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Reviewed By: Vyncent [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2007 22:26 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Excellent update, and you have just so got to do so again soon...please...
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Title: HEY!!!
Reviewed By: 02395-J.T. On: November 02, 2007 19:35 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Um,hi look I like to read fanfics. It's something that I've spent a lot of time on. I've read TONS!!! of fanfics and I can honestly say that you fic is one that I check EVERY DAY!!!! to see if you had updated. So yeah its been awhile since you updated(at least for me it has) and I have been having this HUGE craving for another chapter so good luck with the next chapter, trust me I'll be waiting for it. PLEASE AND THANK YOU, YOUR FAITHFULLL READER
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Title: hey!!
Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2007 16:38 EDT
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hello kawaii-sama!! beckyducky here. loved the new chapter. i thought it showed how kagome and kurama would act after their first real sexual encounter. it was really well written and showed the characters perfectly. (especially kurama - i think you COMPLETELY captured his character) it was very cool how you introduced yoko back into the feudal era all injured. *does a perverted grin not unlike a hentai houshi we all know and love* does kagome...ah..."take care" of yoko?? *wink wink* sigh. sorry bout that. been hanging out with too many perverted friends. i really hope that kagome and yoko will come together closer as a result of his injuries and maybe kagome will get over inuyasha. And maybe inuyasha will finally see that he lost something good. next chappie's gonna be important right?? i can feel it....even if im wrong. well, i'll just have to wait and see. I can TOTALLY sympathize with your cold - cuz i got one too. Frikkin colds!!! *argh!!* i'm glad your better - and not just cuz you'll update - even though that is a big reason why.... (ducky: b-san, you opportunistic bitch!!) ur....yeah. bout my fanfic.... writer's block is KILLING ME~!!! i know what to write....i just cant express it in words. I had to scrap a sixty-two paged chapter cuz it just wasnt right after i read it together with the other ones...aw well. i'll probably update next month.......:( in the meantime, i luv your story and i hope you dont abandon it.. :) ja ne! ~b-san; d-chan (oh, and about falling in love with your best guy friend - i think that happens to every girl. seriously, cuz i'm in love with mine. It's stil a bit platonic....but it doesnt help when he's attractive.... :( hang in there, kawaii-sama!! you'll be fine 8D and check out my devart cuz keiko's up!! (ZdrnkCab is my devart!! good bye!!
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2007 17:13 EDT
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Arrgh... colds stink. My friend has a virus right now so I'm getting all of HER homework... *sigh* Well, at least you updated!!! I knew I would never be special enough to be the 400th reviewer... I'M NOT WORTHY!!!!!!!!! ARRRGHHHH!!!! *heavyer sigh*. Wow Inuyasha... just wow... poor Sango... YAY SHIPPO! Miroku you bakabakabakabakabakabakabakabakabakabakabakabakabakabakabakabaka... HENTAI!!! Heh okay my ramblings are done... next chance you update, 'kay? BYE!!! Oh... and P.S. ... can I be your #1 fan? Pwease? ... sayonara!!!
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Reviewed By: alissa On: October 02, 2007 23:04 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh im so worried about youko!! i swear as soon as i read the golden eyes i gasped! then i scrolled down as fast as i could to click on the next chapter and low and behold there wasnt one...i wanted to cry! and inuyasha is really a bad influnce on poor little shippo but then again so is miroku and you dont see shippo running around rubbing girls butts! well i cant wait untill the new chapter is up!!! but untill then keep up the wonderful work!!!!
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Reviewed By: Hawaiianhoney2030 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 22:43 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED IT!!!! please update soon! i waited soooo long for you to update again lol. when i got the email that your fic was updated, i dropped everything and went straight to reading. great chapter! but is the little injured fox Youko?!?!?! i really need to find out what happens next! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 22:00 EDT
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wow...lol that was interesting. Baka inu lol he should have thought more before he brandished his sword. Too bad the viligers wern't more greatfull for the held i mean they DID save their hides ya know, but i do hope that the little kitsune is ok! is it Youko? or is it another kit in animal form? hmmm gah love the sotry and i hope you never loose ur muse for this particulat fic ^_^ ja ne!
