| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 12:24 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww! Gavin is breaking down! That was just a really sweet moment! Figures that his dad would interupt! Suck! And I love how Evvie comes off so sweet even when he's takling vulgar! I love that guy! I love this chapter....Thanks Sue!
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 12:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*squeee*! Awesome chapter! The part with Gavie and Jili was just awesome! Cant wait for the next chapter. :D
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Reviewed By: Deceptress [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 12:03 PDT
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DAMN YOU!!! I actually htought htey were gonna kiss and you took it away GRAR!!! I am frustrated with those two...god...hurry up and finish the next chapterof Desideratum i luv that story. Peace out
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 11:38 PDT
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Aww, Moe, why'd you have to walk in at that time? Lol, Evan with his Lei-me, that's a good one!!! Thank you George Lucas for making such wonderful characters for Sue to terrorize lol. Ah, finally out of high school...next stop A.A. degree....Oooh, and a chapter coming up for Desideratum, awesome!!!!
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Title: Brotherly Love
Reviewed By: angelfire777 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 09:54 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Evan is a BadAss and I love it! Also love the fortune cookies in the story, that was too funny! Now hopefully Gavin will get his head out of his ass about being Jillian's mate. Great updates, Sue!
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Reviewed By: Valdimarian [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2006 07:57 PDT
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Ahhhh! If Moe hadn't shown up he'd probably be well on his way to having grandkids, Evan calling or no! I don't suppose that nay of your stories could ever be that simple, just not heart wrenching enough.
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Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 19:15 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You heard him Gavin...stop dicking around! lol! It cracks me up that Evan would send Gavin a box of "homemade fortune cookies"! Thats just TOO funny! Thanks for the new chapters Sue...I'm really loving them! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 08, 2006 09:30 PDT
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Does this mean that Gavin is finally going to have to admit that Jillian is his mate? I hope so because he's making himself & Jillian miserable by assuming that Jillian doesn't really love him. I mean, how much plainer can the girl be that she is in love with him? It's not like she dates different men or is really flirty with anyone but him so he really has no real reasons to doubt her. Plus, Jilian's not a liar so why is he being so obstinant? Grrr!! And, I ALSO noticed that you sidestepped my questions about Evan & Maddison. That was mean, like taking away my morning coffee. Just plain evil! So, am I to assume that they are not mates? If they aren't then will you be writing a story where Maddison gets a mate because I like her character. Yes, I know I'm hounding you on this. What can I say, I'm the oldest of three so I've learned to whine & plead with the best of them.
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Reviewed By: Kurisu no Ryuujin [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 20:46 PDT
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great chapter...why am I not surprised...lol anyway, thanks for the reply
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 20:43 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a cute chapter. Haha that Evan, what a evil guy :P ...Cant wait for the next chapter. Keep up the awesome work.
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Reviewed By: nish04 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 19:50 PDT
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Hey Sue! great chapters...so Gavin and Jillian ARE mates...right? Is what Gavin doing kind of what Cain did? ignore what his youkai was saying...or is he actually really not her mate? Also...I was just wondering if you will be updating Desideratum or if your just leaving it off for now? I'm jsut wondering... Anyways...i hope we get more clues on Mickey B...itz driving me insane...I wonder if Cody is involved in any way....ARGH! all this guessing and loose ends....can't wait for more!!! :P buh bye..
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Reviewed By: Lisa C [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 19:26 PDT
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I can not wait for Purity 10. Anything with Mikio in it just makes me go SQUEEE!!! He's just so cute with the little floppy ear. *gushes*
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Reviewed By: kds1222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 18:40 PDT
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Yet again your funny little additions to your chapters make me laugh so hard that my roommate thinks i've gone insane. thank you sueric for confirming my roommate's beliefs. oh fortune cookies. me and my friends have this thing where we add "in bed" to the fortune's we receive. always comes hilarity. one time my friend got one that said. "People laugh at you".....in bed. that one was the best. she didn't live it down for months. so again thanks for brightening my day. and i hope this review brightened yours. sincerely, kds1222
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 17:49 PDT
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oh, i've been to the family tree, and was lost just as much. it's great to see though, for one the many resons of having tried to sketch one out while reading the end of purity 5 and getting myself just as confused. the review was in no way meant as a 'i'm not reading this and i'm currently sticking my fingers in my ears' comment, never. i have had my share of issues with people with those (i agree, if you don't like it, dont' read it.). as if i wouldn't read something written in the purity series, yeah, right. it's like the buffy series (or insert title here of addictive television); you just can't put it down. the boys have always just come off as a lot more understandable to me (maybe because i've always had more guys are freinds). can't not love Ryo or kich...or even bas! jilli was just a little bit harder to get a grasp on for the personality of her character for me. i can't wait to read evan's story (but i think i'm in line on that one). what is it with the way you can completely pull off writing the bad a$$es?
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 17:08 PDT
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Haha...I love the relationship between Nat and Moe, that was just too cute. Hmm...I wonder how this talk will end out.
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