| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Reviewed By: nish04 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 15:43 PDT
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this is so frustrating!!!!! WHY can't he just confront her about it! He is DYING inside...and still he's being stuborn for no REASON! Damn Dog! lol..sorry....it's just...ARGH! lol...i really really thought they were making headway...and then BOOM! he just goes back to square one...and ruins everything! But, with this being your story & it being only Ch16..i should've known it was a short lived victory for Jillian! :p lol.. And..Woa...the whole movie rental thing....i think they should get started on inventing that NOW! How'd you come up with that...i wish it worked like that now...i always leave it till the last day to watch my movies...lol anyways...thnks for the update...eagerly waiting for more :p!
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 13:36 PDT
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Aahhh!!!Gavin & Jillian really, really, really need to talk. Jillian needs to handcuff Gavin to a chair or something & not let him go until he tells her the truth. This is getting sooooo frustrating because he's making assumptions that are completely unfounded. Although Jillian is doing the same thing. On a side note, I want to say that I sympathise with that girl who's sister is having a hard time w/her pregnancy. I have a friend who's in the hospital on bed rest b/c she's too high risk to be at home.
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 12:10 PDT
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Thank you very much, Sue. Gah, I just want to shake some sense into Gavin! I couldn't believe he did that, but then again, I should have seen it coming. When you wrote the part about him taking out the ring I thought he was going to give it to her, well I hoped he would have.
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 10:21 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah. Gavin. Smarten up would ya? It's so sad, he wants to be with her but he's pushing himself away. T_T Awesome chapter. Keep up the great work! =D
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Reviewed By: nish04 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 16, 2006 06:33 PDT
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that almost made me cry...poor Gavin, he even had the RING!!! argh! it makes me mad to think that Jillian wanted to marry Gavin out of highschool & Gavin had the ring and was going to propose! where did it go wrong?!?!...lol... I don't really blame Gavin anymore for having a wall up...poor guy...:(...and i'm sure Jillian had a good reason to run of like...my guess...ANOTHE GIRL...itz always another girl! hehe... Awww...Cody's girls are SO CUTE...i love Karis! it was a really cute chapter... Oh...one more guess...I wonder if Mickey B. is related to Cody somehow....hmmmm....hehehe.... Thanks for the chapter!
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 21:46 PDT
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It's been awhile huh? LOL. I'm home from college and looking for a job as well as getting a phone line set up in my room has taken forever. But your story's always brighten my day especially with Jillian's likeableness (I doubt that's a word). Gavin makes me feel so sad when he talks like he's not worth her if he only knew right LOL. Great Chap as always. ~Usagi
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Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 19:52 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVE horsies too! lol...Cody's kids are so CUTE!!! Poor Jilli...all she wants is a family, and poor Gavvie...all he wants is Jilli! What a predicament...can't wait for you to resolve it! Thanks for the new chapter Sue!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 16:53 PDT
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Man, Gavin is not going to be happy at all when he finds out this mysterious guy has been in his apartment. Hmm, I wonder what he'll do. I was wondering, would you mind praying for my sister? She's a high risk pregnancy and even though she feels fine, her blood pressure isn't. Thank you if you can! It means a lot!
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Reviewed By: artemiswaterdragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 13:59 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The last two chapters were great. Cody's kids are so cute! :D
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Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 07:47 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HAHAHA! Poor Cody never say her coming! lol...Jilli must really need some help if shes asking a guy she just met....and I was wondering if thats what Cody thought, that Gavvie was "that way"...it makes since. Well except for the fact that he almost kissed our Jillian! Can't wait to see how she gets him to notice her...keep up the good work! Thanks for the chapter Sue!
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Reviewed By: Acheronlover [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2006 15:22 PDT
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Awww. Poor Jillian is feeling really bad. She really hasn't figured out why Gavin won't date her. She's so confused she's asking shy, married men for help. It was extremely funny when she asked Cody for advice. And even funnier when he asked the other guys if Gavin was "that way". I was laughing so hard my sides hurt!
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Reviewed By: Hitomeshy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 14:51 PDT
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Haha! Nice one pulling the change your voice to fool people gag. I really didn't think that Gavin would actually think that Jillian was Evan. That was a shocker. Also, I think Evan has a little too much up his sleeve to be thinking aobut trying to get Jillian and Gavin together, but it is pretty obvious that Gavin has a thing for Jillian. Before I close this message, do you think you can e-mail me a description of each character, excluding the main ones from the original tv show? When I get to reading something I usually remember everything, but I guess I forgot about their physical features. So, how about it? My e-mail is Jelai91@msn.com. I'd really appreaciate it. And KEEP WRITING!!!
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 12, 2006 11:54 PDT
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I'm like Jillian in this chapter...when you need advice about a guy you like...ask another guy lol. Mmm...I want some of those fire cracker popcicles! That was too funny when Jilli was searching for Gavvie's keys, poor guy lol.
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Title: Hello
Reviewed By: Jaxomruth [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 20:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! This is Jaxomruth. I realize that I haven't written a review to one of your stories in a very, very long time but I have followed each and every one of your Inu-yasha fics. I just wanted to let you know how much I appreciate your work. I have a lot of issues in my life for the past year or so and reading your stories was often the highlight of my day. It gave me something positive to look forward to when a lot of things were spinning out of my control. You have made a real different in my life even though we have never met. Please do not take this information as an attempt to place any pressure on you; rather it was done to express my gratitude for what you have done for me. I will continue to follow your writing, regardless of what path it may take. I am not usually very fond of OCs but your stories seem to be the exception to the rule. Your characters are so well developed and in line with the original characters that it is easy for me to forget that you created them.
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Reviewed By: nish04 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2006 18:20 PDT
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*grins like and idiot* this was too cute! oh my...you had me on the edge of my seat! wondering if they were going to kiss OR whether Gavin would snap out of it…LOL..i guess this answered my question from before...THEY ARE MATES!!! Awww...i'm so exited!!!...i wonder how Gavin's going to be all awkward around Jillian now....knowing him..YES!. On another note...Gavin and Moe are so ADORABLE...they're so ALIKE...how they blush for ANYTHING & EVERYTHING...loved it! (as you can see..) BTW..thnx for letting me know about Desideratum...much appreaciate it... Bye Sue!
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