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Reviewed By: aknkkskd [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 18:19 EDT
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true, but what is Kikyo up to nothing good that's for sure. can't wait to hear what Kagome's dress looks like.
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Reviewed By: ChibiRin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 17:25 EDT
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I really like this chapter and I'm looking forward to developments between Yoko and Kagome. Yay! Good luck with the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: Starlet Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 13:02 EDT
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Have fun in Japan *jealous*. I'm not sure how long you're going to be there, but for completely selfish reasons, I hope it's not very long because I really enjoy reading this story. Learn lots and have fun!
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Reviewed By: Great fic! On: July 15, 2007 12:50 EDT
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I really like the plot so far. How many more chaps do you think there'll be? Also, I think temee doesn't really mean bastard, just rude way of saying you. but i could be wrong =P
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Reviewed By: obsessedfanclub On: July 15, 2007 09:24 EDT
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YAY!!!!!!!!!! update again!!!!! i can't wait till the party! ^o^
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Title: kawaii-miko
Reviewed By: kawaii-miko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2007 08:46 EDT
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I love this story cant wait to read about the praty
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Reviewed By: kris77 On: July 15, 2007 06:51 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Super chapter. I´ve heard the complaints about the faithfulness of Youko. Does he really have to be faithful to Kagome if they aren´t together yet? She doesn´t exactly tell him that he can have her and she doesn´t seem to be sure who to pick either. She´s not over InuYasha yet... And why should InuYasha NOT get together with Kikyou? She isn´t as evil as she seems, at least not in the manga. Maybe she too is just jealous of her "reincarnation". Hell, I would be jealous too. The puppy doesn´t make it easy on the two mikos. BOTH of them. And what could Kurama possibly do against his fangirls? He is simply too polite to tell them to obsess over another. He too cannot present Kagome as his girlfriend yet, and so it cannot be helped. It can also not be counted as unfaithfulness if some crazed fangirls fawn over him, or does he take them into his bed? He is beautiful and he can´t help THAT. I hope that you don´t let someone persuade you into NOT making this a Kur/Kag. There are TONS of Inu/Kag, Hiei/Kag, Yus/Kag etc. but hardly any finished (and good) Kur/Kag. Your fic is really one of my favourites. It´s really humorous and not the average "Kagome turns demon/hanyou/tenshi etc" or "Kagome has suffered sooo much". She is refreshingly IN-character. PLEASE keep up the wonderful work and update soon.
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Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 23:43 EDT
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yay! updated! I feel bad for Youko, forcing himself to be gentle like that but while doing so just tempting himself all the same :D hahaha, Kagome's attitude with those girls was really funny. thanks for updating!
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Reviewed By: demonchild_slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 21:57 EDT
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So far so good I can't wait until you update again. Hope you have a good trip to Japan and a happy early birthday.
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Reviewed By: shipporinKIMS11 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 20:43 EDT
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Hello! This is interesting.... wouldn't it be funny if Inuyasha showed up at the engagment party? Hehe... lol. Wow. If i wrote that much, i wouldn't be typing this right now. You are SOOOOO lucky you are going to Japan!! Buy LOTS of inuyasha stuff (lol) ... and maybe a couple of kimonos too. And BTW... Tempura and Sashimi RULE!!! Have fun in Japan, Happy Birthday, and I can't wait for updates!!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 20:42 EDT
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Fabulous! And how sweet of you to give US a gift for your birthday! Hope you have a terrific day! I completely understand your motivations in showing a darker part of Yoko's personality -- you're right, all 3 of Kag's suitors are flawed, and it's only fair to show that. Otherwise, we'd all be going, "What's the problem? Dump the 2 jerks and go for Mr. Perfect!" I like it that Yoko's sleep has been plagued with dreams about his little excursion. It made a real impact on him, so it's natural it would be on his mind. And his thoughts -- wondering if that is who he truly is, and would he treat Kagome like that -- spot on. Hmmm. Inuyasha and Kagome are really struggling right now. Interesting that the only news he shared with Kagome was about : Kouga!! Oh, yes! How can we forget the charming wolf prince? Heck, maybe HE'S Mr. Right after their time apart. Heh heh! Can't wait for THAT confrontation! And I loved it when Kagome asked how Kikyou knew what Kouga had said and was planning. Darn good question!! And Inuyasha blinked when she asked it. Hmmm. I have to wonder just what was going through his head right then. When is he ever going to learn to stop trusting Kikyou? I have to say it -- even if Inu doesn't end up with Kagome, I don't want to see Kikyou win him. And does he not realize that by being distant and not confiding in Kagome, he is losing her for sure? After everything, he continues to make the same mistakes. It's so sad. You know, I really, really liked it when Yoko kissed Kagome, and she thought, "Almost like Kurama ..." It really gives a sense of continuity to that character(s). And it can be pointed to as perhaps a turning point for Yoko that carried over when he merged with Suuichi. Really nice touch. The fangirls. I've gotta say I loved the line that she looked like she had been "slapped, spat at, and slapped again for good measure." LOL!!I can't wait to see what Kag says to Kurama about that little encounter. And the nightie. I copuld hear the drums in the background when she thought, "Well, it's not like Kurama's going to see me in it, right?" A-rum-dum-dum. LOL! Well, this chapter was a great addition to the story. It still looks like Inuyasha is just letting her go. And Yoko is having some serious thoughts and revelations about himself, as well as her. I can't wait to see what happens during her time with Kurama next! I hope she has a good time -- that poor girl has too much angst in her life. LOL!! Have a great trip!
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 20:13 EDT
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Yay this chapter was absolutely wonderful...I wish I had a boyfriend who would give me jewelry just like Youko....Can;t wait for the next chapter..PARTY!!
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Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 19:33 EDT
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yay great chap im really excited for the next. kags is finally going to the hotel i wonder wuts gunna happen there. hm i guess there will be sum more kur/kag fluffs huh? oh by the way... Congratulations on the award and HAPPY B-DAY!!! Also i really hope that u have a good time in japan!
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Title: Awesomness
Reviewed By: Kagome093 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2007 18:44 EDT
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that was such a cute chappie i loved how youkos so eager to spend time with her is soo sweet and im ttly hoping that hes there when they see kouga for the shards think that should be so halarious seeing how he reacts to kouga calling her him woman lol im seriously so freakin curious to see who the hell she ends up with i personally wish it was youko but i think that it'll be kurama *ugh its driving me crazy ;D awesome chappie update soon k
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Title: i luv u
Reviewed By: sunspun On: July 14, 2007 06:22 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oi! i luv this story soo-o-o-0-0-0OOOOO much yah this is a really good story im adicted thx so much for writing it! :D
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