewed By: oblivion-bringr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 27, 2006 15:32 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow! another great chapter. seriously thougth i love gavin and jillian... and not just their names either. this couple has so many possibilities for love thats sweeter than pure sugar. i cant wait to see what you do with them. i just know they'll be mates. mark my words. you should cut a deal with rumiko takahashi about publishing your stories into actual books as a fanfiction line for inuyasha i know i would buy it!!! i luv ur work sue you are truely an inspiration! i'm seventeen and i'll be on my way to college soon but i havent decided what i want to major in. i enjoy writing but im currently a fine arts major in highschool. u inspire me to start my ownbook and illustrations and who knows maybe by the timei get out of college i'll have created masterpieces up to parr with yours.
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Reviewed By: toyas_gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: May 26, 2006 21:02 PDT
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wow! i loved gavin's thoughts on his relationship with jillian in this chapter, i think it was very, very well written and gave a new light to the whole story. the mention of evan made my day.... PLEASE TELL ME YOU ARE DOING A PURITY STORY ABOUT HIM! (which, would be rather an ironic title header for a story about evan, seeing as he love to cause so much trouble, but i digress) awesome writing as usual and keep up the fantastic work, i shall always remain a huge fan! (i am constantly re-reading your april fools one shot... it was pure genius!)
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