| "Purity 6: Shameless" Reviews/Comments [ 381 ] |
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Title: Sweet kisses
Reviewed By: MikoTen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 15:22 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Such a sweet chapter! It really cheers me up after this weekend (Father's Day, always gets me down). Your updates always make my day. I love Gavin and Jilli, and I am really enjoying the story. :)
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Reviewed By: Hitomeshy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 14:43 PDT
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PLEASE TELL ME THERE'S GOING TO BE A LEMON SOON!!! I mean, seriously. I know that at one point in time, Gavin's gonna lose it and he's gonna act like a crazed man who just need a little love. I mean, he's a lost pupppy and Jillian found him except, he won't trust her enough to pet him. See where I'm going with this?? I know at one point in time, he's going to "allow her to take him into her lap" but he at least has to "let her pet him". O, and thank for the discriptions. I'm working on some pics of Gavin and Jillian together and the WHOLE FAMILIA, i mean family.
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Reviewed By: nish04 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 14:09 PDT
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another KISS?!?! Gavin Gavin Gavin...when will u learn! he better not tell Jilli it was a mistake again. Bas and Gunnar aren't ree-aa--lly making any progress...are they? I'm just wondering...the way Jilli is feeling and how shes so depressed...it kind of reminds me of the way Toga and Gin were feeling...aww...the last two chapters were so dam sad...:(...i hope she gets a lil happier....i like the perky Jillian better! Again...thnx for the update...it always makes my day...bye Sue!
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Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 10:21 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww! That was sweet! Such a cute chapter...maybe things will work out after all! But I have a ffeling in my gut that things will start going well, and then the mysterious man will show up and ruin EVERYTHING! UGH! Oh well...we'll soon find out! Thanks for the chapter Sue...it was adorable!
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Reviewed By: naiobi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 07:42 PDT
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Those 2 really need to work there problems out! Great chapter, btw. I'm really, really enjoying this story! Hope you update again soon!
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Reviewed By: nish04 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 06:11 PDT
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oh man...i'm going to cry...poor Jillian! The last line was a definite tear-jerker!aww.... I loved the description u gave of the girls and Gavin...of how they were sitting...i re-read that line over and over and tried to picture it...SO ADORABLE! all-in-all...a very emotional chapter! So...Mickey B. broke into Gavin's appartment...JUST GREAT! now hez gonna find JILLIAN!! and make things 10 times worst...guess it'll get worst before it gets better...jsut like all ur other fics ;)...hehe...anyways...i really enjoyed this chapter...it was the highlight of my stressful day...thnx Sue!
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Reviewed By: Hitomeshy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2006 04:13 PDT
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Awesome!! I can't believe that Gavin won't except that Jillian is telling the truth that she is his mate! I mean, if he doesn't realize it soon that she loves him, then, well, she may parish. I hope that what happened to Gin doesn't happened to Jillian.
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 20:20 PDT
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Great Chapter Sue! Its so cute that Gavin has a way with children. Especially girls under the age of 5. LOL. I feel for Jillian though poor baby to have something you want so yet so far away is probably the worst thing ever. Can't wait for the next. ~Usagi
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Reviewed By: Lisa C [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 15:28 PDT
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My heart's breaking For Jillian and Gavin. I wish they could just read each others minds and fix this big misunderstanding mess they got themselves into. I wish he would take her off that goddess stool he has her on and see that she is a real woman who wants nothing more than to share the rest of her life with him. And when I read that part when Gavin is just whatching tv and letting the girls hold on to him? I cried. I bet they'd make really pretty babies. *sniffle*
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Reviewed By: Kyasumi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 13:58 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I've spent the last few hours catching up on what I've missed over the last few months and I'm really happy that I did. This fan fiction is turning out great so far.
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Reviewed By: kds1222 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 13:31 PDT
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Once again you blow us all away with your amazing way of making your characters jump out of the computer screen and scream their emotions at us. So much so that we feel their emotions on our own person. Excellent excellent chapter. I'm wondering is Jilli going to have a near death because of Gavin's rejection??
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Reviewed By: OROsan0677 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 12:58 PDT
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Aww, that last line of the chapter almost made me cry. Poor Jillian! Hmm, I wonder what that guy is going to do with that picture. I like the sound of Gavin's apartment though; very high tech!
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Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2006 12:40 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awww! Gavvie is so good with those girls! Great Chapter Sue!
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Reviewed By: Usagiseren05 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2006 12:12 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
okay all through this story I;ve been well close to tears and I feel so bad for Jillian. Poor4 girl she just can't catch a break. You always do a wonderful job of bringing out emotions from your readers, great chap.
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Reviewed By: vvkimbo07 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2006 20:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Gavin can be the biggest idiot sometimes. Wonder when he'll realize how much they really are meant for each other. Can't wait for the new chapter! Keep up the good work Sue!
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