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Reviewed By: double Z On: July 15, 2009 02:22 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
forgot wat i read All i remember is that it was a great chapter thanks for up-dating!!! can't wait for the next chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: NinjaRikku On: July 05, 2009 22:23 EDT
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Amazing, I've been reading this thing since it came out, and I'm really glad you've updated it since I left off...a logn time ago, lol! Update soon though okay? and for some really good vamp books, try the southern vampire chronicles/sookie stackhouse novels.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2009 06:03 EDT
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"Bad Timing" was a very apt title for this chapter. Poor Kagome kept walking in on everyone at the worst possible time. Then there were the multitude of injuries all around. Such an emotional chapter. You are really putting my favorite heroine through the wringer. ^_~ AND my favorite fire demon. LOL! He's had a full ice night and a full fire night, been poisoned, and now he had to be subdued and kissed by Kurama. (Come to Mama, Hiei--I'll treat you right in my next piece. Hehheh!) BTW, I was SO glad you had Kurama explain that Hiei didn't realize the serum he had given him wasn't a cure because I was really wondering why he was so stupid to insist on going to tell Kagome instead of letting Botan go. I kept thinking that even if her powers hadn't brought out his majin form, he was running the risk of it coming out anyway just due to the time. So, kudos for clearing that up! Kagome had touching moments with all three contenders for heart, a steamy moment with Youko, and the two WTF moments with the others. Poor Inuyasha has shot himself in the foot by keeping her in the dark. Seven chapters to go, huh? I know they're going to be jam-packed with a lot of angst since two of these guys have to lose out. But I'm looking forward to a happy ending for Kagome. Great chapter!
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Reviewed By: my3rdeyes [MediaMiner Member] On: July 01, 2009 09:35 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
glad you update.
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Reviewed By: Icyfire On: July 01, 2009 01:29 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is Hawaiianhoney2030, I'm too lazy to login haha but i just wanted to say Great chapter! i loved it! i seriously can't wait to read the next chapter! update soon!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Chrystal-Hearts [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2009 23:39 EDT
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I can't wait til you continue this, I love your story.
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Title: Well...
Reviewed By: swasdiva [MediaMiner Member] On: June 30, 2009 23:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm glad to see my luck of revisiting this fic the very day you update hasn't waned. Another glorious chapter, mah dear! So much action and emotion, my heart can barely slow down, it's racing so hard. My favorite scene was the heartbreaking way you handled Kuronue's death. There was such rich, tangible closeness between Youko and Kagome, and yet I felt a keen sadness in Youko's demeanor, not just because of Kuronue's death, but hinted mostly at his lack of response concerning Kagome's confession about her fears. It's almost as if he doesn't quite believe her, or that because of her indecision between him and Inuyasha, he's resigned to his fate as second best in her heart. For that reason her sentiment is that much more painful to bear. Very sad, and I wish Kagome would open her eyes to see Youko only has eyes for her. She wants to support him in his grief, but until she gives him her whole heart, it's not enough. My heart hurts so much for Youko right now!!!! The rest was great, too. I find it so funny, in a frustrating sense, that Kagome gets so hurt from misjudging Kurama and Hiei's situation, and yet Youko/Kurama bear the same position so stoically. I know Kagome's in that position with Inuyasha, but still, it's ironic she can be hurt by an apparent betrayal while he constantly puts his own needs aside for hers. I know she's not oblivious to it, but still... GAH!!! I just love them together so much, I want her to get over Inuyasha and commit to Kurama!!! Whew, I'm still as deeply invested in this fic as ever!!! Loved the update and I'm on pins and needles for the remaining chappies! ~ swas
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Reviewed By: Colin12345677 On: June 30, 2009 19:23 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story and the writing is unbelievable with detail; and just flows so well from chapter to chapter. So just keep up the great work and am looking forward to more soon then later. Especially with the whole love triangle and all. Kagome just doen't seem like the type to string three guys along and be so intimate with them as she goes. It will be interesting having her think Yash is trying to get rid of her when really he trying to save her and then Kurama and Youko are just interesting to say the list. Thanks again for the great job.
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Reviewed By: dubble Z On: June 27, 2009 17:49 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HEY!! you said you were going to update in june but june is almost over and I don't see a new chapter!!!
