| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 15:27 PDT
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so i was a little disuaded from this Purity installment at the beginning, only because of how...girly...Jillian came off to be. but it works for her...and as always, the story has been nothing less then stellar. i have a sinking feeling that this Cody guy is, in a blundering mistake that is made from ignorance, going to expose Jillian's idenity to the pubic. or...we're just going to see Gavin for being a good guy. i just have a forboding sense over this issue. otherwise, interesting use of the stalker plot, never really seen it pulled off. got to say, all teh kids, their parents and who they are related to is starting to get confusing, but i think i'm still hanging in there. LOL. good story sue.
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 08:01 PDT
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I can't believe Jillian convinced Gavin to hire that guy. It was very sweet of her, and kind of Gavin to hire him. I also have a question that I'm sure many people have been asking, but its been bugging me ever since you wrote that chapter about Evan. Are he and Maddison mates? They seem to be more than just "friends with benefits". Evan said that he wanted her with him, and Maddison seems to follow where ever Evan goes. Plus, they have been sleeping together for years, so that implies that they seem more serious than they admit. So, are they mates? Have they never really committed to each other because Evan is an idiot & won't stay faithful to Maddison? Please, tell me, I'm dying to have this question answered!
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Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 00:41 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapters, Sue! Even two in one day! I just love Gavin and Jillian. I can't get enough of them! Haven't reviewed in awhile but I am still here reading your awesome writing & mad skills. Take care of you.
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Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 22:42 PDT
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another great chapter, sorry i haven't reviewed in a while, but I was curious, since you have stated that Purity will run through #12 is that all you will do with it or will you continue with another name for them if you do. Also, is the Guardian considered by you to be a part of the Purity series? or no
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 22:08 PDT
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I may have already said this. But, Yea! I love Jilli's soft heart! I loved this chapter. Joo have a very bad beta with a very bad computer. I was down all weekend and now AIMs not working. Sooooooooo I came to tell you how much I love... absolutely LOVE the way this tale it going! ::bounces up and down:: Hehe~ Poor Gavie! He doesn't even realize he doesn't stand a chance!
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Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 21:13 PDT
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still no keyboard *sigh* but i wanted you to know that I'm reading :)great stuff!111
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 21:05 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Title: inuyashaloverr
Reviewed By: inuyashaloverr [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 20:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 20:07 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome couple of chapters. Im so happy that Mickey B. cant find Jilli right now. Haha sucker. :P Can't wait for the next one! >.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 18:43 PDT
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Aww that's so sweet of Gavvie...I just hope this Cody guy stays a good character.
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Reviewed By: Lennex [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 18:05 PDT
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Man on man sorry i havent reviewed in a while. computer issues. This story is really starting to heat up. the whole not knowing who micky b is and y ou throwing these random people around im all jumpy like, is that him, is that guy him hehe. ANyhow i still think the setting is great as i live in Montana. i wonder if we wiill see anyplaces i know hehe. anyhow keep up the great work and we will see you the next chapter
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Title: Missed Reading Your Works
Reviewed By: crolynx [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 13:57 PDT
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Hey Sue, Just got caught up after being moved around the world. Great work on Purity 5. This story is developing fast. Is Mickey B. someone that they already know? When will Jillian realize that she's being stalked? The fallouts gonna be huge ain't it. Miss having you Update on FF.net, but I understand your reasons. Thanks for the PDFs of your previous works. I really enjoyed being able to read them while traveling. Well I will anxiously await your next chapter. Ja ne, Crolynx ;p
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 13:19 PDT
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Yikes, this Mickey B character certainly knows what he's doing; that's just creepy though. If Gavin wasn't blood thirsty before, he is now lol. Anyways, the ending part with Waterspell scared me for a big, until he listened to Gavin...I thought that it'd be a re-run with what happened to is grandfather.
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Title: Good story :)
Reviewed By: Yukimi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 06, 2006 12:46 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
As always, a great story. :) Thank you for sharing. I have one question that's been nagging me a bit. Nothing big mind you, as always you did an excellent job. I'm just wondering, from what I've seen in the anime and some of the manga, most of the creature youkai had tails... but you never mention any of the full youkai having tails... Just an idle curiosity. Not a complaint. As always, great original characters. Though Gin and Cain are my favorites so far :) Also, you mention Evan is going to be Purity 9... I'm wondering who 7 & 8 will be. Maybe Gunnar's in there somewhere? Any way, thanks again for continuing to post your stories and let all of us read them even though sometimes it's rough for you. Best of wishes and I'll keep reading as long as you keep writing.
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Title: Stunning...
Reviewed By: LadyinRed [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2006 18:15 PDT
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Wow wow wow... your writing is intriguing, super original, your characterizations are so realistic that it commands attention. I am easily drawn into the emotions portrayed. Your thorough elucidation of the situations leave no questions... unless you want them to :) I just caught up with you after reading all of the other work you have posted here, and I must say your talent has held me captive for the last few weeks. I created an account just to review here... Outstanding, Breathtaking, and Amazing, may you continue to be inspired by whatever is is that grants you such fluidity and grace.
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