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| "Silence the Fairytale" Reviews/Comments [ 423 ] | | Pages (29): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 › » ] | Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2010 10:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Chapter came out sooo nice....yay!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 24, 2010 09:02 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful update! Can't wait to see how that village actually reacts to their presence, now that the 'miko' is pregnant with Inuyasha's child. How long has it been now? Is she showing? Fortunately yukata can be worn rather loose, so it probably isn't obvious yet. Of course, if they walk in holding hands, that'll be rather obvious. It was more subtle, but still an excellent cliffhanger! Keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2010 19:48 PDT
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| Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2010 22:45 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't know how I missed this update, but oh! It was what I needed to read tonight, so maybe it was karma...ah, I loved it.
| Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2010 14:34 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... nice that kagome and inuyasha are spending quality time together... very sweet... kirara and buyo are cute and funny... what's next... what will their baby be?... boy or girl?... update when you can... please and thank you!
| Reviewed By: soliea0death [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2010 19:13 PDT
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Well, I'm glad things are looking up, and Kagome is doing better. It's good that Inuyasha is able to put up with her, even when she's having and emotional train wreck. I hope you can update soon, GREAT JOB!
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2010 15:56 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Kawaii!!! This was a really good chapter. Glad to know that life is giving them a break so that Kagome can finish recuperating without having to jump back into a dangerous battle, even if it is a tad on the boring side. Really looking forward to seeing where you take this story! Keep up the good work!
| Reviewed By: Sovereignty [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2010 19:29 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH I am so close to crying. This is so cute/happy... Fantastic chapters!
| Reviewed By: Knittingknots [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2010 17:30 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would have been first again this time, but I was in the hospital for a procedure, which worked out very well! Just like this chapter. I really adore how you handled InuYasha's confession, and Kagome's reaction to it...It was really lovely! Look forward to more!
| Reviewed By: animecraz92 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2010 11:12 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
beautiful story. just another great to add to my list of favorites. keep it up and update soon.
| Reviewed By: soliea0death [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2010 06:49 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Phew! *wipes sweat from brow* at least everyone's all right. Figures those villagers want to kick them out after finding out the truth. That's graditude for you after they saved their sorry butts all that time. At least Inuyasha finally told her the truth about being mates, and it went better than he thought it would be. Well, now Inu and Kag are on the road again, with a child on the way, while carrying the Shikon no Tama, there's no doubt Sesshomaru will be seen again, and there's the matter of all the other demons that are going to come after the jewel. So no pressure then! At least Kagome is still able to keep a smile on her face, so long as she's with Inuyasha. I love that so much, I can't wait to see what happens next. XD XD XD
| Reviewed By: SplendentGoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2010 18:16 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay! Wonderful update. It does kind of feel like an ending, of sorts, but I doubt you are finished with this story just yet. Or at the very least you would've said so. No, if we are to think of this like a TV series, then I would say this was the 'season finale', and so now, we are going to be starting off on a whole new chapter of their lives. Even though you ended that chapter so peacefully, I can't help but worry, though...out in the open, night of the new moon, and Kagome is in no condition to defend them herself with her arrows.... I really loved the exchange between them and Shinsei-baa-chan. One could argue at face value that Kagome being in their village with the jewel actually brought danger, but you cleared that up by mentioning that she's heard of villages far and wide coming under attack. Word is out that the jewel is back, and youkai are looking for it everywhere, so truly, their village would have come under attack at some point either way, and so then it is only because of Kagome and Inuyasha's presence that their village was protected. Part of me almost hopes some youkai will show up to attack them now, though...if that does happen...please don't have anything bad happen to Shinsei-baa-chan. Inuyasha was right too, of course; it's only thanks to her that Kagome knows what she knows, now, and will be able to protect them all to the best of her ability. Hell, they would be dead right now if it weren't for Shinsei-baa-chan's training, since Kagome threw up that barrier at the last second to shield Inuyasha from Sesshoumaru's miasma. And you can't expect us to believe that that'll be the last time we ever see Sesshoumaru! I think there is way more adventure on the horizon for this story. You've at least got to take us through Kagome's pregnancy and Shinsei-baa-chan helping her with the delivery like she said she would - loved that part, by the way. Then of course there's the adventures of parenthood, but if you don't want this story to go on forever and ever (believe me, I know how easy it is to get sucked into a never ending fanfic) then I predict a nice detail-packed epilogue sometime after the baby is born would be acceptable. But hey! If you want to keep on going into the kid's toddler/child/teen stage, be my guest! Of course, the baby has to be born, first. I do hope Kagome doesn't lose the pregnancy. One last thing I'll comment on real quick, since you gave me the licence to be "wordy" *wink* is that I just LOVED Kagome's reaction to finding out that she and Inuyasha had been 'married' since back when he'd bitten her. That was classic! Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: misfitstep [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2010 15:44 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I get so giddy when I check my email and you've posted another chapter. I haven't gotten vocal yet since I don't want to get kicked out of the dorm or have my roomie have me committed. Keep up the great work! Love this chapter and its awesomeness!
| Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2010 15:42 PDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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great update... glad that kagome and inuyasha are okay... good that kagome still has her baby... so they had to leave the village... seems that they have the den to go back to... sweet moments between kagome and inuyasha... what's next... update when you can... please and thank you!
| Title: Feels like an ending, but...
Reviewed By: J Luc Pitard [MediaMiner Member] On: September 01, 2010 14:34 PDT
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There's so much more of their story to tell! Not that I usually follow stories about them and their family, but you've left the adventure pretty wide open for them, so... write more if you want, don't if you don't, I guess.
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