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Reviewed By: Starlet Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2008 16:07 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! How could you leave us with such a huge cliff hanger?! It's writing like yours that keeps me up all night reading because I have to know what's going to happen next :) You're so good at that! Good for you for taking care of business though. You will be missed, but I will look forward to hearing from you in June. Best of luck!
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Title: not the only one!!
Reviewed By: kimonia On: February 15, 2008 15:15 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
..... 3 months .... 3 months ... NOOOOOOOO and you have rad writing my freind .. actually your one of my favoret's !!!! and if i must i'll wait ... i'll wait.. and the ending is MEAN!!!! :`( poor kurama!!!! poor yoko!!! Grr to inuyasha!!!
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 23:24 EST
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WHY DID YOU HAVE TO MAKE THIS CHAPTER SOO GOOD!!! Now I cannto wait for June.. It is just such a LONG time ... what happens next!!! *(faints)*
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Reviewed By: Hate2LoveU [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 16:40 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
JUNE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Why do you torture us so?
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Reviewed By: Hawaiianhoney2030 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 14:08 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
JUNE?!?!?!?! your not updating until JUNE???!!! thats so long! can you give me a birthday present and post the next chapter on april 30th instead!?!?! THAT WOULD BE AMAZING! This chapter was great! nice and long, i loved it! ^_^ poor Kurama had to see Kagome and Inuyasha, but she doesnt love inuyasha! Youko should just bash his head against another wall! litterally knock some sense into his counterpart! anywho, great update, and seriously can't wait for the next chapter, hopefully kagome sets things straight with kurama. and PLEASE consider posting on my birthday!! i would love you forever!!! lol ILL BE WAITING!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2008 00:39 EST
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ahhh i can't believe kurama just left them like that nooo!!! He should go in there and kick inuyasha off kagome! and when did the plant get there? haha i'm still amazed that u somehow manage to write everyone who reviews a note. lol anyways keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: WhiteDemoness11 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 19:54 EST
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Eeeeevil. ...Eh. Dun like Inuyasha and now I feel bad for Kurama. I hope Youko hits his head again and runs back.
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Title: Woo!
Reviewed By: RenorFaer On: February 13, 2008 17:38 EST
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I think this is the first time I've reviewed, so I'll just start out by saying, This is definitely one of the most believable, if not most believable, cross overs between these series that I've ever read. You really covered all of the bases on it, concerning future Kuruma messing with the past and what not so it makes it much easier to read when there isn't that nagging thought of 'wait.. but..wouldn' this happen?' so.. Yay! Aside from that, this is just a really enjoyable read. It's got a wide array of emotions in it, humor, angst, romance,etc. Which is good, because sometimes reading something focused solely on one of those emotions can be rather one sided and dull. Not this :) Oh, and I figured I should also tell you that this fic inspired me to go back and rewatch YuYu Hakusho. I've been reading fanfiction on it for a long time but I hadnt really watched an episode of it in at least a year or 2.so it really refreshed me. And, while i'm thoroughly depressed that you won't be updating for three months (gasp) I understand your situation. It's hard to get into the mindset of writing for fun and not constantly critiquing yourself and over-analyzing when that's, in a sense, what your professors are asking of you. Plus, school in general can just get really overwhelming. SO. Best of luck to you with the rest of your semester, hope everything goes well, and I'm excited for June to come with your next chapter! ps. The whole 'Yoko bashing Kuramas head into the wall to gain control' thing.. brilliant, I laughed for a while on that.
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Title: Woo!
Reviewed By: RenorFaer On: February 13, 2008 17:37 EST
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I think this is the first time I've reviewed, so I'll just start out by saying, This is definitely one of the most believable, if not most believable, cross overs between these series that I've ever read. You really covered all of the bases on it, concerning future Kuruma messing with the past and what not so it makes it much easier to read when there isn't that nagging thought of 'wait.. but..wouldn' this happen?' so.. Yay! Aside from that, this is just a really enjoyable read. It's got a wide array of emotions in it, humor, angst, romance,etc. Which is good, because sometimes reading something focused solely on one of those emotions can be rather one sided and dull. Not this :) Oh, and I figured I should also tell you that this fic inspired me to go back and rewatch YuYu Hakusho. I've been reading fanfiction on it for a long time but I hadnt really watched an episode of it in at least a year or 2.so it really refreshed me. And, while i'm thoroughly depressed that you won't be updating for three months (gasp) I understand your situation. It's hard to get into the mindset of writing for fun and not constantly critiquing yourself and over-analyzing when that's, in a sense, what your professors are asking of you. Plus, school in general can just get really overwhelming. SO. Best of luck to you with the rest of your semester, hope everything goes well, and I'm excited for June to come with your next chapter! ps. The whole 'Yoko bashing Kuramas head into the wall to gain control' thing.. brilliant, I laughed for a while on that.
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Reviewed By: Sango Tajiya [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 16:09 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO! nononononno!!! DON'T....DOTHISTO ME!!! TOT Make Kurama fight godamnit!!Bring him back and MAKE him fight! Inuyasha doesn't DESERVE Kagome!! And Kikyou needs an asskicking to!
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Reviewed By: Firedemon86(nsi) On: February 13, 2008 15:53 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOOO!!! What do you mean until June!! NOOOOO!! Kurama get in there, fight for Kagome!! .... Youko hit him in the head again, ahhhhh!!! T____T this is too much. now I'm completely on edge, don't leave us hanging too long. I (BOWS) bow to the queen of the cliffhanger endings and I thought I was evil...
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Reviewed By: Kitsuneangel88 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 13, 2008 10:05 EST
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Hold it! no,no,no,no! knock some sense into someone! kagome doesn't REALLY love inuyasha. it's just hat whole "you never forget your first love" thing right? kurama should do what yoko says and get in there and kick inuyasha out! you had better update soon because it would just be mean and cruel to leave us hagning after this! btw, i still completely love the story!
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Title: >< zomg!!
Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2008 17:41 EST
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yay! more sexual frustration!! gosh...studying for ap exams really take alot out of me... sorry for my lackluster reviews. i love the way the plots going....!! I'm also worried about kagome... will completing the jewel kill her? or save her? ZOMG!!! it's so interesting!! i love how koenma and the rest of the YYH characters are melded into this. I was rereading some of your old chapters and i was like: wow, she writes characters extremely canon. so kudos to you. ^^ alchemically yours, Beckyducky keep on living.
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Title: I don't like it.....................
Reviewed By: Sesshomaru_Kagome_lover_4ever [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2008 07:22 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't like it.....................I LOVE IT..XD..But Chapter 27 was the same as Chapter 26..Did you know that?..Anyways back to how much I LOVEEEEEE your story...It's great..It gives me butterflies..It has YOKO in it...DUH..XD..And KAGOME..another..DUH..And Plus your doing a GREAT JOB..Ah..DUH DUH DUHHHHHHHHHH..XD..And I really like it..And exspecially the Lingo in it..XD..When my Lil-Bro comes in here to read it..He has NO clue what most of it means..So thank you for taking time to read my Review..Bye..And update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Youkerie On: January 30, 2008 11:53 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One of the best fanfictions ive read in a very long time. so as such, this means you need to update it as soon as possible :3 but really- your doing a great job, so keep it up!
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