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Reviewed By: Rainstorm61879NSI On: June 20, 2008 00:39 EDT
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Great to see an update and nice update. There are a few errors spelling and grammar. A few bad ones that make you go huh? but i still enjoyed the chapter. this is one of the sentences i mentioned (The miko was the one to break the kiss, and it was only as she pulled back and saw the same shock she felt reflected in Inuyasha's face that she what they had done.)It just isn't smooth seems like u tried to finsih the sentences 2 different ways and ended up with a mush of the 2.
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Reviewed By: Kitsuneangel88 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 23:47 EDT
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of course it was worth it!!!!!!!!! yoko said i love you! seriously this was one of my favorite chapters. i was having a bad night preceded by a semi-bad day and seeing the notice in my email completely cheered me up! now i feel like re-reading this story once again. i bow down to you! have fun in japan and update again as soon as possible...i miss kurama!!!!
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Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 23:29 EDT
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woah that moment there w/ youko kinda freaked me out... but i'm glad that he has finally admitted that he loves kagome. i look forward to more!
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Reviewed By: Black Wolf Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 23:29 EDT
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I am so happy that u are back
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Reviewed By: Hate2LoveU [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 21:00 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
yay finally you are back!! and yoko said he loves her (awe) hopfully yoko shows kurama that in the future
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Reviewed By: Chrystal-Hearts [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2008 20:50 EDT
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Me likey me likey! Please review soon!
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin (offline) On: June 19, 2008 18:40 EDT
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I love Yoko so much but...dummyhead! Why did he have to even be involved in that kind of thing? It's a good thing he was set straight. Man....I really want Kagome and Yoko to be together. Pretty please?
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Reviewed By: _MillcentHellix_ [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2008 11:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Its June now....please? please please please? I cant wait no more! lol. I love this story, and well, please? I would die if you didnt update...but take your time....just not another 3 months? lol
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Reviewed By: Hate2LoveU [MediaMiner Member] On: June 03, 2008 18:04 EDT
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Its June now. Update Please (pretty please)
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Reviewed By: sesshomari [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2008 00:33 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice chappie. I can only wonder what Yoko's true intensions were with that plant. I know he's pissed but hopefully he'll be able to deal. I can't say the same for Kurama though he seemed heartbroken. Anyways update soon! ~!*sesshomari*!~
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Title: squeefan
Reviewed By: squeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2008 04:57 EST
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awww poor Kurama! Inu always messes things up!
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Reviewed By: kyekye [MediaMiner Member] On: February 20, 2008 12:21 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
well shocked again i must say you do have a nack for doing that please up date soon
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Title: waitin' till June 08
Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 11:47 EST
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*gasps* more twists and turns!! The love *thinks for a while* hexagon is developing even more!! I loved this chapter, cuz frankly, Inuyasha needs some action too - and NOT from a clay body!! Now that i think about it...Inuyasha is kind of Necrophilic.... yeah... urm anyway, What was the thing that Yoko put on Kagome's pillow? Was it some sort of plant/seed thing? Also, how does Yoko from the past feel about Kurama from the future? I know that Kurama in the future shares Yoko's memory - but what about Yoko in the past who does not know Kurama? (am i making sense?) >w< I adore all your characters! And is sesshoumaru going to be making an appearance in this fic? (just curious). :) bye! ~Beckyducky~ OVER AND OUT!!
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Reviewed By: Chrystal-Hearts [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 16:16 EST
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I love your story, and can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2008 15:50 EST
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Good luck with all of your work and studies! We'll be ready for your next chapter come June. (Especially since you left us with such a tantalising cliffy. ^_~) Ew! I can't believe Kag asked Yoko to break his fingers again!! FIVE more times!! She had to know that HURT. That was really selfish of her. So, Inu keeps going to Kikyou to report about their progress gathering shards? It's sad to see that he really is nothing more than a lapdog after all. Of course, Kikyou seems to be threatening Kagome. In which case, he should just smite the bitch. ^_^ I'm really interested to see what the situation is there. Then he was such an ass to Kagome. It's one thing to distance himself, it's another to constantly put her down. "What healing skills? Kagome's never healed in her life." and "i was collecting shards -- the job she's supposed to be doing." Good for Kaede for pointing out that if he had accompanied her back, he may have seen for himself. You could just hear what she must have mumbled right after that: "Ye Jackass." LOL!! Then he put his foot in his mouth again with Kag over kikyou. "Who else?" And he realized what that sounded like when Kagome started to cry. But she was absolutely right, -- it doesn't matter HOW he meant it because it means the same thing. EXACTLY!! Thank you for pointing that out. Even if all of the time he's going to Kikyou, he's doing it to save Kagome, it STILL means the same thing. Because if Kikyou IS threatening to steal Kag's soul or something like that, he should have killed her. By NOT doing so, he is proving that his loyalty still lies with Kikyou. (Yep. You got me all het up over this. ^_^) I loved Yoko and Kurama arguing about going to Kag whne she was in the bath. And then Yoko basically knocked Shuuichi out so he could go. LOL!! That was hilarious! I also enjoyed Kag pulling/pushing Yoko down in the bath. I'm really surprized she thought to do that, too. Nice steamy little scene with them. But the best part really was her thoughts that Shuuichi's gentler touch mad eher feel more than Yoko's impassioned one. ^_^ I have to confess, I felt completely poleaxed by the last turn of events. And I can understand Shuuichi's doubts and thoughts that she would always love Inuyasha. BUT, he knew that Yoko put her in that state through devious means. (Really, the fox is SUCH a sneaky seducer. ^_~) And knowing that, he really should have interrupted before she did something she might regret. It WAS nice, though, (and unexpected), to see a love scene like that between her and Inu. Underneath it all, he DOES love her and want her. And she HAS loved him for a long time. I've been rooting for Kurama through most of this, but you sure know how to bring out my dormant love for dog-boy. But, he's gonna have to do better than he's been doing to win back MY loyalty. ^_^ I'll look forward to your next update!
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