| "Inner Secrets" Reviews/Comments [ 168 ] |
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Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 16:22 CDT
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Though, i kinda wonder what Kyou's plan was... and what were the items Naruto requested of him were.... um.. did you forget him? :D also, whatever happened to the 'wrist bands'? you said the snakes bit his wrists, causing him to drop his swords. but if he had the watch/senbon shooter(which btw youve never actually used, neither his poisons) then how could the snakes have hurt him? okay, enough critiquing. ja ne! keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Aoidragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2008 16:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!! Kimimaro is going too! hes too much of a pretty boy to dieeee ; ; im so glad you had Tsunade save him randomly!!! 8cries in happiness*
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Reviewed By: MasterTDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2008 00:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please continue this story has been one of my favorites for a long long time. I have read no other fanfiction that can equal your brillance and calliper. Please update and please do it soon.
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Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2008 16:31 CDT
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Many months between updates, but it set up events pretty damn well. Update again soon, ja ne.
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Reviewed By: KetsuekiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2008 15:02 CDT
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omg, WHY?????????? WHY CRUEL WORLD????????????????????????????????????? How could you make me wait months on end, and only write a freakin page???!?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GAH!!!!!
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2008 15:37 CDT
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I am Glad u updated!! I cannot wait for the next chapter and see if Itachi is going to make an apperance soon.. **^^
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Reviewed By: Baka Hanyou Rahvin On: June 30, 2008 17:59 CDT
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Really good chap! I 'm so happy you updated! I've been waiting for forever for this story to have an update. Please update soon!
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Title: COME!!!ON!!!
Reviewed By: cosmos1989 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2008 14:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Why did you stop?!?!?!?!?WHY??? WHY??? YOU. MUST. FINISH. PLLLEEEAAASEEE?!?!?!
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Reviewed By: Neko Demon [MediaMiner Member] On: February 10, 2008 21:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
man, you have to continue this i so want to find out happens. please update this as soon as you can.
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Reviewed By: MasterTDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 21:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is brilliant please please please continue. You are one of my favorite authors of all time.
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Title: more
Reviewed By: white_rabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2008 14:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore ... okay now that you know what I want, I would like to know how close you are to completeing chapter 22. Also wondering about you health because I just read all 22 chapters strait through(with minor bathroom breaks) and I NEED the next chappie, thanks! moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore
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Reviewed By: KetsuekiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 02:11 CST
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OMFJ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Yaoi!!!!!!!!!!!!FINALLY!!!!!!!!poor, poor Naru-chan...His ears might never be the same again! I, however, agree with Kyuubi!!!!(heh-heh, I like his pervyness!) PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE update again soon!
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Reviewed By: KetsuekiTenshi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2008 02:09 CST
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OMFJ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Yaoi!!!FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Poor, poor Naru-chan....
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Reviewed By: white_rabbit [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 18:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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oh... oh... oh... I have no idea what to say. I just read all 21 chapters and other than bathroom and eating breaks. I havn't moved from my computer. I can't wait for your next post. Oh wait I figured out what to say... ready? WOW! >.
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Title: Woo Hoo!
Reviewed By: YaoiPerv On: January 14, 2008 21:10 CST
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Good stuff!!!!!!Okay now that we got those two together...hehe...Yum...Anyways, just a little more to go get the other two together and I will be soooooo happy...Well update soon! Thank you for writing you work is very enjoyable! Have a good one! -Jasper
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