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Reviewed By: rocky road On: May 14, 2009 00:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH!!! the drama! I hope kurama isn't really dead. By the way, when are you going to update?! I'm really getting into this fic and don't think i could wait!!!
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Reviewed By: Hawaiianhoney2030 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2009 03:11 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LOVED the new update!!! ahhh but it was so short it was slightly frustrating! :( and i COMPLETELY agree with you about the release of New Moon!!! oh i'm so excited! i can't wait for the damn trailer to come out lol cause that will satisfy me until the movie comes out :P lol i watched the twilight trailer like twice a day til the movie came out! but great update! still absolutely love this fic! and i can't wait to read the next chapter!!! oh by the way... loved the scene outcut that you added at the end ^_^ very yummy. oh and one more thing! lol you're from canada huh? i can tell cause my roommate this year is from Regina, Canada and i've never heard anyone besides her and you say your going to 'phone' someone instead of 'call' them lol. and you say eh! its so cute. i make fun of her all the time cause its so funny. shes always like 'ok, ill phone you when i get there' and i'm always like 'oh? are you planning on throwing your phone at me? cause 'phone' is a noun... 'call' is an adjective' lol shes so funny.
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Reviewed By: just a fan On: April 25, 2009 17:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my goodness i love this story!!!! can i start off by saying you're freakin' amazing? (cuz you totally are) Well i must say, i'm a die-hard Inuyasha&Kagome fan, and this is honestly the first story i've ever read that makes me almost wish Kagome will end up with Kurama. (almost. i'm still rooting for Inuyasha and hoping Yoko will find some other girl!) I love this story, but i agonize over the lack of Inuyasha:[ i hate Kikyo. why can't it be simpler? wahhh!!! (but i love the guessing/hoping) haha anyways, LOVE your story, and i defiantly look forward to read the next chapter! Good luck on your exams! study hard! :D
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Reviewed By: Sango Tajiya [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2009 22:20 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
GGGGGGOOOOODSSSS!!!!!!! ....-_- Youko's dead isn't he? Jeez you just had to kill the happy buzz!!! Girl I love ya I really do and I love this story so damn much but it's DRIVING ME UP THE WALLS!!!! I really will cry if Inu is the one that wins. Really I will. And Kurama should be the one to take her virginity cuz I see you making Yash hover in on those fluff- that-can-turn-into-steamy-lemon moments. Please.... Just let them kill Naraku and have him die. Seriously let Kikyo have him. ....SERIOUSLY. I love how complicated this story is and I think you're awesome for coming up with all this. Keep up the good work babe^^ good luck on your testing.
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Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: April 24, 2009 02:06 EDT
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yay thanks for the new chapter. it seemed shorter than the other ones but i'm prob just wishing that i could read more. well i hope kagome and kurama continue to grow closer i loved all the heated moments in the chapter. I'll be waiting for the next chapter so till june see you!
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Title: the longest review i have ever written
Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2009 09:23 EDT
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Hi Kawaii-sama!! Chapter 31 pt. 2 was worth the wait! First off: Thank you so much for putting in the time and effort for the outtake. It's so much better than anything I could have cranked out of my head. Arigato gozaimasu!! My friend was with me when I checked on the new chapter and she exclaimed, "Oh my gosh, that chapter's dedicated to YOU - WTF?" So yeah - she was like yelling and stuff…in the library… (we almost got kicked out… >__O< *blush* I am concerned however about the plants dying. Since the plants sort of feed from Yoko's youki (haha - alliteration), if the Yoko dies and there is no youki, would the plants die? (Try saying that five times fast.) I'm kind of worried and I have a whole bunch of theories as to the why's and how's…but I won't bore you with those. This is a long enough review anyway. It's been a really long journey…I can't believe it was started in 2006… *sniffles* I'm going to miss it!! I look forward to your next chapter! May is like death for me too because of all my AP exams. Just a question: how much has your workload increased from high school to university? I'm thinking of studying abroad because I love to travel - are there any universities you recommend for a gal who wants to major in Chemistry? Final thought: do you have a facebook? If you do, please add me! My name in facebook is Becky San (yeah I know - real imaginative.) If multiple Becky San's show up, just pick the one in New York…if you have trouble finding me, just tell me and I'll send you the link to my profile.
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