| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 05:29 PDT
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You gotta be kidding me? I was wrong? And here I thought I was being clever...Great chapter, I'm sure this is not the last we will see of that Major guy...but I was wondering about how long this story will be and what other Purity characters will make an appearance, like those from Japan. Nice job,Peace out
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 19:23 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. That Mickey B is starting to piss me off. In a good way though. How did be become so obessed with Jili... poor girl. Gavin was really cute in this chapter. Keep up the good work! :D
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Reviewed By: Radish [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2006 01:23 PDT
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This is gonna be one of those stories where I wish I was in it so I could beat one of the main characters (Gavin in this case) over the head with a bedpan until he comes to his senses. The bedpan of course being the official Bludgeon of Love, replacing the wooden 2x4 by near-unanimous vote at the Worldwide Love Consortium of 1979. Preferred by four out of five dentists!
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Reviewed By: nish04 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 19:05 PDT
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Gavin makes me really sad... I hate the Major guy, he can just go burn in hell, cutting Gavin off like that...argh! Anyways...really like where this is going...anxiously awaiting your next update ! :P
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 02, 2006 18:57 PDT
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Aww, that chapter was sweet, but then sad at the end. Poor Gavvie, he needs a hug! Hmm, should we worry about this Major dude?
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Reviewed By: nish04 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 21:55 PDT
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Sess vs Inu - - - Bas vs Evan....hehe interesting....i hope these two end up working through their problems in a more productive way... You know what you have me doing NOW? after i read an update...I get this urge to go and find "more jilian and gavin" fics...but then i sadly realize that they are your creation...and i must wait for you to update...but in the end its ALL WORTH IT! I love your characters...they are all so unique...and they pose realistic personalities and real life situations that people can relate too...I JUST LOVE IT! thnk you for sharing!
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Reviewed By: FireDemon86 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 13:51 PDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heheheeh Ok this chapter is just want I needed. I'm sick again.(I swear sometime I could give Kagome a run for her money when it comes to sick days.) SO this chapter maybe me laugh and made me love Evan all the more. I really can't wait to read Evan's story and find out what happened between him and Bas. Well I hope to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 13:21 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I feel sorry for Evan... but then again Bas is right.... O.o Great Chapter! Cant wait for the next one. Ooo family tension. :P
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Reviewed By: sprsnc20 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2006 00:45 PDT
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Wow, this story's really getting good. First the stalker, then Gavin's disaster at the bar, and now Evan's getting dissed by his own brother. Where have we seen that before. . .? I can't wait for Jilli's "therapy" to start. By the way, I learned something interesting a while ago and thought I would share it with you, though you may already know this. In Japanese marriages, the groom normally marries into the bride's family, taking her name as well. In this case, it doesn't really matter if InuYasha has a family name or not, since as soon as he marries Kagome he would take the name Higurashi. This isn't meant as criticism, I just thought you might be interested in knowing this bit of info. Anyway, great chapter and awesome story as always. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Rawben [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 20:42 PDT
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i'm stealing the word "runt-fucker"!!!!!!! ::runs for Teh Border!::
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Reviewed By: naiobi [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 19:18 PDT
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Evan is certainly one of your more interesting characters. Seems like there is more to him than he leads you on to believe. Can't wait to read Purity 9 and find out more about him =) Hope you update again soon! I'm really enjoying this story =)
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Reviewed By: 1Inuyashafan [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 17:33 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I cant wait for the next chap! i kinda feel 4 evan everyone just left him out well at least he has maddy. **wink, wink** Sue's #1 and remeber vote 4 Pedro
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Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 16:15 PDT
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Mike Murphy? Coincidence that that happens to be the name of an uncle of mine who died before I had the chance to meet him. I'll call this one now. Mike Murphy is Mickey B. I knew there had to be a reason you posted that picture of Evan in this story, so I shouldnt have been surprised when this chapter was appropriately named 'Evan' I'm gonna ballpark it and say Evan leads Mike Murphy directly to his darling little sister. I feel bad for Evan and am desperately dying to know just why he and Sebastien had such a great falling out between the two of them. I might also guess Bone is Mickey B just because he asked if he knew where Jillian was. That's enough of my musings for now. I got a hell of a lot of work to do if I ever plan on entering that contest...Peace out Humphrey. Deceptress
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Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 16:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 31, 2006 15:58 PDT
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Wow, how bad can one person get? Yikes...Evan kinda scares me now lol. That was funny with the phone though, not that it almost hit Maddy, just that it went flying.
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