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Title: ch. 33
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2013 13:48 EDT
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why does she run from everything?! |
Title: ch. 30
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2013 23:14 EDT
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you know if she would actually try to learn to fight with something other than a bow, she would be much better off as it seems she never has a bow when it count....hand to hand would have been a great skill for her in this situation.... |
Title: ch.19
Reviewed By: grimmichi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 02, 2013 15:49 EDT
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I am about to cry!!!!! why do you keep stopping them T-T |
Reviewed By: KaoriHigurashi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2013 14:46 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:) I figured you didn't have time for a beta...that's why I'm pretty sure I'd offered to beta the chapters myself. I LOVED the Yoko lemon, truly. ;) Overall, it turned out wonderfully, and I do offer myself as beta for future fics, if you'd like. I definitely will be checking out that Kagome/Yoko fic! |
Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2012 19:27 EST
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cute ending :) I'm looking forward to your new fic! Thanks for writing such a good story! |
Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2012 04:30 EDT
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Aww it's ending so soon? I am kinda sad. Really enjoyed this fic and I don't get to read too many kurama/kagome fics anymore. I did feel that this chapter was a bit rushed. The beginning even seemed to skip a bit but I understand your writing has changed since you have been working on this fic for so long. Thank you for updating and I look forward to more! |
Title: lmao
Reviewed By: Mystic Owl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2012 11:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I went and created an account anyways, well until nwxt time. ja |
Title: Unbeliveable!
Reviewed By: Mystic Owl On: July 27, 2012 10:56 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my goodness! I must say hats off to you. I am glad that you are able to still write fanfiction even when the storms of life wash over you with their raging tides. I'm happy for you that you've completed uni and hope you heal both physically and mentally from body ailments the break in and the breakup. I belive I came across this story when I was younger but at the time I think you had only written 10 chapters and now to find it again after all this time is phenomenal! Your diction, flow and overall plot based fanfiction kept me enthralled and guessing along ever step of the way. And what unbeliveable luck in encountering this updated story just one month after you decided to grace your humble audience with your presence once more. I'm extremly thankful that you allow anon reviews I simply had to comment on how you truly kept everyone in character! Kagome did not suddenly gain a mass amount of powers and could was now able to weild a sword as proficienly as Sess~fluffy dono but we saw a gradual build up of her latent powers and emerging self confidence as she began to grow as a character. I just love foxes and enjoyed how Kuruma~Yoko made a game of everything. The banter, the dialougue, how even when seducing her as serious as he was to steal her from Inuyasha he couldn't help but find her a distraction. Those moments especially made me smile. Now I'm not in the habit of leaving long winded reviews but the occasion called for it. Forgive any gramatical errors I might have typed however I'm soo excited that it feels all my thoughts can't be transcribed with mere words. Hopefully some time soon you will grace us with your presence once again and this selfish reader will eventually see a conclusion to this magnificant plot. If you feel so inclined looke me up on ff.net name is the same Mystic Owl have 4 stories so far and if you have the time plz review I know how hectic life can be. Thanks so much for sharing and you deserve to be nominated! The best of luck...an earnest reader lol, Till next time ja ne~ |
Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: May 29, 2012 06:17 EDT
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OMG it has been such a long time! So happy and surprised that you have updated this fic. This is one of my favorite kurama/kagome fiction that is still being updated. Thank you for all your hard work. I am looking forward to more! |
Reviewed By: KaoriHigurashi [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2012 15:16 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was great...short, but well worth the wait! Best of luck in all you're working on, and I'm looking forward to the next chapter. I know a lot of Kurama fans prefer modern-day Kurama...but I prefer Yoko! The sexy silver spirit kitsune who's too hot for his own good! Try for a true lemon with him in the Feudal Era with Kagome before you end? Plz and thank you! Love this fic, looking forward to more with Yoko in the future. I've added this fic to my favorites! |
Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 19, 2011 19:35 EDT
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Awesome story! Im glad to see you have picked it back up again, and I can't wait to see what you come up with for it next! I hope you update again soon |
Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2011 03:16 EDT
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It has been so long but I am so glad that you updated. I was beginning to worry that you wouldn't be continuing this story. I am so happy! I was surprised for a bit when Inuyasha was in the room with kagome and kurama and even more surprised when lagome decided to go off with Inuyasha. And oh no now what will happen?As always I look forward to your next chapter :) |
Title: I wish you some free time :)
Reviewed By: LunaWilderness On: April 11, 2011 21:56 EDT
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I wish to thank you for your patience and the time you took in writing the new chapter. I love reading this fanfic alot and I wish to thank you for it as much as I can. And please. Take your time with your job and stuff. -LW |
Reviewed By: RubyJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2011 15:41 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I've been waiting for the next chapter for so long, that I was beginning to worry if you would update at all. Lol. This chapter was great! I'll be waiting for the next one! |
Reviewed By: ravenstarfire89 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2011 10:50 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm so happy that you decided to continue with this story! I know that life can get quite busy, so take your time with the updates. I'm sure that most fans would rather have a really good chapter that you are proud of then half baked ones that are just churned out. Keep up the good work! |
Title: Love the story:D
Reviewed By: Petrice [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2010 19:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story really sad that it ended just wen it was gettin good. Really hope you update soon, i understand that you have a life outside this site but i really love this story and can't wait for the next chapter:) Looking forward to the next chapter. Hope your 2nd year in college went okay for you. x |
Title: Love the story:D
Reviewed By: Petrice [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2010 19:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
love the story really sad that it ended just wen it was gettin good. Really hope you update soon, i understand that you have a life outside this site but i really love this story and can't wait for the next chapter:) Looking forward to the next chapter. Hope your 2nd year in college went okay for you. x |
Reviewed By: Namine02 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2010 17:40 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear Kami! So I know you already have a lot of reviewers, but congratulations, you just gained another. First off, I want to say I understand with the whole life getting in the way bit, lol. I love the plot line for this, as well as how you kept most of the characters in, well, character. You've done really well so far and I am exceptionally impressed with this story as of now. The little snippets that were in the last chapter have risen some major questions and definitely sparked my interest. I'll be keeping an eye on this story and await the time when you post a new chapter. Good luck! --Namime: Wolf Hybrid of the West
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Reviewed By: KaoriHigurashi [MediaMiner Member] On: August 03, 2010 08:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've noticed some spelling errors, though I am in the states. I'm sorry for not reviewing earlier, but I recently got my internet back, and I just found the fic again. I love this fic, I rarely find many good fics with Kurama, with both Yoko and Kurama...avatar in modern times, that is! :D Ever since I first saw him on the show, I've been a loyal Kurama fan. Please update soon! I'll be waiting eagerly for it!
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Reviewed By: Lady MoonShadow1 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 25, 2010 12:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EVIL!!!!!!
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Title: AMAZING!!!!
Reviewed By: KitsuneforlifeYokoschick [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2010 21:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!!! Please take all the time you need lol I know how school goes and the rest of life. I love everything from the drama, love triangle, limes, lemons, etc. You are truly gifted.
