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Reviewed By: Hate2LoveU [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2008 21:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Love this story! update faster please!!!!!
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Reviewed By: kyekye [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2008 12:23 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that i wasent expecting please up date soon
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Reviewed By: SKnFS [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2008 23:01 EST
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This story was hilarious in a morbid sense. I mean come on "I was gonna break my pinky" and the saddest part of it is I can actually see her doing something like that just so she can help everybody out. Poor Yoko just doesn't seem to understand that the only thing he can expect out of our favorite miko is that he can't expect her to do anything he'd expect. XD Does that even make any sense? Anyway I love your story and am so happy you updated. I look forward to your next update. Ja ne.
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Title: woah
Reviewed By: becky D. -again On: January 18, 2008 18:00 EST
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woah. i just looked at madmiko-san's review. DARNIT!!....*sniffle* why cant i write that much?? (lol)
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Title: kya!!!
Reviewed By: becky D. not logged in On: January 18, 2008 17:59 EST
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Zomg! the tension!!! i loved how protective Yoko was being about kagome when she was curing herself and such. my friend walked into the room and joked that Kagome was being emo - which led to the oneshot "Kagome is Emo" (not posted). Kagome: *cuts herself*; Sesshoumaru: ACK!! Kagome!! You are not to do that!! Kagome: Demo... Sess: NO! You are not to do that!! Kagome: Demo.... Sess: Do I make myself clear? Kagome: *collapses on the floor dead* (the end)....it's pretty gay but i was bored. lol.... must study for midterms! c. ya! from Beckyducky
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Reviewed By: Chrystal-Hearts [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2008 00:36 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the story, and can't wait for the next chapter. I hope to be able to read it soon! Chrystal
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 07:53 EST
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All right. What happened to the last bit of my review? Hmph. Anyway, I love the way you're showing Kagome's inner turmoil. Her love for Inu isn't something that would just die away easily, but her other suitors are feeding her soul (and her physical desires) in ways he never has. And that WAS a rather wicked cliffy. (Oh, how I love them!) I will be awaiting the next chapter most anxiously!! And, what's this? You have an idea for Hiei/Kag story?!!? *stares at screen eagerly* I would LOVE to see your take on them!!! Your writing is always such a treat! *puppy eyes* Thanks for another great, entertaining chapter!!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2008 07:47 EST
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It's always a pleasure to see a new chapter up for this story. ^_^ This one was definitely Youko-centric, but you had a couple of really important little things in it with Inu and Kouga, too. I was really intrigued with the way kagome had just left when the guys were arguing/fighting. It was refreshing to see that she had simply had enough of it, and she left them to sort it out themselves for once. Her thoughts about Inu and Youko were so interesting. At first, she was annoyed with Youko for messing up her perfectly-ordered life, then she was forced to admit that it hadn't been very perfect for a long, long time. That was an important realization for her, I think. (I chuckled when she thought to herself that she should have kicked Kikyou's butt when she had the chance. LOL!! And I agree!) Youko was funny with his comment that he wasn't sure what he preferred, -- kitsune seduction and helpless or all trussed up and feisty. And his "I would rather not be interrupted by the inu and ookami simply because you screamed my name too loudly," was SO perfect. Nice touch!! ^_~ However, I was just a bit confused as to how the shirt came off unscathed with her wrists bound like they were. I can't believe Kag tricked him like that and took off running. But I really liked the way you had her admit to herself that she wanted to be caught. He was overpowering her, and she was confused, but she couldn't deny those very real feelings, -- both emotional and physical. Of course, he tied her up again when he caught her. LOL!! It was nice to see kuronue make a cameo appearance, and I liked the way you mentioned what Yomi was doing. Nice nod to YYH canon. But, um, how did she manage to tug down her skirt and cover her chest when she was still bound so tightly? Aha! Inu finally caught on to the scentless petal plant. He was acting a bit OOC, so it would be nice to have a little insight into his thoughts about the way things are going. Sure, he would grumble about them not getting as many shards as he would have liked, but he didn't seem concerned about Kagome's injuries at all. He left? He is really in turmoil about her right now, but he's doing EVERYTHING wrong. Poor dumb dog. Kagome's thoughts early in the chapter showed that she definitely still has feelings for him. I appreciated her thoughts that he wasn't the ONLY one she loved anymore. I loved the way Kouga just handed over his shards to her, asking only that she consider his offer when everything was done. (I would laugh my *** off if at the end of this story you threw out a shocking ending with her turning down Inu, Youko, AND Kurama to be with Kouga. I know, -- you'd get lynched. But I've got a twisted sense of humor. ^_~) I liked the idea that Kaede urged her to learn to use some of her other abilities. I can't believe she gave her a dagger to go cut herself, though. LOL!! And while I could see her making a few shallow little cuts to test herself, I couldn't quite believe she would think about breaking her finger just to see if she could mend bones, OR plunging the dagger into her stomach. What if she had hit something vital and passed out? Then it wouldn't matter if she could have healed it or not. That would have been really, really stupid. And it would have taken a hell of a lot of determination to do it, even thinking she could heal it. I'm glad Youko also wised her up to the fact that she was exposing herself to attack while she was concentrating on the healing, AND that she was probably drawing predators with the blood-letting. Where the heck is INU?!!? He couldn't smell her blood? And, um, why was her arm bound up again when Youko got there? Hadn't she already healed it? You made a wonderful point about both her character and Youko's when he told her hopw selfless she was and that he, on the other hand, never did anything that wouldn't benefit him. Then he broke his own fingers so she could practice healing them. Heavy stuff. ^_~ I really like the way you're showing Kagome's inner t |
Title: awesome
Reviewed By: Kitsuneangel88 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 22:47 EST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
whooo. some of the scenes you write are just HOT! i have to fan myself. but yoko was so sweet to kagome it made my heart melt in those little scenes! i so want to be kagome! and i think it's great what you did with kagome's healing. and finally, we're getting some answers from koenma. please update again as soon as possible. PLEASE! i'll beg if i have to. this story is soooo addictive!
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Reviewed By: WhiteDemoness11 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 20:03 EST
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oooh evil cliffy. Sexy lime content..*sighs* I can wait a month if it means more goodness like this. Seriously though I love the way that Youko is being possessive yet understanding. I think he's fallen for Kagome more then he'll ever admit. Even to his alter ego. *snickers* Race between the two versions of the fox to see who gets to steal her virginity hm? ~WD
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 19:52 EST
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Wow i am really wanting that next chapter.. Kagome DIES!!! need to know.. UPDATE SOON
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Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 19:40 EST
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kagome... hm? well i was thinking that it was either kagome or kurama. hmm so kagome is going to die? aw no i don't want either of them to die! update soon i'll be looking forward to the next chappy as usual!
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Reviewed By: Hawaiianhoney2030 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2008 17:56 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
great update, absolutly loved it, can't wait to read more
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Reviewed By: misfit_one85 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 13:05 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your writing, you've left me on the edge of my seat i just have to know what happens next!! please update soon.
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Reviewed By: misfit_one85 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 14, 2008 13:05 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your writing, you've left me on the edge of my seat i just have to know what happens next!! please update soon.
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