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Reviewed By: knjj727 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 25, 2007 06:06 EDT
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really good please up date soon
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Reviewed By: EP On: September 19, 2007 17:29 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
omfg. i was reading then went to go to the next chapter and there wasn't one!!!! please hurry and update! though i have one little thing....who she gonna get w/??? youko or kurama. even though they're the same person...kinda...
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2007 22:41 EDT
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Can't remember if I reviewed this chapter yet or not, but since I just read it again, ... Kurama's rescue was very timely, and just what one would expect from a dashing hero. (No pregnant males here! LOL!) I loved his reaction to the nightie, and HER reaction to HIS reaction. (And Yusuke's reaction, too!) It was sweet of Yusuke to give her his jacket. And, ew! Who has to clean up that mess? Will Koenma send in the ogres? I didn't think Kagome would be so unsettled by being attacked by demons -- happens all the time, but then again, NOT in HER time, ne? And that's the first time she's seen evidence that Kurama can help protect her. ^_^ I giggled at Kurama thinking he might have to thank Hiei for intoxicating himself. And then that there was no need for them to freeze to death just because the baka got himself poisoned. LOL!! Poor little Hiei. No sympathy? And the indignity of it all, -- to be put in the bathtub. LOL!! There was some nice heat between Kagome and Kurama. What will Inuyasha think when she goes back? I was glad you differentiated between Kurama's build and Youko's -- making Youko's more mature and rock solid. Kurama is still a youth, after all. Very nice chapter!
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Title: eh??
Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: September 15, 2007 17:42 EDT
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what the-? something went wrong with my other review: the one that says "enjoyment factor: 10" I have no clue why. The text portion was all gone...hm...what i wanted to say was that the lime was great (ducky: *blush*) and the setting was wonderful too. Just a question. Were those beetle demon things going after Kagome or Keiko? And what is up with Koenma? Why did he drug everyone in the hotel? Did he know what was going to happen? Gah! the mystery of it all...:) keep updating! (though im pretty sore about being number 401 lol)
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Title: NOOO!!!!
Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2007 16:53 EDT
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urgh!!!!!! I CANT BELIEVE MY LUCK!!!! Y'know, it's the worst when you're reviewer number 401. *becky sobs* i cant believe my luck...but...AT LEAST THE CITRUS WAS AWESOME. :) tastefuly done and cool. wonderful job. keep updating!!
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Title: LOVE YOU
Reviewed By: Its Who I Am [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2007 22:28 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow looks like someone if finally getting some!! But it also makes a person wonder who is going to take her virginity?? I mean I bet they both want to do it. But Im also guessing that Yoko was VERY happy in that last chapter!! Lol Keep up the good work I cant wait until you update again!!
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Reviewed By: Not Good On: September 06, 2007 22:24 EDT
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TOTALLY AWSOME WORK!! I MEAN I LIKE TOTALLY LEARN SOMETHING NEW WITH EACH CHAPTER!! I TOTALLY REALLY LIKE YOU WORK!! LIKE COULD YOU HURRY UP AND WRITE MORE!!
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Reviewed By: Nunnya On: September 06, 2007 22:23 EDT
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Keep going cant wait 4 more!!! love your work!!
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Reviewed By: Yoko Kurama's #1 LuvR On: September 06, 2007 22:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey i dnt have and account yet but i have to say GREAT story!! this seems really different for kagome cause shes never really had the time to worry/do/experiment about/with anything to do with sex. she is really innocent in all aspects of the word!! Cant wait to read more from you!!
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Reviewed By: Me Myself & I On: September 06, 2007 22:19 EDT
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would hiei be able to find out what is going on with koenma and botan?? i mean i doubt that he would want to see him friend hurt right...hope to hear from you soon!!
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Reviewed By: Who Am I? On: September 06, 2007 22:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
nice i really liked it. but damn they did that with Hiei in the bathroom talk about kinky!! lol hurry i want to know what happens next!!
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Reviewed By: Wow^__^ On: September 06, 2007 22:15 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow so wich one is going to take her?? Yoko?? or Kurama?? or maybe alittle bit of both in Kuramas body?? keep up nice chapt!!
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Reviewed By: dragoonvixenofshadows [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2007 12:52 EDT
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oh yeah it was good, another well written chapter, i just have to wondwer in which time she will loose her innocence...
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Reviewed By: a_MikoS_heartache [MediaMiner Member] On: September 06, 2007 06:39 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thanks tons for the update. Finally were getting somewhere! yay!! I was just wondering..... How will Inuyasha take it when he finds out. I'd love 2 see his face. O.O *smiles* and as always.... UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 (not logged in) On: September 05, 2007 21:42 EDT
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Heh. Okay den.. I'll check fanfiction as soon as... i get done with all my homework >-< I really hate school... oh well. Lemons... so sweet, but the aftertaste is a bit sour, so who knows what's gonna happen. You're almost to the 400th review! Yay! I can't wait for more.. so good! Update soon pwease!!!
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