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Reviewed By: inugirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2010 21:09 EDT
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I hope you update soon. This story is absolutely fabulous! Keep up the great work and return to us soon! =)
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Reviewed By: Black Rose Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2010 03:10 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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You know, I gave up reading YYH/IY crossovers about 4 years ago because I just couldn't find any more good ones...By "good" I mean, proper grammar, spelling, canon characterizations, interesting plot, humor, and, of course, romance. Not much to ask for, right? *wink* But I can't tell you how happy I was to come across this fic when I decided that I missed my favorite pairing. It really has been an excellent story and it's so fun to read your own blend of word choice (it's a European thing, as an American I can never hope to master the proper use of "swan into a room", "rubbish" and what was the other word you used...idr, it was something brilliant. You use fantastic imagery and it's my opinion that you utilize the language as properly as possible. You do tend to use "avatar" very frequently to describe Kurama. You may want to consider a different term when you write about him. Btw, the lemon scenes are smokin'! I love that while there was definitely kissing, intense making out, etc, you definitely did NOT take the easy way out. You pulled Kagome away so many times after a make-out session, *I* was going to come undone, haha! I commend you for not making the over-done choice and throwing them in bed right away. It does seem too easy for Kagome to leave...espec. the scene after she left Yoko after she learned that Kuronue died. It seemed like she wasn't even bothered by leaving, which I thought a bit off. I do feel like the scene with Koenma in the library was not as well explained as it could've been...I still feel a bit confused with that bit. Your characterizations are good; I have a bit of trouble believing Hiei sometimes, but I concede that hey, this is a fanfiction and some disbelief must be suspended, ne? Plus, it makes him much more fun to work with than dull-old Grumpy Pants. ;) I love love love that you don't just sever the bond between Kagome and Inuyasha like it's nothing, because you're right, it's NOT. It's a huge deal, he's her first love! It only makes sense that she has such a hard time pulling away. I also like that Kagome gets time with both Youko and Kurama and that you make a definite separation between them and their personalities. I really like this idea that Kurama is softer, more hesitant. I was a bit confounded when you described Youko's fits of giggels (excellent blackmail material for Kagome someday, just fyi), but now I find it endearing. I wish I could've found this story earlier, but you know what? I don't know that I could've waited patiently enough for the update! I'm glad I've come into the story at this point...it lets me read with a steady flow (and trust me, since I started this fic yesterday, I've done nothing but read it...Well, I did the dishes. But that's about it). All in all, very good story. Well written and planned out, executed very nicely. Good sentence structure and descriptions that are always illustrative (that avatar thing is my only complaint), unique plot line, and follows the characters as truly, I think, as is possible, considering this is a crossover fic. Good job! I can't wait to read more, so good luck with your University stuff...I feel your pain, I'm a 2nd year at my University and I've had to do a 19,000 some word research paper. Gag. Trust me, I understand, I really do. Should I kiss your forehead now for emphasis? hehehe Best wishes, hope to read more soon!
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Title: Mind blowing captivating!!
Reviewed By: Eris of Chaos [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2010 14:57 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. It has wonderful and exciting to read! I can't wait for the next chapter!! Happy writing!!
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Reviewed By: Starlet Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: April 22, 2010 02:26 EDT
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Oh sweetie! We certainly understand how all of that goes. Thank you for letting us know that you're still sticking with it, though! That's enough for me :) We've been with you this long, and I can guarantee I'll be here until the end. I just love your style of writing. But for heaven's sake! Spend some time with the people who love and support you. That's important, too. Your fans will still love you when you get back to us. Keep on keeping on! Good luck with finals! Kick their collective butts! See you again on the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: LustfulBeast [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2010 01:21 EDT
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I almost died when you gave us the little preview, it just shows how much I love your story :3. It's good to know that you will never give up this fic, that just tells me the wait will be worth my while lol. Thanks!:)
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Reviewed By: Kitsuneangel88 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2010 18:38 EDT
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hey! i know how stressfull school can be, especially with a degree in English. Im a literature major so i feel your pain. this is probably one of my favorite fanfics of all times and i just wanted to thank you for your dedication. i can't wait to read more!
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Reviewed By: vikay09 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2010 16:18 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:| I think i nearly cried.
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Reviewed By: aznangelstarQT [MediaMiner Member] On: April 11, 2010 23:56 EDT
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Bah, I hope you haven't abandoned this storyy! Update soon? Onegai~
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Reviewed By: DoubleZ On: March 03, 2010 22:27 EST
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UPDATE!!!!!!!! wahhhhhhhh no but ur good jst plz update so i know u havn't abandoned ur work
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