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Reviewed By: knjj727 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 16:52 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: man why did she say stop it was just getting good i mean i would die to be in that postiton with eather my boy friend chris brown or corbin bleu i would be in heaven shes a idiot and wasent she the one to start it she had the fellings first so it is her fault so she has no one to blame but her self -_- ah well nothing i can do about it ^_^ any ways please up date soon
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Reviewed By: aknkkskd [MediaMiner Member] On: June 19, 2007 15:02 EDT Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: that is not a nice place to leave it. why did she stop him. what a cliffhanger. update soon pretty please
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Title: Great Job! Reviewed By: Vyncent [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2007 19:46 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Each chapter is getting better. The intensity is wonderful. Keep up the good work and update soon.
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Reviewed By: youkiluver On: June 18, 2007 19:33 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Please post the next chapters as soon as possible!!! I will be checking each and every day for your updates. Thanks.
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Reviewed By: LmKiTsUnE [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 21:53 EDT Comment/Review: *Le Gasp!* xD Kagome thinks its the neckless and Yoko thats making her feel that way. Oooooo this is getting good. Aww, your going to have the wedding in here right? I wanna see that, I bet it will be so cute. x3 Update soon, I need to know! This is one of the storys that I just love to death! *Glomps your brain...and you* xD
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Title: sooo,,, Reviewed By: Kagome093 (just 2 lazy to log in) On: June 17, 2007 20:56 EDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: sssoooooo......what, was he like controlling her emotions to seduce her or what???
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Title: sooo,,, Reviewed By: Kagome093 (just 2 lazy to log in) On: June 17, 2007 20:56 EDT Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: sssoooooo......what, was he like controlling her emotions to seduce her or what???
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Reviewed By: Astrid44 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 20:13 EDT Comment/Review: I loved the latest chapter. Plz update soon.
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Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 19:05 EDT Comment/Review: no why did kags stop youko? they din't keep going.... oh no wuts going on!!! ahhh next chappy soon wanna noe wuts going on!!!! and the engagement party is next too huh? well ill be looking forward to that!!
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Title: love it! Reviewed By: Kitsuneangel88 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 14:21 EDT Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: another chapter! loving it! got a little hot under the collar there. you have got to update again asap! i am dying, and i mean DYING, to read what happens next. and how does kurama react to THAT little memory? and why did kagome have to snap out of it?! please update again soon!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 12:33 EDT Comment/Review: So nice to see a new chappy! Glad you've got some time to do some writing -- we all go through those periods where we just have too much on our plate to get to sit down and indulge our favorite hobby. Hopefully, after this sweet little chapter, you're back in the swing! Wow, 300 revs! And so deserved, too! This was definitely a very nice bit of Yoko-ness. It started out kinda sweet, and quickly moved to H-O-T, coutesy of Kagome, for once -- how very interesting. Of course, the more experience she gains with each beau,... Heh heh! Hmmm. She and Yoko had quite an audience at the village. Is she afraid one of them will say something to Inuyasha? And, what in the world are Inuyasha and Kikyou talking about, I wonder, if she ISN'T telling on Kagome. (Which is really kind of funny, if you think about it -- seems undignified for a priestess to tattle. LOL!!) You know, it just hit me, (seriously, --- this isn't a bid for Kurama, it just struck me this way all of a sudden), there's too much pressure and fear involved with her being with either of the Feudal Era hotties. I can see that playing into her decision-making. Too much anxiety can just make you sick. Then again, there's the added excitement that the fear of discovery brings to all rendezvous. Hmmmm. I am looking forward to seeing what Inuyasha has to say to her and how he acts around her now. And, of course, I'm still looking forward to Kurama showing up with a babe at the engagement party thing. Heh heh! Another good one!
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Reviewed By: HentaiVixen [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 11:55 EDT Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review: loved it but did it really have to stop? why?!!! it was getting good!! and how soon is soon? ja ne!!
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Reviewed By: Devilangel620 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2007 11:40 EDT Comment/Review: O.o That was burning hot! heh heh Kagome's thought about punching Youko only foreshadowed they wouldn't go all the way. :P Thankz for the chapter! woooo! go twincest
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Reviewed By: KaoriHigurashi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 12:39 EDT Comment/Review: I don't really like cliffies. I wish I knew why some writers like them. Also, what's your pen name on FF.net? I want to check out those downloads!
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Reviewed By: KaoriHigurashi [MediaMiner Member] On: June 05, 2007 08:57 EDT Comment/Review: I love this fic! Just wanted to know, what's your pen name on fanfiction.net? I'm Inu-koi's Life Mate there, though I like Kurama better now. I'm thinking of changing it. Anyways, keep up the good work!
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