| "Not the Only One" Reviews/Comments [ 570 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kagome4hiei(nsi) On: March 30, 2007 22:42 EDT
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Update soon!
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Title: Excellent Work!
Reviewed By: ookamikasumi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 28, 2007 16:42 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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This scene was beautifully done! I could see just about Everything going on! (Applause!) Once again your dialogue is to die for. (Poor Hojo!) You may want to consider putting a space after after each paragraph here on MM. For some reason this particular site does not seem to translate document formatting all that well. Also, if you're interested here's some Description tricks: ( http://forum.mediaminer.org/index.php?t=msg&th=33379&start=0& ) One more set of tricks for you, this time on Dialogue: ( http://forum.mediaminer.org/index.php?t=msg&goto=1100865� ) Keep up the good work!
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Title: not the only one
Reviewed By: sins On: March 28, 2007 14:58 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU my lady are a feind ...A FEIND I SAY ,,,T.T so not fair .. man i hate cliffys ... anywho UPDATE SOON RAWR ...please?!
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Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2007 01:49 EDT
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hey it's been a while since u updated but im glad. phew... for a while there hojo was getting a lil close to kagome. wow pretty sad how hojo is a lil squeamish at the sight of blood. hmm... and im pretty sure that it was kurama who interrupted them but correct me if i am wrong. well ill be looking forward to the next update and keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 23:26 EDT
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Hee hee hee! Hojo fainted!! Guess he gets squeamish at the sight of blood, ne? Excellent chapter, as always! Loved Kagome's thoughts about Inuyasha and about her own feelings towards him and Youko -- but what about Kurama? (That's such an interesting little dilemna -- Youko vs. Kurama as love interest.) Hiei and Kurama were so funny! Loved it that Hiei kept asking/mentioning the same things: "But they've been engaged for years!" And, "I can't bring my katana?" LOL!! I'm glad Kurama saw the humor in it. And, obviously Hiei did NOT pick up on Yusuke naughty little suggestion. Heh heh! I just can't wait for Kurama to introduce Kagome to Yusuke. THAT is going to be a priceless scene, isn't it? Now, I have to assume Kurama was responsible for Hojo's little mishap -- for shame, for shame. Kurama time? Please? I hope so!! I just can't wait to see what happens next!! This is just awesome! And thanks for plugging my story -- that was so sweet of you! If you enjoy it even HALF as much as I'm enjoying this one, I'm tickled pink!! Can't wait for your next update!!
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Reviewed By: Lady Niona [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 22:37 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story is so freakin awsome I really hope that you update soon!! I want to know who hurt Hojo, I have a good clue but I have been wrong before
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Reviewed By: todavialoca [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 22:01 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Haha hey this is a really, captivating fic, it has a bunch of things that make me want to read this..yeah, cool, hope ya update when ever possible..
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Reviewed By: DragonKitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 21:40 EDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WELL, since you said i'd love the hotel scene, i guess i will ^_^ now that makes me excited to read it *wags tail like a puppy* HURRY HURRY HURRY!!
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Reviewed By: Xx-eww_noo-xX [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 20:44 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
loved it! but it was kinda short >_> awww, who is that? hmmmm.... please update as soon as you can!
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Reviewed By: J0kEr [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 20:44 EDT
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LOVED THE CHAPTER!!!!! It was really dramatic... was that youko seperated from kurama or was that youko kurama @.@ I'm confused. Can't wait for the next chappy to clear me up.
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Reviewed By: VixenOfTheFlame(nl) On: March 26, 2007 20:22 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Ooh! Thats was so dramaful. And what should he (Yoko) tried at the beginning of the night?
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Title: update!
Reviewed By: Kitsuneangel88 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 18:14 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG! an update! who was that? was it yoko? but isnt kurama with hiei? or did the other yoko follow her somehow? or am i completely wrong? anyway, cant wait for the next update because i am DYING to read more. post again soon!
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Reviewed By: Kagome Lady of the Rain [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 17:19 EDT
Comment/Review:
Great work! I really loved it and update asap please! :P
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Reviewed By: lildevil474 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 16:09 EDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a great chapter!!! I can't wait for the next chapter to come out!
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Reviewed By: Sardave [MediaMiner Member] On: March 26, 2007 13:30 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, how mean! ;) Fantastic chapter, as usual. Excellent set up and great job with the overall feeling. You paint the scenes well for the mind's eye. Ready for more! :D
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