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Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: August 22, 2008 07:33 EDT
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yay an update... i have been waiting and now i feel so much better now that u've updated. and yea pretty much everyone was trying to kill kagome. ahh not a cliffy. i hope kurama or someone saves her or maybe she'll save herself. this just keeps getting better and better. i can't wait to read what u come up w/ next. as always... i hope u update soon!
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Reviewed By: kokoronagomu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2008 17:02 EDT
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but one can use reiki on a youkai parasite and it wouldn't harm the human. just channel her reiki into the girl like she does her hama no ya (reiki charged arrows) and sizzle the critter. ♠ i'm rooting for a yash/kag/kurama+youko but one understands she can't have everything. ♣ thank you, ginny
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Reviewed By: Kitsuneangel88 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2008 16:58 EDT
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o my god! please tell me kurama is going to come and rescue kagome?!?! and please tell me you are going to update again as soon as possible. this is a cruel, cruel cliff hanger. but again, you have brightened my day. i have to use my parents computer cause my finally died after 5 years and i dont when im getting my new one. so thank you, yet again, for cheering me up. you have such good timing. but please post the next chapter soon. i am dying to know what happens next and if you wait any long i ight have the story memorized b/c of the number of times i've read it. lol. THANK YOU!
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Reviewed By: renorfaer On: August 21, 2008 16:55 EDT
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aww poor Kurama. That's gotta suck to see all the stuff his other half did in the past and have no control over it. ooo and Hiei was so cute. I love his obsession with Ice Cream. anyways, really good chapter! and ewww parasites! can't wait to see how she gets out of this one.
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Reviewed By: kyekye [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2008 16:13 EDT
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this was really good please up date soon
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Reviewed By: Hate2LoveU [MediaMiner Member] On: August 21, 2008 15:56 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was not fair to leave it there D=. Well hopefully Kagome's knight in shining armor will show up soon. Don't take as long to update as last time. I was excited when you finally updated.
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Reviewed By: kyekye [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 07:50 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is to good u have 2 up date soon
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Title: hey!
Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: June 29, 2008 00:52 EDT
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Hey! I missed you Kawaii-sama!! Great chapter as always. wow. that was awkward. But in a good way. You conveyed the feelings of confusion that kagome held when she was touched like that by inuyasha. i felt the awkward tensions and confusions cuz you just wrote so beautifully. My favorite part was yoko trying to make up for his deeds - which really does go to show that he loves her in his own way...maybe? It was perfect with the "I love you" scene. Sometimes authors rush it or delay it too long or put it in the wrong place and i thought yours was in the right place and right time. Congrats with exams and YEY!!!!!!!!!!!!! JAPAN!!!!!!!!!!! whooo hoooooo!! (wow im acting crazy - it's just that im so happy for you. Have fun!) Oh no, now im worried about how future kurama is going to act..... >< I mean, he just saw a cozy moment between inuyasha and kagome + yoko will probably release the memories of this episo- i mean chapter, so he'll have lots to deal with. I cant wait for the next chapter and am looking forward to it!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: WhiteDemoness11 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 03:32 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Enjoy your trip. I have to say I liked this chapter, and it was one I was almost scared to see. I do like how Kagome realized much of her kiss with Inuyasha was the dream, and how much she was wanting it to be. Sometimes reality is much harsher. Also, yes the interaction with Youko was well done. Little things that seem to occur in the past give Kurama a hint of what is going on in the future. If nothing else I think the regret to tell Youko what happened will depress Kurama..thinking it was something she wanted with Inu. However the flash of her emotions made it clear that she was upset more then feeling like she needed to get back to him. The confusion at least leaves hope.
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Reviewed By: yusukekuramasgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 02:27 EDT
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i love the part when yoko had to say sorry to the girls and the little one petted his ear. i want to rub his ears too. i hope everything gets straighten out with kurama. i wished he would of stayed to see everything. oh well, everything will work out in the end i hope. great story. i enjoyed reading it. update soon.
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 01:50 EDT
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That was entirely unexpected. I can just imagine poor Youko's emberassment at realizing the dumb mistake his men had made. Poor guy but it did end rather well for him. I really liked the little girls line about petting youko's ears. I wanna too.
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Reviewed By: Sam56 On: June 20, 2008 01:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story but poor inyuasha isn't getting any action at all but great job. Can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Sam56 On: June 20, 2008 01:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story but poor inyuasha isn't getting any action at all but great job. Can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Sam56 On: June 20, 2008 01:01 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love the story but poor inyuasha isn't getting any action at all but great job. Can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: Princess of dobermans [MediaMiner Member] On: June 20, 2008 00:40 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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and how long will that be??? i dont need to chew another auther out to get them back to writing to i lol if it lasts longer than 6 months i will do it...i loved it and i wonder how kurama is going to react when kagome comes back hmmm *contemplates quiedly in a corner with a kitten in her lap*(kinda ironic if you look at name) Demona
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