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| "Not the Only One" Reviews/Comments [ 570 ] | | Pages (38): [ « ‹ 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 › » ] | Reviewed By: youkos girl [MediaMiner Member] On: August 18, 2007 00:51 EDT
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OMG! I cant wait till the next one this update came to a surprise to me because it was a short wait and on top of that it was a long chapter i loved it. Hiei i love the way he just wanted to consume the drinks! By the way can you read kagomes' mind? I completely forgot about the jewel untill you had mentioned it. I wonder what kurama is gonna do next! So is it just going to be Kurama and Yusuke going up to kagomes room?...Wait did she change out of her "pajams" or is she still wearing that little skimpy cute thing? lol. Well anyways i hope that you update quickly!!..but the again i might not be able to read it during the weekday because of school! But still updtae it i will read it. I absolutely love your stories..especially this one its almost like an addiction to me! lol
| Reviewed By: Youkai Goddess/Bradhadair On: August 17, 2007 22:54 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Konichiwa! Ilove this story! Every time Igo on mediaminer I check to see if it's updated yet. The characters are portrayed really realistically... Well, Youko does seem a little too... overwhelming, sort of. About the drinks... I really don't think they were going for Keiko. I mean, she's celebrating for her wedding, so it would be sort of unrealistic if she didn't have at least ONE glass of alcohol. They couldn't have been going for Kagome, cause you said she was a little tipsy... it's obvious Shizuru had a glass, being who she is... Which leaves Botan or Yukina... But Yukina said she had no personal experience with alcohol, so i think its her... ifi got it right, i deserve a cookie, right? a big, crunchy,cyber-cookie? :p Why was Hiei iratated? it's not like it was Yukina's wedding to Kuwabara or anything... he seems a little TOO angry for just having to go to the engagement party. Imean, he's got plenty of demon... well, friends isn't the word... closest i can get is "pals"... to talk to... Sorry about your trip.I know I'd prabably throw something if a trip to japan got cancelled Anyway, love the story. see ya next chapter! luv ya lots, Youkai Goddess Bradhadair
| Reviewed By: Kitsuneangel88 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 19:10 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
of course i loved the chapter! but even if we do know whats gonna happens that ending was still cruel. i kinda feel bad for kurama and yoko, having to leave kagome's room like that. but i cannot wait till they see kagome's nightie. of course she might be a little embarassed considering the situation in which he DOES see it. oh, i cannot wait for the realization to kick in. please update soon! please, please, please. seriously, im not above begging.
| Reviewed By: Brightshadow4494 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2007 15:15 EDT
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your story is awesome, so was your last update!
| Reviewed By: Elemental_Dea [MediaMiner Member] On: August 12, 2007 16:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oi, i love this fic. ah i can't believed kurama would kiss yusuke though but it was perfect in the situation nonetheless. love the story, please update soon!!!!! ^.^
| Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2007 00:08 EDT
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I just LOVED the Hiei comment Kagome made....*always picking on Hiei..... hilarious.... Real nice Chapter...... can;t wait for more
| Reviewed By: dragoonvixenofshadows [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 18:41 EDT
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i love it, and thanks, i actually simi stole the name from my fiance who is obsessed with the game and did it to poke fun at him lol cant wait till the next chappie
| Title: DeathNoteMaker
Reviewed By: Shinagami Darkness [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 13:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome! I hope you post again soon! XD
| Title: ultra special blah blah blah
Reviewed By: beckyducky [MediaMiner Member] On: August 09, 2007 10:31 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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okay...getting any type of trip canceled suxx.. :( I hope that in easter everything goes well. I was so excited that the yu yu gang got to meet kagome!! It was a wonderful chapter that tied the fic in nicely....I'm really glad you think my fic is nice. So far, i've introduced Keiko, Hiei, Kurama, Yoko, and a brief mention about Koenma. Next chapter, i'm hoping to introduce more characters as the plot thickens.... (insert "dun dun dun" here) I cant wait until Kagome goes back to the feudal era to hear what yoko has to say... :) oh yeah. There is this Japanese Rock/Pop singer. His name is Gackt and you really should check him out.
| Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2007 11:59 EDT
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X3 this really made me happy. And the last few lines, how sweet! :P The ice sculpture thing was pretty cool. a nice touch :D heh, yup. laughter kills when you hold it in XD thanks for updating! I once thought of tricking my dad into thinking I cut off all my hair by wearing a beanie...meh, but he would probably freak out XD
| Reviewed By: Me Myself & I On: August 07, 2007 19:06 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked this chapter can you please update soon!!
| Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 17:54 EDT
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Kweel. Sorry about your trip! If it were me, i would've been bawling my eyes out.... but there's always next year!!! Keep your hopes up(and your not full of bad luck!!! If you were, would anyone read this awesome story? Then lots of people would be disapointed!)!!! Good chapter... can't wait for the story he's telling to finish... must *twitch* know what happened *twitch*... Update soon!
| Reviewed By: Still Lazy~ Lm KiTsUnE On: August 07, 2007 17:48 EDT
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Aww, this chapter was cute, yet...spicy. xD I loved the train ride, poor Kurama always getting confused as a girl. Im sure she would have liked him to take up her idea, and whats this? A "little" kiss? Oh, Kagome can't denie it, shes gettin jelous! lol. I think Hiei caught her though, didn't He? And the silent threats between Shizuru and Kagome? Great~ Update soon, and congrats on your grades, I wish mine were that good. LAWL.
| Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 17:33 EDT
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Great chappy! I'm so happy we're at the party! I really liked the beginning of this one -- the explanation/remembrances of Shuichi as a child, coming to see his mother's love as something to be cherished, and how it changed him. Then his reaction to Yoko's memory of what he had done to/with the whore, -- I wasn't expecting that at all, and I was so glad you put that in. And I liked Yoko telling him that it was HIS mistake, not Kurama's. That was very mature and understanding of him to say that. Naturally, I loved Kag and Kur's reactions to seeing each other. Interesting little train trip. Kurama still gets his feathers ruffled at being mistaken for a girl, huh? LOL! And, I take it that his little slip of the tongue was an indication that he has actually fallen in LOVE with her, instead of just liking her. Interesting. ^_^ So glad you had Chu there. I really, really wanted to put him in my story, but I didn't like the way it turned out when I tried to write his accent. I am currently battling a scene with Jin in it for the same reason. *sigh* I like the mix of youkai at the gathering. We're seen Kagome's initial nervousness at being a miko in a roomful of youkai, -- I have to wonder what all the youkai are thinking. Nice meeting with Keiko. And I loved Yusuke's interaction with Kurama -- the teasing, the wrestling, and then when Kurama kissed him -- Ha!! That was great! I thank you SO much for not hooking Hiei up with anyone. When he isn't with Kagome, I much prefer him to just be in the role of dark, brooding sidekick. Not everyone has to be paired up in every story, IMHO. Well, I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and wondering just what kind of hijinks are going to occur during the night. Kag's got that cute nightie -- SOMEONE has to see it! LOL!! So sorry to hear your trip went bust. But a cruise to Italy is nothing to sneeze at. Italy is beautiful in the summertime. And you know, Hiei would like it there -- they have lots of good ice cream! I have to ask: did you get pinched? ^_^ Hopefully, you will get to reschedule your trip to Japan. Good luck with that!
| Title: loving it
Reviewed By: Kitsuneangel88 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 07, 2007 17:03 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
an amazing update as usualy. i love the interaction between kurama and kagome on the train and betweeb kurama and the rest of the gain. especially how kurama reated to his gifts. and that scene at the end was so cute! and his reaction to the memories and kagome's dress in the beginning...loved it! i love that this story isnt short like a good portion of the stories for this couple. i am so addicted to this story! i keep re-reading it. you have got to update as soon as possible! i cannot wait to read more.
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