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Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 19:44 EDT
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so i guess the fox was youko? hmm... what happened to him i wonder i guess u'll tell us next chapter. and what has been up with botan maybe i don't remember wut else has been going on i think ill go back an reread everything. hope to hear from u soon!
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Reviewed By: youkos girl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 19:39 EDT
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Ah it was really good! Whats up with Hiei just taking off like that? Lol actually i did like his reaction lol. When is he coming back into the story? Wait dpes hiei like kagome to? O.o That would be so cute. Well anyways thnks for the chapter. I hope you update soon. And i absolutely loved it. Keep up the good work! ⊰⊹ Yanagi.
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 19:36 EDT
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*(tear)* I cry for Kagome she wont see Kurama for a while.... update soon
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Title: amazing!
Reviewed By: Kitsuneangel88 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 17:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
An amazing chapter! and i'm sorry i didnt review the last one, but it was HOT! but what happened to youko? is he ok? and i loved the little breakfast scene! You have got to update again as soon as possible! i swear this is my favorite story ever!
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Reviewed By: Raeko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 17:19 EDT
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Oh, what a strange situation your characters are bound up in! Is it that Botan knows someone is going to die, or does she maybe know more than she's letting on about what happened last night? I can't imagine you're going to kill off Kurama or Kagome, and those are the only two that I can see her acting so strangely toward Kurama for. If Kagome didn't think about Inuyasha at all in the last twenty-four hours, why did she have that sad little moment about what it feels like to truly be loved? Please don't tell me she doesn't (or isn't starting to, rather) feel that way about Kurama! Poor Hiei...I wonder where he ran off to, and what he'll do about this poisoning incident. I can't see him just letting it go--somebody's going to have to pay, even if he wasn't the intended target! Nice chapter and keep it coming!
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Reviewed By: knjj727 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2007 16:45 EDT
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this was really good please up date soon
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Reviewed By: madmiko,nsi On: October 02, 2007 16:18 EDT
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Poor, poor Hiei, -- waking up in a bathtub, disoriented and confused, only to realize that the reason he was in there was because his friend had some company of the opposite gender. Heh heh! I'm thinking he was completely embarrassed, wasn't he? So, he just bailed. LOL!! Then we have poor Kagome waking up, feeling a bit embarrassed herself, and realizing she has to go all the way back to her room in her nightie. LOL!! Botan's behavior was interesting. I'm guessing she knows that someone is going to die. (Or was she just in love with Kurama?) Nah, I'm going with foreknowledge of imminent tragedy. Okay, the whole incident with the village while Kagome was gone was completely unexpected. But I've often thought that there was a better-than-good chance that Inu was going to completely raze some village with the Tetsusaiga while waving it around someday. LOL!! Interesting that they sealed Miroku to keep them there. Bare-chested. You know, I think Sango is one of the most long-suffering characters in manga today. LOL!! So, Kag had to go back to her time to get seeds and fencing, and they had to re-build everything. Not exactly a productive use of her time, was it? LOL! And I just HAVE to mention that sad little moment when Kagome realized she hadn't even THOUGHT about Inuyasha when she was in her time. Very telling. Speaking of telling, is she going to tell her friends about her own adventure? Very interesting cliffhanger. As always, I'll be looking forward to seeing what you have in store for us next!
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Reviewed By: LestatsDarkAngel [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2007 11:08 EDT
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omg i LOVE THIS ^_^ lol it's awesome and i hope u update soon. SO what's with Hiei's over alcohol consumption? and whats gonna happen to them all now? gah! lol so many things and such little t ime i hope your inspiration never leaves you and you give us an update soon ^^
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