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Title: ch 11
Reviewed By: Elemental_dea (not logged in) On: December 10, 2006 12:11 EST
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oh no not a cliffy!!!!! *gasp* love the story, please update soon!
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Reviewed By: fire_lilly_fox On: December 09, 2006 22:14 EST
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I cannot believe that kags would not go on a rant about this! this is insane! He almost hit her kit, Shippo! no fair
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 19:03 EST
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*However, someone else raised a very clever point that I hadn't thought of, that I might just use…* You mean Yusuke's heritage? Well, you see, I'm pretty sure Raizen wasn't a youkai, but mazoku - entirely different specie of demon (or am I wrong? You have the manga, check it), thus, the things possible for mazoku aren't necessary true for youkai.
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 18:32 EST
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I have a request. Could you, please, somewhere along the line, insert the scene involving Yoko's introduction to modern haircare products? He has such an amazing silver mane and I can only imagine how it would look (and feel) after being washed with shampoo and conditioner. M-m-m-m.... ^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^ P.S. Kagome could help, BTW.^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 18:17 EST
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*She doesn't look like Kagome either* Yes!!! Make him tell this to Kagome!
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 18:15 EST
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*She was dead, for one thing, and Yoko couldn't understand how Inuyasha could tolerate her smell, never mind let himself be kissed by her.* True to be told, I don't understand it as well. Great love surpassing the death? Well... OK, I suppose... But as far as I'm concerned, necrophilia ia an entirely different thing!
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 18:10 EST
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*I'll need to sort things out with Yoko before I do anything else!* *I have a few things I want to say to him!* And what did she mean - "another Inuyasha-Kouga situation"? As far as I remember, Kouga's never attacked Inuyasha for kissing Kikyo! Is it only me, or is Kagome really jumping to conclusion? Let's hope she would have enough of presence of mind to hear Yoko's side of the story before accusing him in everything. P. S. But I can't disagree with one of your reviewers - Yoko "in the pure state" is definitely too much for Kagome to handle! P. P. S. Well, Kagome taking care of Yoko... Are you really sure you are not going to write some fluff here as well?^_~ Really, really sure?^_^_^_^_^_^
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 17:52 EST
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*there was a reason for Inu's absence, but don't worry- I realise the two are due a large fluff session* Eh? Fluff session? After him shoving his tongue down the dead woman's throat? E-w-w... But now I believe you ARE a BI-I-IG Inu fan!^_^_^_^_^_^
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 17:43 EST
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*And Kagome's room really isn't an issue as she makes her own way back…though Yoko's scent does mange to get on her in the next chappy!* Well, to avoid the farther complications, let's hope Inuyasha wouldn't visit till the scent disappeared completely... And alas, I have a terrible feeling she would be covered with Yoko's scent only out of medical reasons... Well, mostly. ^_~
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 17:35 EST
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*I didn't even think that Yoko might be in the know- seeing how hanyou were held in such a horrible regard in his time, I guessed the idea of hanyou living to reproduce would be dismissed* I see... Besides, considering everything aforesaid, it would be impossible to find somebody willing to reproduce with a hanyou, even if a hanyou, miraculously, lived long enough to hit a maturity. P. S. Example with Wolves and Dogs isn't quite fitting for this situation - after all, dogs are wolve's descendants.
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Reviewed By: Renata-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 17:25 EST
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I'm really glad I managed to review yesterday! I've had a hellish month and was beginning to suspect I wouldn't have a time to review till your next update. Let's say, I wasn't pleased with the idea. About favours - when Yoko and Suiichi are in the same body, I'm thinking of them as one as well. As about Kurama.^_^ But agree, it wouldn't be fair for Kurama, if Yoko in the past would use his favour as well! ^_^_^_^_^
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Reviewed By: Crystal_Flame [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 15:27 EST
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Love the story! Cant wait to see whatll happen between Kagome & Kurama. Also, about the hybrid theory. Wolf & Dogs, while not the same species, can reproduce. Their offspring are fertile hybrids. But thats the only fertile hybrid I can think of. Cant wait to read more! UPDATE SOON!
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Reviewed By: italiannproud [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 10:50 EST
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Disappoint?! With this fic? No way. It's amazing, I love how you've tied Yoko in the past. And this fight between the two was just bound to happen. I can't wait to see what will happen between Kagome and InuYasha when she goes back to Kaede's. And it will be amusing when she explains to Kurama the "relationship" between her and Hojo...or the lack there of. =] Since this fic, I started looking for Kag/Kur fics, but many of them turn Kagome into a Mary Sue, and it ticks me off. I'm glad you've kept her in character, and you've done really well at that. I'm running out of words to say, so just insert more praise and flattery here. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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Reviewed By: purp1ebabe [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 03:31 EST
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hmm so youko caught inuyasha and kikyo together... and kikyo tried to kill youko. now wuts gunna happen? update soon!
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2006 02:35 EST
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usually i'm not for crossovers but now...I'm hooked cant wait for the real confrontation btw the mikos hah. hope inu see the light for once!!!
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